#5: Jan 7th 2024 at 11:08:12 AM
4.1 is fine, it's understandable from that single panel alone.
Fjón þvæ ég af mér fjanda minna rán og reiði ríkra manna.
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#14: Jan 13th 2024 at 9:35:55 AM
If 4.1 is what we go with:
"Being the sixth daughter of one of the most prestigious military families in all of mid 18th Century France well... your Dad may have creative ideas about to get his expected great soldier heir just like him"
Or is that too "splainy"?
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1.1 original suggested by Gracie Lizzy, but was rejected in a crowner
1.2 countersuggestion by me
OBJECTION!