moxeden
actually okay-ish
from a place of comfort
Since: Sep, 2023
Relationship Status: love is a deadly lazer
#30: Aug 10th 2024 at 11:26:32 PM
17 only shows a person in two different moods. Even if the reader assumes it's the same person, the difference in appearance means clearly a large time separation. The trope is not "character is haughty at one moment, sad in another", it's "character is haughty then something bad happens to them to make them less haughty". The image should show that something bad happening.
Fjón þvæ ég af mér fjanda minna rán og reiði ríkra manna.
#32: Aug 11th 2024 at 4:44:59 AM
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I mean 17 clearly shows her with a hug bruise. I feel like that is enough to show her having something bad happen to her.
Edited by Bullman on Aug 11th 2024 at 6:46:17 AM
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#43: Aug 11th 2024 at 2:15:19 PM
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I think it's potentially better than the one on the main Break the Haughty page too.
Edited by taotruths on Aug 11th 2024 at 2:15:51 AM
Tylerbear12
What you see is what you get, just a guy.
from The Green Hills.
Since: Apr, 2015
Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
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actually okay-ish
from a place of comfort
Since: Sep, 2023
Relationship Status: love is a deadly lazer
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Quality could be better (and I’d like some evenly-sized panels), but 17 works otherwise.