TBF my concern was less that Loona's an older teen in context, and more that because she's meant to be a teen they made her dress the part. It's subtle and if you don't watch the show it's probably not as obvious as it is to someone who gets the intent, though.
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Bit clunky though someone might be able to do better.
I have one problem with the image. It's to be read right to left, so I suggest to flip it.
Fjón þvæ ég af mér fjanda minna rán og reiði ríkra manna.
It's standard practice to flip the image on this site. It'll be an easy flip too, you just have to swap the first two speech bubbles.
Edited by MurlocAggroB on Nov 15th 2023 at 1:15:06 PM
regulation pigeonRight, we don't assume readers are familiar enough with Manga to know how to read these images, and putting notes assumes people will check.
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KoshaVinka suggested this in the image suggestions thread:
People expressed concern about Loona not fitting as she was technically just about to turn 18 so just under adult age. Personally I think its close enough but just in case I do have another suggestion:
Edited by GracieLizzy on Nov 14th 2023 at 9:55:04 AM