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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#1176: Jan 20th 2023 at 3:52:09 PM

Hell going off of that, Diabolique who was unanimous in her upvotes had Tyrant forcing her to commit crimes in her name. Granted, she very much enjoyed slaughtering the Ravenwing Cabal, and she only "disliked" being forced to undermine the Midnight Squad and even that she got over as shown by how she rubbed it's destruction in Cerulean's face in First Ward.

Edited by ForgoLight on Jan 20th 2023 at 3:52:50 AM

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#1177: Jan 20th 2023 at 3:52:54 PM

The issue is Fontaine is competing with worse deliberate people.

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#1178: Jan 20th 2023 at 3:54:25 PM

Ah I see. In that case, [tdown] since Diabolique had plenty of deliberate crimes of her own free will and became the worst of the 4 City C Ms.

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
MasterJoseph Frolaytia X Qwenthur of Heavy Object from Not telling. Since: Mar, 2018
Frolaytia X Qwenthur of Heavy Object
#1179: Jan 20th 2023 at 3:58:47 PM

[tdown]Dia

Abstaining on Fontaine.

IPP Wick Check created.
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#1180: Jan 20th 2023 at 3:59:55 PM

Switching no to fontaine.

Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#1181: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:01:12 PM

Sadly, as vile as pedophillia is, it takes more for one to count as a CM than just that. If we could approve an candidate just for being a pedophile then I probably would EP that horrible father from My Little Goat LONG ago.

Beast from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2012 Relationship Status: Browsing the selection
#1182: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:03:16 PM

And Fontaine has multiple deliberate crimes on top of his unintentional ones; there's being one of the mob's biggest drug distributors (again, with a drug shown to be especially lethal), as well as exploiting Elsa's addiction; set up Elsa's friend to be killed; murdering his protégé. The only unintentional examples were the families deaths, which again, it's shown he doesn't care about it.

As far as being resourceful as a corrupt film director or a bartender, L.A. Noire is in the detective genre that features a variety of types of criminals. The way I see it, Fontaine just a different type of villain than Mason or Marlon; with Fontiane being a renound physiatrist, who becomes tied crime syndicates. Hell, Marlon's entry lists him not caring about causing collateral damage during his police chase, despite him not necessarily intending on killing anyone.

Edited by Beast on Jan 20th 2023 at 4:04:46 AM

"It's like...a cliff, and if I do it, I'm just gonna...fall." "I think we're already falling."
Snoketrope Barb / Temporary Kylo from California Since: Oct, 2020 Relationship Status: Waiting for Prince Charming
Barb / Temporary Kylo
#1183: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:04:05 PM

They don't really sound like they are too much. It sounds like Fontaine has the higher bodycount if slightly, and has some direct kills like overdosing Sheldon. Even aside from remorselessly causing the deaths of children.

Also just to clarify. He wants to spread the lethal drug around to sell it right? If so that would also be really bad.

[nja] answered.

Edited by Snoketrope on Jan 20th 2023 at 4:08:07 AM

The First man
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#1184: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:10:04 PM

[tup] to Carter Pillar, Fantoma Mark III, Dr. Ikezaki Gensuke, Ronald Atwood, Anne, Gary Miller, Grau, Grune, Ares, Heartbreaker, Futura, Guard in Charge, Dr. Harlan Fontaine, Ishmael and Ratar-o.

CookieMonster69 Since: Feb, 2019
#1185: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:13:12 PM

I've been wanting to post this for a while and looks like I finally can!

What is the work?

Transformers: Go! is a Japan-exclusive Transformers series. It is set in the Aligned Universe and serves as the third season of Transformers: Prime in that region.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

Dragotron is the leader of the Predacons who seeks to Take Over the World. After the Predacons split apart from the Decepitcons, Dragotron and his troops destroyed countless worlds before arriving to Earth. Posing a threat to both factions, the Autobots and Decepticons teamed up to seal them away in Mount Fuji. Upon being freed and restored to full power by his followers, Dragotron absorbed two children so he can use the power of their Legendiscs to cyberform the entire planet and wipe out all organic life in the process. When that failed, Dragotron then absorbed his fellow Predacons so he can become invincible and defeat the Autobots once and for all.

While him wiping out entire planets was only mentioned in a supplementary storybook, it should not count as Offscreen Villainy as its not only the main reason why he was sealed away but he also tries to do the same thing to Earth within the main part of the show.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

None.

Are they bad enough?

Yeah, his omnicidal tendencies makes him easily one of the worst villains in the series. His body count is comparable to Unicron, in addition to attempting to destroy the Earth. He's also a lot less powerful and has more limited screentime so that should help him stand out a bit.

Final verdict?

Yes

Edited by CookieMonster69 on Jan 20th 2023 at 4:17:47 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#1186: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:17:49 PM

That's a yes. What happens to him?

Anyone play Call of Duty: Modern Warfare II? Sulaman seems nasty.

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
CookieMonster69 Since: Feb, 2019
#1187: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:18:34 PM

He gets defeated by the Autobots and sealed away again.

[down] Thanks!

Edited by CookieMonster69 on Jan 20th 2023 at 4:21:41 AM

Lightysnake Since: May, 2010
#1188: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:21:11 PM

Dragotron seems like an easy and basic keep! Nicely done!

Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#1189: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:21:51 PM

[tup] Dragotron

[up][up][up] I am wondering on that game as well

Edited by Ordeaux26 on Jan 20th 2023 at 4:22:13 AM

CM Sandboxes, MB Sandboxes
STARCRUSHER99 The Moron from one of my unhealthy obsessions (Captain) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Moron
#1190: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:24:03 PM

CookieMonster coming in clutch with another great Transformers one, yes to Dragotron!

I'm gonna abstain on Fontaine - there's good arguments on both sides and I need to think.

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#1193: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:29:14 PM

[tup] To Dragotron!

Actually speaking of Planet Consuming Villains who were sealed away... I have a question about Fecto Forgo/Fecto Elfilis. I know they got rejected and I was wondering if it was because of the Offstage Villainy? Would it ever be possible to make an argument where they could keep?

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#1195: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:32:32 PM

[tup] Dragotron

Abstain on Fontaine

[up][up] I believe it was an agency issue?

Edited by WetFlannels on Jan 20th 2023 at 12:32:41 PM

Oh, Mr. Kennedy, you entertain me. To show my appreciation, I will help you awaken from your world of clichés.
DoodSlayer136 Woagh from Pizza Tower (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Woagh
#1196: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:35:30 PM

[tup] to Dragotron.

IIRC we rejected Fecto because he's waaaaay too ambiguous for the trope origins wise, we don't know how he operates, how his agency works, his personality's incredibly vague (like a single line and a Villainous Breakdown, that's it)...

Edited by DoodSlayer136 on Jan 20th 2023 at 4:35:50 AM

NOISE IS CALLING, PICK UP PHONE
PurpleEyedGuma Since: Apr, 2020
#1197: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:36:13 PM

Don’t they also just barely redeem themself at the very end by creating a portal between Popstar and the new world?

[down][down][down] Ah.

Edited by PurpleEyedGuma on Jan 20th 2023 at 10:00:53 AM

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#1199: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:38:05 PM

Yes to Dragotron!

I guess we can snip Novel!Ares? He has the extra crime of being introduced slaughtering a few hundred people but the main reason he went up was because of the heinous standard being different. That's another "adaptation version of a villain Ravok got up because the original was deemed to not count winding up getting cut because the original gets put up anyway" for the pile [lol]

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
Michealthehero21 Since: Jan, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
#1200: Jan 20th 2023 at 4:39:06 PM

[up][up][up] Fecto did that to make the forbidden land collide with Planet Popstar and destroy them both.

Edited by Michealthehero21 on Jan 20th 2023 at 4:39:19 AM


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