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Welcome to the Complete Monster proposal thread! This is the thread where new Complete Monster examples are vetted, approved, and written up. If you're looking for the general cleanup thread (for cuts, rewrites, expansions, and the like), please go here

Important: Before suggesting any new examples, please read the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List; if you have any questions, the odds are high they are answered there. Additionally, please check here for the earliest date a work can be discussed (usually two weeks from the U.S. release date) and whether the work has already been reserved by another user.

Here is how the process works:

    Process 

  1. If you have a candidate to propose, you can simply come right in and propose them! If the character's run is brief, such as a single issue of a comic book, then a simple summary of their actions and any potential redeeming qualities will be enough; for longer-running candidates, an effortpost (EP) might be helpful for organizing the proposal. An EP is not outright required, but please be mindful that if a post becomes too clunky and unorganized, it can be very hard for other people to follow.

  2. After the proposal, there will be a 72-hour discussion and voting period, where people may ask questions and vote on the candidate. The number of upvotes must outnumber the downvotes by at least five for the character to be considered "approved".

  3. Three days after the proposal has been made, if the character has been approved, you may post the writeup (the text to be posted on the trope page itself) on the thread and send it to the drafts page. Your candidate will soon be added to the CM subpage. If the work has a page, you should add your candidate to the relevant YMMV page. Voila! It's that simple!

Outside of this process, we do have a few ground rules:

    Ground Rules 

  1. To keep the thread moving at a reasonable pace, there are some restrictions on when a proposal can be made. There should only be a maximum of four EPs posted both per page and per hour to ensure that nothing gets lost in the shuffle; additionally, each individual troper should only be proposing or writing up characters from a maximum of three works at a time (from initial proposals to end of their voting period). If your proposal would fall outside of either of these guidelines, we'd like to ask you to please wait until they would fit within; feel free to type them up on an outside document, and then when the time comes, you can just copy, paste, and post!

  2. No plagiarism of any kind. This is a very serious matter site-wide, as the website could get in actual legal trouble over this; as a result, this can very quickly lead to mod intervention. This can take many different forms:
    1. Direct plagiarism, i.e. wholesale copying. This is not only the easiest to find, but is also the most likely to warrant quick moderator intervention. To be clear, quoting in some places is perfectly acceptable, but it has to be very clear you're quoting from something else and it cannot be anything longer than a sentence or two - if you're quoting an entire work summary from Wikipedia, no one is going to believe you've actually consumed the work, so even if you cite your source, your candidate will be downvoted anyway.
    2. Self-plagiarism. Even if you can prove that you wrote the same text in both places, the site itself can't contain any of the duplicated text. If you already wrote something once before, it's not too hard to write it a second time.
    3. Using another site's work as a template for a proposal. Just because you don't copy and paste something directly doesn't mean it's any harder to detect if you're basing parts or all of your proposal on text someone else wrote. To be clear, this doesn't violate site rules and won't lead to mod intervention, but just like if you directly plagiarize, no one will believe you've consumed the work if you're clearly basing your proposal on something else. This thread largely operates on the honor system, and tweaking someone else's work to pass it off as your own is one of the fastest ways to lose trust.

  3. Votes must be for specific candidates, meaning no blanket voting (i.e. "yes to everyone I missed").

  4. If you are the first person to downvote a candidate, please provide an explanation of why when you do so. We're here for discussions above all, and a hit-and-run downvote doesn't facilitate anything.

  5. If a work is already reserved by another user, please don't comment on the work or any potential characters worth discussion before the discussion date. We know how exciting it is when a work has a keeper that you're waiting to talk about, but it's not fair to the person who reserved the work who is just as excited to lead the discussion to see the discussion getting spoiled before they get to do it. On the other hand, if the reservation only has one name attached, shoot them a PM - they may be down for a collaboration, which will get you in on the fun as well!

  6. Please keep the thread on-topic. While discussing the trope is fun and we encourage people to enjoy it, questions like "who's your favorite CM" are off-topic and can lead to thumps. That's the kind of question to take to people's PMs if they're willing. Similarly, while we encourage friendliness and familiarity with other users, posts should always have some kind of thread-relevant purpose; for instance, if you want to wish someone a happy birthday, feel free to, but if it's the only thing in the post, it's off-topic and needs something else alongside it. Again, though, while we strive for a friendly atmosphere, this is not Facebook; life updates are fun, but unless they have some kind of impact on your thread participation, please do not bring it here - we have Yack Fest for that.

  7. Please refrain from asking anything along the lines of "How Did We Miss This One?" In almost every case, the answer is simply "No one thought about it before". This Is a Wiki where everyone has different interests, and the fact that people missed a particular candidate, even one that seems like a textbook example of a trope or a character who is particularly iconic in pop culture, means absolutely nothing. The question is disruptive, has a simple and consistent answer, and provides nothing to any discussion.

  8. If you are suspended from parts of the website, it is still possible to participate!
    1. For users who are suspended from editing the wiki, you still have full access to this thread. You can propose candidates and write them up with no issues whatsoever; while you will have to ask someone else to post the entry to the relevant pages once it is done, all write-ups are considered thread-approved - as in, done by consensus - and thus doing so does not violate any rules regarding meatpuppeting.
    2. If you are suspended from the forums, your participation is limited but not impossible. It is still possible for a forum-suspended user to assist in creating the write-up for a character who has already been approved; as previously mentioned, write-ups are inherently considered a consensus-based edit and thus not tied to any one particular user. However, you can not assist in the proposal of a character; as a proposal is based around the forum rather than the wiki, doing so with a forum suspension qualifies as meatpuppeting.

  9. Please keep all discussions "in-house".
    1. What other wikis use for CM equivalents is irrelevant here.
    2. Please be wary of using other wikis, Fandom or otherwise, as sources of information. They are just as fallible as a site like Wikipedia in regards to accuracy because they can be edited by any user, just as this site can.
    3. Do not attempt to force a communication with an author in an attempt to gather evidence or settle a debate; besides the fact that this is a YMMV trope and thus author intent has variable weight depending on the circumstance, doing so may cross the line into drama exportation, which is prohibited site-wide.

If you would like to use an EP for your candidate, here's the general format. This format does not have to be followed exactly, but these are the main topics that need to be covered:

    Effortpost Template 

What is the work?

This is a brief summary of the work you're going to discuss. We don't need a full plot summary here, just however much we need to understand going into the discussion — it can even be as simple as quoting the summary on the work's page.

Who is the candidate and what have they done?

This is essentially the character's biography — who they are, their story, the crimes they commit, and, preferably (though not required), what happens to the candidate at the end. It does not have to include every single thing they ever do — for some villains, we'd be here all day if that was the case — but it should include the highlights of their journey.

Any redeeming qualities? Freudian Excuse?

This is where any potential redeeming characteristics or tragic backstory should be discussed. Do they have a tragic past? Do they show that Even Evil Has Standards or Even Evil Has Loved Ones? Maybe a Pet the Dog moment or two? This is where these should be discussed in full. Not every potential redeeming moment is a clear-cut disqualifier, but we should hear of any potential issues to ensure the character is discussed in full.

Are they bad enough?

A Complete Monster has to be particularly vile by the standard of the work they appear in. Therefore, you should look at what the character does compared to similar characters in the same work. This takes into account things like:

  • Their resource level (a human Serial Killer can't stand up to an alien Omnicidal Maniac, but they can be bad by the standard of other human serial killers)
  • The amount of time they have to work with (such as a one-shot character versus long-running antagonists)
  • The quantity vs. quality of their crimes compared to others (someone with a lower victim count but far more visceral and personal crimes could be considered as equally bad overall as someone with a higher body count but less horror involved)

Essentially, this section is an analysis of the kinds of villainy shown in the work and an explanation of why this particular character's villainy stands out within it.

Final verdict?

This is where you post your final conclusion on the character in question. You can continue elaborating on your reasons or even just say a simple "yes" or "no"; at this point, we've heard everything we need to hear.

IMPORTANT NOTICE: This thread tackles very serious and dark matters on a daily basis. We will be discussing things like murder, rape, torture, human trafficking, crimes against children, and in particularly dark cases, several of these issues at the same time. We keep a lighthearted air, but all candidates carry the general assumption that these are awful individuals committing disgusting crimes. We ask that if you participate, you do so with the requisite seriousness such dark topics require; exclamations of how gross something is, whether serious or sarcastic, are disrespectful to the topics at hand, and if you cannot handle such topics, please do not participate.

And that's everything you need to know. Welcome to the thread!


Edited by Twiddler on Jan 17th 2024 at 5:42:49 AM

Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#3651: Feb 6th 2023 at 12:52:16 PM

Should we wait for the page to be properly made though before making the IP thread? I have never seen someone make an IP thread for a Sandbox page.

CM Sandboxes, MB Sandboxes
PurpleEyedGuma Since: Apr, 2020
#3652: Feb 6th 2023 at 12:53:56 PM

Threads get made for TLP drafts before they’re launched all the time, and there’s a place where an image could get placed should it be approved (the sandbox).

TheWrongOne41 A nice swimmer from Somewhere, Mexico Since: May, 2022 Relationship Status: watch?v=dQw4w9WgXcQ
A nice swimmer
#3653: Feb 6th 2023 at 1:30:14 PM

Alright, so it's already the deadline of my Tsumugi Shirogane proposal. It had 9 [tup] and 0 [tdown]. So i assume this means she's approved. Here's a writeup:

  • Tsumugi Shirogane is revealed to be the the true mastermind of the Killing Game, who in actuality works for the corporation Team Danganronpa and acts as their mole in the fifty-third entry of Danganronpa. Acting as a Cosplay Otaku Girl in the killing game who was usually not the smartest, it gets revealed that she was the true culprit of the first trial, where she killed Rantaro Amami because Kaede Akamatsu's plan failed and wanted to ensure that the Killing Game continued, bending the rules of the game and letting Kaede get executed because of it. Later in the last trial, she tells the rest of the survivors about the true conditions of the world, in which the Killing Game is actually a game show called Danganronpa to entertain the uneventful and peaceful real world. She would reveal that her company brainwashed every survivor with False Memories and rewrited their personalities so that they would truly act scared and helpless. She's so obsessed with the Danganronpa franchise that when the audience watching the show were convinced by Shuichi Saihara to not want it anymore, she would let herself be killed alongside the studio so that she wouldn't exist in a world that doesn't want Danganronpa.

Edited by TheWrongOne41 on Feb 6th 2023 at 1:50:17 AM

Due to unfortunate events, i will continue to exist until further notice.
Echidna from Ontario, Canada Since: Aug, 2021 Relationship Status: Wishfully thinking
#3654: Feb 6th 2023 at 1:37:34 PM

[tup] to Dhuran and Zoran Antunovich. [tdown] to Reboot Tira however.

Edited by Echidna on Feb 6th 2023 at 4:38:40 AM

Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#3655: Feb 6th 2023 at 1:57:51 PM

[tup] Zoran

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#3656: Feb 6th 2023 at 2:33:21 PM

[up][up][up]Please add here if she did indeed get enough votes.

CM Dates; CM Pending; CM Drafts
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#3657: Feb 6th 2023 at 2:49:04 PM

Kinda confused as to what standing he's in now so if I need to move this to the other thread that's fine but doing research Astaroth appears to be a cluster of souls jammed in a body. I'm kinda against including him.

DoodSlayer136 Woagh from Pizza Tower (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Woagh
#3658: Feb 6th 2023 at 3:14:55 PM

Yeah, I don't recall the EP really addressing the "he's only evil because he has a bunch of souls shoved in him" thing, tbh that sounds a lot like Soul Edge's situation.

NOISE IS CALLING, PICK UP PHONE
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#3659: Feb 6th 2023 at 3:39:53 PM

From the Soul Calibur wiki on his origins: "Ares, the god of destruction, desired Soul Edge to dethrone his father, Zeus, so he ordered Kunpaetku, the grand priest of the cult order Fygul Cestemus, to seek it out. Astaroth, a golem, was created in hellish heat under the divine protection of Ares to head up the quest. Kunpaetku ordered his creation, Astaroth, to find the demonic blade. As he watched Astaroth depart from the shrine, the grand priest laughed to himself as he planned to keep the Soul Edge and become a god himself. Unknown to Kunpaetku, however, Ares had possessed Astaroth with his servants, the Keres, to ensure that Kunpaetku would not betray him. When Astaroth finally found Soul Edge, he had lost half of himself during the battle with Sophitia."

Really requesting we talk about this.

DoodSlayer136 Woagh from Pizza Tower (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Woagh
#3660: Feb 6th 2023 at 3:44:12 PM

Yeah, going with a solid [tdown] on Astaroth on that, agency seems completely compromised.

NOISE IS CALLING, PICK UP PHONE
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#3661: Feb 6th 2023 at 3:46:54 PM

From EP it seems that in original timeline Astaroth betrays Ares. I would like to hear more, is it like Naraku?

43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#3662: Feb 6th 2023 at 3:51:07 PM

I’ll keep an open mind but Naraku is a unique, rare case and nine times out of ten posts of alleged monsters “like” him in fact don’t interrogate their own nature to the point they can count like him, much like the many of (good faith) posts we got claiming we were dealing with a “Junko case” or “it’s like Dio” when in fact the candidate doesn’t properly refute their redeeming qualities. Fwiw I was against Nui too but she was fairly discussed, OP provided a reasonable counter and most people upvoted, her existence isn’t compelling me to say yes here either.

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#3663: Feb 6th 2023 at 4:09:25 PM

[tdown] to Astaroth if he isn't already up, and cut if he is. In light of that info his agency is effectively non existent.

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#3664: Feb 6th 2023 at 4:13:41 PM

Even from the EP on the rebooted timeline we get "Ker initially deemed Astaroth ill-suited for the task of retrieving Soul Edge and imbued the golem with the memories and combat skills of fallen warriors, causing him to develop an arrogant, boisterous, and bloodthirsty personality." I've gotta say I'm skeptical all around.

Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#3665: Feb 6th 2023 at 4:15:38 PM

Yeah I'm leaning a no on Astaroth

Now, from The Closer, the episode "Executive Order".

Who is Kevin Mason? What has he done?

A total narcissist with a psychopathic love for attention and glory, Kevin Mason applied many times to become a law enforcement officer to quench his lust for action and heroics, but when he was repeatedly failed thanks to his psychological evaluations, he responded by trying to lure dozens of firefighters into the blast radius of a bomb and kill them all.

That failed, so now Mason has a new agenda: full-blown terrorism to prove that the reason he was rejected wasn't for psychological reasons, no.....it was because of affirmative action. Proclaiming that the "system is corrupt and racist" against white men like himself, Mason lures two paramedics to him and guns them down. Then, after playacting as a nurse for an invalid man who he ultimately strangles to death, Mason swipes the patient's gas tanks, does some reverse-engineering, and initiates his master stroke.

Mason plans to show up at the massive funeral for the paramedics he killed, filled with law enforcement, EMTs, etc. and their families, plant the gas tanks, and flood the entire area with sarin, hoping to kill thousands as the "first wave" of an uprising against affirmative action. When he's headed off by the MCD, Mason sneers racist remarks while insisting "I'm not a racist, the system is!", and though he tries to set off the sarin just to take down as many people as he can, Brenda talks him down by appealing to his ego long enough for her fellow officers to get the upper hand on him and shoot him dead.

Mitigating features?

Lol no. Mason proclaims he's a Well-Intentioned Extremist who wants to change the system, but the "system" he's fighting against is diversity hiring because he's mad he didn't get hired by the cops to live out his Attention Whore desires.

Heinousness?

He's a lone rando nutbar who tried to bomb dozens of firefighters, and ultimately guns down two paramedics and strangles an old man so he can unleash sarin onto thousands of people. Waaay past the bar.

Final Verdict?

Easy Keeper

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
MGD107 Since: Feb, 2015
#3666: Feb 6th 2023 at 4:23:31 PM

[tup] to Kevin Mason.

Switching to abstain on Asatroth until this matter is cleared up.

EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
DoodSlayer136 Woagh from Pizza Tower (Experienced, Not Yet Jaded) Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
43110 (Striking Back) Relationship Status: Reincarnated romance
#3669: Feb 6th 2023 at 4:27:12 PM

Yes to Mason, good work man!

ForgoLight The Ultimate Lifeform Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
The Ultimate Lifeform
#3670: Feb 6th 2023 at 4:27:28 PM

[tup] to Kevin Mason, the alt-right nutcase, may he rot in hell.

"Us weirdos have to stick together!"
Ordeaux26 Professor Gigachad from Canada Since: May, 2019 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Professor Gigachad
#3671: Feb 6th 2023 at 4:31:27 PM

[tup] Kevin Mason, man they weren't trying for subtlety.

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SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from NYPD (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#3673: Feb 6th 2023 at 4:34:14 PM

[tup] Mason

REALITY IS AN ILLUSION, THE UNIVERSE IS A HOLOGRAM, BUY GOLD BYEEEE! | She/Her
EmperorGeode Not the Eye from A Galaxy far, far away Since: Oct, 2022 Relationship Status: On the prowl
Not the Eye
#3674: Feb 6th 2023 at 4:34:59 PM

It may be wise to do a compare and contrast once all keepers are proposed, just to make sure they all make it.

Also switching on abstain of Astaroth until we get more information about agency.

Klavice Since: Jan, 2011
#3675: Feb 6th 2023 at 4:35:37 PM

[tdown] to both Tiras, Astaroth, and I think Wong too. Wong honestly doesn't stand out compared to the already approved Soul example, and doesn't have Tira's crimes, ultimately feeling like a bog standard Korean Shogun guy. Plus it's way too confusing to see the lore of these games. When I first got into the series it was easy to see whether or not someone counted, now it's more like it takes a special kind of evil to count in this verse given just how high the Heinous standard is. [tup] to Mason.

Edited by Klavice on Feb 6th 2023 at 4:48:27 AM


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