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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#13477: May 6th 2023 at 10:51:06 AM

I'm curious who it is, Nox?

CapitanoNox Lord of Space from Italy Since: Oct, 2018 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
Lord of Space
#13478: May 6th 2023 at 10:54:00 AM

Remember when some time ago I proposed a character from the RPC Authority called Snee?

Well, said candidate was rejected at the times. Now an article involving her was published and I think it gives her enough to count, but I wrote said article, so, yeah, can't really do her re-proposal.

Edited by CapitanoNox on May 6th 2023 at 8:05:44 PM

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#13479: May 6th 2023 at 11:10:51 AM

Um... we've actually cut a character for coming from a short story that was written almost exclusively to get a CM up. We also try to avoid soliciting a work we've done for the sole purpose of putting a candidate up.

CapitanoNox Lord of Space from Italy Since: Oct, 2018 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
Lord of Space
#13480: May 6th 2023 at 11:12:47 AM

Are you trying to say that I would have put time and effort into something solely to get a character approved?

Tyk5919 Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin
#13481: May 6th 2023 at 11:13:46 AM

No one is implying anything. Nox, send me a link to the article I'll look at it and give my thoughts later.

I write stories and shiz. You can read them here.
TommyFresh Since: Aug, 2013
#13482: May 6th 2023 at 11:15:49 AM

[tup] to the sisters and a tentative [tdown] to Tchar. The part about letting Kirk and his allies have a fighting chance at the end is what gives me pause. He doesn't seem to have a consistent code of honor but that does strike as a somewhat honorable moment.

Edited by TommyFresh on May 6th 2023 at 11:16:56 AM

Flowman Since: Dec, 2021
#13483: May 6th 2023 at 11:19:21 AM

[up][up] Agree with Tyk's solution. Also [tup] Sisters

Edited by Flowman on May 6th 2023 at 1:19:37 PM

Mr-ex777 Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#13484: May 6th 2023 at 11:20:27 AM

@43110: Wasn't that like, an actual Helltaker fanfic with multiple arcs and several characters written exclusively for the sole reason of being CM candidates and not a short story, though?

BTW, [tdown] Tchar

Edited by Mr-ex777 on May 7th 2023 at 2:22:01 AM

Tyk5919 Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Your friendly neighborhood stank goblin
#13485: May 6th 2023 at 11:27:59 AM

[up] That was all cut because there was explicit underage (and/or rape?) content in it.

I write stories and shiz. You can read them here.
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#13486: May 6th 2023 at 11:28:17 AM

I think the rule is you can't try and add a ymmv item like this directly by sending it to someone so they'll ep it as it runs afoul of the ban on ymmv entries coming from the author (meat puppeting)

But if you make something and send it someone and say it has something and they do it independant of you. Sure.

Edited by miraculous on May 6th 2023 at 11:31:43 AM

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#13487: May 6th 2023 at 11:35:02 AM

We're not supposed to use the thread to push people to read something we've created so a CM can be created. Tyk's offered a solution here, so I don't think we need to dwell on it anymore.

Mr-ex777 Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#13488: May 6th 2023 at 11:39:28 AM

@tyk Actually iirc, it's both that and being written exclusively for the sole reason of putting CMs up. And yes it has the rape too.


[tup] Sisters

Edited by Mr-ex777 on May 7th 2023 at 2:41:29 AM

G-Editor Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#13489: May 6th 2023 at 11:43:26 AM

[tup] To the Ruiner candidates and the Lady

[tdown] To Tchar

Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#13490: May 6th 2023 at 11:59:14 AM

Yes to the Ruiner baddies

  • The Pope's Exorcist: Asmodeus, the "King of Hell", is a mighty demon preying on humanity to serve his sadistic goals. Ages ago having possessed Friar de Ojeda and used him to corrupt the church into kick-starting the Spanish Inquisition, Asmodeus basked in the countless atrocities committed in the name of "God" and oversaw hundreds of torturous deaths himself. Released in the present, Asmodeus possesses young Henry and immediately begins terrorizing the boy and his family, mutilating Henry's body while accosting his mother and sister. Luring Father Amorth to him, Asmodeus intends to kill the entire family and possess Amorth so he can infiltrate the Vatican and bring about another bloody Inquisition, darkening the hearts of mankind while enabling the rise of further demons and chaos.

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#13491: May 6th 2023 at 12:01:58 PM

Sure to the Sisters.

Just got back from Guardians 3. Fun movie.

[down] Maybe the worst of the 3 Guardians, but that says more about the others. This one is still quite fun.

Edited by ACW on May 6th 2023 at 3:09:39 PM

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
CapitanoNox Lord of Space from Italy Since: Oct, 2018 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
Lord of Space
#13492: May 6th 2023 at 12:04:20 PM
Thumped: This post was thumped by the Stick of Off-Topic Thumping. Stay on topic, please.
emperors Messenger from another dimension. Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: It's complicated
Messenger from another dimension.
#13493: May 6th 2023 at 12:24:26 PM

Just got back from seeing Guardians 3 myself. Loved it personally (best MCU movie since Endgame IMO) and all I will say is that really looking forward to discussion!

Welcome to the world of greatest media!
TheGrayFox ...Phenomenal from A Lovecraftian fishing village Since: Sep, 2011
...Phenomenal
#13494: May 6th 2023 at 12:30:19 PM

[tup] for Lightning Lady and both Ruiner proposals.

There remains a foothold out of this mire — now climb.
therealjackieboy Ultimate Moral Compass from Austin, TX Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
Ultimate Moral Compass
#13495: May 6th 2023 at 12:32:02 PM

[tup]LL and Ruiner trio

"No running in the halls!"
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#13496: May 6th 2023 at 12:40:20 PM

[tup] Lightning Lady

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#13497: May 6th 2023 at 12:52:33 PM

[tup]lighting lady.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
VeryVileVillian (Apprentice)
#13498: May 6th 2023 at 12:58:31 PM

The last candidate from RUINER

Who is The Boss?

The leader of HEAVEN Corporation, who is the one, who basically rules over Rengkok and the one, who turned it into a corporate owned hellhole, where people are murdered and opressed and his goons hunt down anyone, who resists his rule.

Being the one, who come up with the idea of Virtuality and setting up Imagination Farms, where thousands of people, are used as hosts for his program of "Real Sensations in Virtual Worlds" and are regularly tortured and reduced to barely sapient husks, who are left to be the "puppets" for the Sick Sisters, or killed. Finding out about Sick Sisters' and TrafficKing's plan to kill him, The Boss got contacted by HER, who offered him to help him get revenge by hacking the protagonist and using him against his enemies (by convincing the protagonist that he's saving his brother), with Boss being able to see everything through the protagonist's face.

As the protagonist killed hundreds of Boss' men (who may or may not be all on the scheme to kill him) and killed Sick Sisters and TrafficKing, something which Boss loved to watch, Boss revealed himself and openly told that the protagonist is his clone, that he uses as "bucket of spare parts" aka whenever Boss loses a body part or an organ, he simply takes it from the protagonist to replace his own lost parts. It is also revealed that there were no brother to save for the protagonist at all.

As he is prepred to "keep" the protagonist close to himself, to prevent any such betrayals to happen, HER frees the protagonist and has him kill all Boss' men and Boss himself, who simply asks the protagonist: "That's it then. So, what's you're gonna do: nod or shrug?" (the protagonist through most of the game replied to other characters simply with nod and shrug), before the protagonist beats him to death.

Mitigating Qualities?

None.

Heinousness?

He is the one, who created Virtuality program in the first place and put the Sick Sisters to oversee it and TrafficKing to deliver him people. His opression and reducing the entire city to corrupt hole and having his men hunt down anyone, who opposes him also adds heinous point.

Conclusion?

What do you think?

CapitanoNox Lord of Space from Italy Since: Oct, 2018 Relationship Status: Getting away with murder
Lord of Space
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl

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