CanuckMcDuck1
PEPSIMAN
from Japan
Since: Sep, 2023
Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
#6: Jul 3rd 2024 at 5:30:56 PM
I'm kinda eh on all in OP. The mouse looks sloppily added in 1.1, 1.3 is just kinda... blah... I think 1.2 is pretty and I actually like the intentional over saturation but I am not sure "pretty" is what the book should evoke. I rather like this one:
In this case I think the minimalism works for the prison setting.
MangosBossa-Nova
A web-surfing Porygon
from Glitch City
(Troper Youngling)
Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
taotruths
Live Jet Reaction
(Experienced, Not Yet Jaded)
Relationship Status: I sleep in a big bed with my wife.
CrimsonShark
Punk Rocker
from The Internet of Loneliness and Beyond
Since: Nov, 2018
Relationship Status: One Is The Loneliest Number
Total posts: 15


Some criteria-fied suggestions for The Green Mile:
1.1
1.2
1.3
Thoughts?
Edited by Willbyr on Jul 3rd 2024 at 6:40:17 AM