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I am open to the idea what do you have in mind?

Michaelo

Edited by Ordeaux26 on Oct 18th 2021 at 8:36:19 AM

Are you talking to me? If that's the case, I was thinking on taking Sauron's information from the current article and expand how he tortures the elves, about Morgoth, mainly the same, but also would add a little mention about the fun that he felt when noticed how much his plan would be a slap to Eru, but the last could be only me.

I am still thinking on Morgoth's and likely will publish it tomorrow because is late in my time zone. About Sauron something like this

• Sauron is Morgoth's right-hand, who is left by Morgoth to take control of the torture of the elves, a work that he follows with great pleasure by repetidely whipping them until their clothes and skin where nothing but tatters, starving them, dislocating their bones and even threathening them with with rape just to mentally torment them further. Even after Morgoth's defeat, Sauron has them breed again to create the Uruk-Hai to add to his growing army.

Edited by ASghhrv6ub on Oct 18th 2021 at 11:24:11 AM

I was taking to you, that sounds like a good idea but I (along with I think the rest of the thread) would like to see what your idea for writeups are.

happy birthday library

to Michelo

Edited by Mediawatcher on Oct 18th 2021 at 9:43:45 AM

Yes to Michaelo

Also since I am looking into Once Upon a Time, am I the only one who finds Pan's write up lacking.

• Malcolm, aka Peter Pan and The Pied Piper of Hamelin, is a demon who has children kidnapped and forced to become his eternal servants in Neverland. Having his shadow kill any who try to escape by removing their souls, Pan is also a hedonistic psychopath who tortures and breaks others, solely to amuse himself. Dying along with Neverland's magic, Pan plans to absorb the heart of a child, his own great-grandson, who is the truest believer in magic, making himself all-powerful and immortal, while the innocent child dies in his place. Also the Abusive Parent of Rumpelstiltskin, Pan abandoned his son for power, selfishly neglecting the responsibilities of adulthood. Killing his own supporter to complete a magical curse, Pan cares nothing for anyone but himself and tries to murder Rumpelstiltskin's family just to torment his son.

I feel like it does really convey how bad he truly is and is lacking in his actual deeds.. Anyone mind if I try to rewrite it? Or if someone else wants to go ahead?

Edited by Bullman on Oct 18th 2021 at 12:45:17 PM

I'm considering doing E Ps on two villains from Batman The Brave and The Bold, Owlman and Silver Cyclone, who are evil counterparts of Batman and Silver Cyclone, who both plan interdimensional conquest and both are also willing to commit omnicide as well.

Edited by TheJokster22 on Oct 18th 2021 at 11:23:10 AM

Nazi, Osbourne, Missy, Dean, Honoria, Rob, Lopez and Michelo

West and John

Dean, Honor, Rob, Lopez, Michaelo

Happy late B-day Lib!

Rob, Lopez and Michelo.

Sure to Michelo.

Michelo.

Yes to Michelo

@Jokester

I can see Cyclone, but I don't really remember Owlman trying to blow up worlds?

Uh the syndicate only wanted to do that after Batman (disguised as Owlman) told them that Earth was too dangerous to conquer.

Before that under Owlman it was just a generic take over the world scheme.

Any opinions on my above question?

Edited by Bullman on Oct 19th 2021 at 7:21:39 AM

Expand away.

Okay how is this:

• Malcolm, aka Peter Pan and The Pied Piper of Hamelin, is a demon who has children kidnapped and forced to become his eternal servants in Neverland. Having his shadow kill any who try to escape by removing their souls, Pan is also a hedonistic psychopath who tortures and breaks others, solely to amuse himself. Also the Abusive Parent of Rumpelstiltskin, Pan abandoned his son for power, selfishly neglecting the responsibilities of adulthood. In the past Pan healed Hook's brother, just to kill him; and kidnapped Wendy Darling and keeps her prisoner, forcing her brothers to work for him. Dying along with Neverland's magic, Pan plans to absorb the heart of a child, his own great-grandson, who is the truest believer in magic, making himself all-powerful and immortal, while the innocent child dies in his place. To this end Pan is the brains behind Greg and Tamara's hatred of magic, all so they will bring Henry to him, killing them once they do so. When the heroes come to save Henry, he has a bit of fun tormenting them, all the while corrupting Henry and making him believe they don't want him. Killing his own supporter to complete a magical curse and tries to murder Rumpelstiltskin's family just to torment his son. Returning in the Underworld, Pan claims to want a fresh start with Rumpelstiltskin, before revealing he really just wants to go back to the land of the living, and to this end plans to steal Zelena's heart and later tries to have Rumple steal Robin Hood's.

I think I might have made it to long.

Edited by Bullman on Oct 19th 2021 at 7:57:58 AM

Yeah, that's over 250. FWIW, Jafar's under 210.

How is this:

• Malcolm, aka Peter Pan and The Pied Piper of Hamelin, is a demon who has children kidnapped and forced to become his eternal servants in Neverland, having his shadow kill any who try to escape by removing their souls, and is the Abusive Parent of Rumpelstiltskin. In the past Pan healed Hook's brother, just to kill him; and kidnapped Wendy Darling and keeps her prisoner. Dying along with Neverland's magic, Pan plans to absorb the heart of a child, his own great-grandson, who is the truest believer in magic, making himself all-powerful and immortal, while the innocent child dies in his place. To this end Pan is the brains behind Greg and Tamara's hatred of magic, all so they will bring Henry to him, killing them once they do so. When the heroes come to save Henry, he has a bit of fun tormenting them, all the while corrupting Henry. Killing his own supporter to complete a magical curse and tries to murder Rumpelstiltskin's family just to torment his son. Returning in the Underworld, Pan claims to want a fresh start with Rumpelstiltskin, before revealing he really just wants to go back to the land of the living, and to this end plans to steal Zelena's heart and later tries to have Rumple steal Robin Hood's.

216 words and barely bigger than Jafar who he appears more than.

Edited by Bullman on Oct 19th 2021 at 8:07:15 AM

Hey all. Sorry I haven’t voted on those Gundam candidates, but to catch up, sure to the Get Out villains. Four in one film, damn, that’s impressive.

I got a folklore candidate later, one from the Faroe islands, but before that, I have issues with Conomor the Accursed being listed. Why?

Because his entry labels him as from the British Isle, specifically Cornwall. He’s actually from Breton folklore, which is related to Celtic mythology on account of language but is not part of the British Isles, it’s in France. Kind of a dumb mistake, and a little insulting.

Edited by Vyn on Oct 19th 2021 at 6:19:39 AM

That's fine.

Oh right yeah. Commor is believed to be an inspiration for Bluebeard (which is French fairy tale).

Alright, so remember when I covered Morgoth from the Heroes series - tries to use the Infinity Stones to wipe out the Multiverse? Well, if you can believe it, he's not the only keeper - right now, having finished all the stories that are currently out, I begin the first of four more discussions with a similarly omnicidal being, the Dread Lord himself.

Who is Dormammu? What does he do?

Dormammu is the Great Demon of the Dark Dimension who seeks to bring the entire Multiverse into his "home". In the past, Dormammu has not only attacked multiple Earths (the Dormammus seen in Doctor Strange (2016) and Doctor Strange: The Sorcerer Supreme are the same being here) only to be driven back, but he also attacked Arda, ambushing Radagast with the offer to help Dormammu destroy Arda or parish in it. When Radagast refuses, Dormammu decides to just destroy Arda, only being pushed back when the Ancient One intervenes and causes a fight that levels the East and sees Radagast driven mad.

In several stories, we find out that following his departure from Kamar-Taj at the end of the film, Karl Mordo became his most loyal disciple, recruiting people in the name of bringing him out and plunging the entire Multiverse into his dimension. Among his recruits are the Batman Who Laughs, who Dormammu recruits after he destroys his homeward and then sends to destroy other Earths so he can absorb them easier, and Carnage the symbiote, who Dormammu sends through the Multiverse in order to kill everyone he comes across and take their energy so that Dormammu can eventually consume it and become physical.

Eventually, Mordo manages to begin a ritual that the heroes think is to release him, which is what Dormammu was intending. In truth, the ritual brought forth Dark Dimension beings that were previously scattered across the Multiverse, but not Dormammu himself - however, the heroes use Mordo's machine to reverse the process and send the demons back to the Dark Dimension. This gives Dormammu enough power for him to escape the Dimension himself, making his way to Earth and quickly curb stomping the heroes himself.

Eventually, Smallville Superman and Thor pull a magical ritual to combine their Astral forms (becoming SuperThor in the process) in order to take Dormammu on physically. In the fight, among other things, Dormammu forms enough energy to destroy the Earth should it touch the ground and throws it at the duo, essentially playing a deadly game of catch with the whole world in the balance - and when he senses he may be losing, he settles for not sucking everything in by destroying the Multiverse, beginning the process to destroy everything there ever was.

While the duo are able to stop them, the ritual wears off before they can actually defeat him, and Dormammu then unleashes his forces on New York to kill the heroes once and for all. Luckily, some accidental magic mishaps from the four Hobbits, Peter Parker, and MCU Doctor Strange ends up sending them back in time to before Dormammu was released at all, and they manage to prevent him from getting out.

Since then, he's appeared in small amounts - he's one of the evil entities Doctor Doom sold his soul to and Strange later tricks him into attacking Galactus - but nothing particularly major. The author has stated that he'll come back, but there's no word on when.

Any mitigating factors? Freudian Excuse?

Dormammu has infinitely more personality here than he usually does. This version is not only intelligent enough to genuinely trick the heroes into letting him out, but his sadism is cranked up to downright playful levels, holding the fate of the Earth in a deadly game of catch and even calling humanity "trash" - normally I'd just chalk that up to the fact that it's a fanfic written by a Joe Schmoe not attached to the character, but Thor actually calls it out and suggests that he's learning more from humanity than he'd like. He's also much more spiteful than usual, recognizing both Doctor Stranges and Radagast years later and seeking to punish them for defying him. If the versions from the live-action and animated films have enough personality, this one has more than enough.

Is he heinous enough?

Again, the fic's heinous standard is absolutely fucking enormous. If you're not a multiversal threat, you're not worth any kind of discussion here. Dormammu absolutely is. Not only does he have two separate attacks of Earth under his belt along side trying to attack Arda (and decimating the East), he also has the Batman who Laughs destroy entire worlds so he can take them to the Dark Dimension easier (in his appearance, the BWL tries to destroy a total of seven Earths and has already destroyed much more than that) and Carnage kills millions of people in the name of bringing him out. When he comes out, he almost destroys the world himself, and when he can't suck the Multiverse into the Dark Dimension, he settles for destroying all of it instead. He and Morgoth easily keep side by side.

Final verdict?

And another yep - what about you?

Yes to Dormammu.

Silver Cyclone might be worth a shot, but as the guy who did Owlman for MB, I gotta say this— in my opinion, he's not bad enough. In terms of heinousness he's a standard (if effective) cartoon villain who doesn't do anything beyond the pale enough to make CM. Just my thoughts though.

Dormmamu.

This is my idea about Morgoth (without the mention about the fun that he felt when noticed how much his plan would be a slap to Eru, because I didn't find any form to put it that flow ell with the rest of the sentence and I wanted to know if the rest of the thread think that worth add it), it's almost the same, the original entry was exact and really there are no many other things to say about him. .

• Morgoth Bauglir, formerly known as Melkor, is a Vala who wanted to take over all of Middle-earth; to this end, he captures two elves, Midriel and Fingol, to corrupt them and create an army of servants. Morgoth first tortures both elves when they speak out and leaves Sauron to continue torturing them. Out of amusement, Morgoth eventually releases them both to an Elven camp, where his forces track them down, slaughter everyone in the camp, and recapture the two elves. Afterwards, both have them breed to create an army of Orcs.

Edited by ASghhrv6ub on Oct 19th 2021 at 9:32:50 AM