Old Complete Monster cleanup thread
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Edited by Mrph1 on Jan 14th 2024 at 11:30:03 AM
So, i was checking the episodes from Blood Ties for Blood Books new page image, and after seeing the episode, i have a question regarding Monsignor Javier Mendoza, primarily his possible regret and care toward his deceased devotee Maria.
In the episode Heart of Fire, at 35:35 time mark he revealed what he wanted Henry to confess for the entire time, for "murder" of Maria, when Henry started to blame him and pointed out that he was the one, who killed her, after Henry turned her into a vampire, Mendoza desperately denied it and screams that he "saved her soul" and got furious and left Vicki to be killed by feral Henry.
Here is the episode for anyone, who wants to check it out, as i said, the moment starts at 35:35 time mark:
As the one who proposed him, I don't think its an issue. Mendoza does claim he saved her soul, but that's the same line of justification he was using before he became a vampire hunter and afterwards. The episode leans on him being nothing more than a petty fanatical sadistic hypocrite.
Whilst its clear he does blame Henry for Marie's death, Henry rightfully points out that he murdered her without a moments hesitation, and that his entire campaign of three hundred years of murder and torture, is just a way for him to place the blame on someone else so he doesn't have to face up to who he truly is.
Him leaving Vicki to get killed by Henry just further demonstrates how hallow his supposed belief is, as he flat out rejects the confession he claims will save the soul, all so he can twist the knife on last time for Henry.
Hi again, fellow tropers! After Helmut von Mephisto's removal, I thought about researching previous approved characters from the Complete Monster category and after checking on Never Say Never Again, does that Ernst Stavro Blofeld really count? He seems to rely too much on Maximillian Largo to carry out his dirty work, spends most of the time offscreen and nothing suggests that he doesn't care for his cat. Just sharing my thoughts.
Blofeld wants to extort the earth with nuclear threat, Largo just devised the scheme (with his own personal flourishes which helped him stick) to obtain the nukes. I'd say he's good and he's just stroking the cat? He's not doting over it as funny as it would be to see Max Von Sydow doing that.
Here's Blofeld's speech
Edited by WetFlannels on Jul 13th 2023 at 3:08:27 PM
What's wrong D-16? Rise up!![]()
so what next batch of quotes do you have to bring for cut if I may ask?
I'm still on an SVU kick and I think Charlie could do with a slight update to include more crimes of his.
Old
- "Dominance": Charlie Baker had in the past raped his brother Billy, and then beat up his alcoholic father when they were caught; Charlie continues to beat his father. In the span of a week, Charlie has either killed, or manipulated the weak-willed Billy into killing, around 10 people, but not before forcing them to have sex with each other first. Then he kidnapped two women, killed their boyfriends, and kept them captive on a roof.
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- "Dominance": Charlie Baker had in the past raped his brother Billy, and then beat up his alcoholic father when they were caught; Charlie continues to beat his father. In the span of a week, Charlie has either killed, or manipulated the weak-willed Billy into killing, around 10 people, but not before forcing them to have sex with each other first. Then he kidnapped two women, killed their boyfriends, and kept them captive on a roof where they risk dying of exposure. Charlie also framed Billy so he would face punishment for his crimes.
Whilst its clear he does blame Henry for Marie's death, Henry rightfully points out that he murdered her without a moments hesitation, and that his entire campaign of three hundred years of murder and torture, is just a way for him to place the blame on someone else so he doesn't have to face up to who he truly is.
Him leaving Vicki to get killed by Henry just further demonstrates how hallow his supposed belief is, as he flat out rejects the confession he claims will save the soul, all so he can twist the knife on last time for Henry.
I just mean that i remember we DQ cadidates, who despite refusing to take responsibility for their crimes, still holded some sort of care for someone. It is revealed in the end, that through the entire episode all his demands for Henry to "confess" were solely so Henry would "admit" that "he killed Marie", and when confronted with the reality that Mendoza is himself killed her, after seeing that Henry turned her into a vampire, he desperately says that he "saved her soul" and him leaving Vicki to be killed by feral Henry was out of Henry refusing to "confess" and keeping saying that Mendoza "condemned" Marie. And i think, if this was enough to enrage Mendoza with the addition of how desperate he was when claiming he "saved her", isn't this a proof of some sort of twisted geniune care about Marie?
Edited by VeryVileVillian on Jul 13th 2023 at 12:57:30 PM
Very: Well I might be remembering it wrong, but didn't Henry confess at the end but Mendoza just rejected it when he realised he was about to kill Vicki? I don't recall their being any link between his decision to do that and Marie. Heck I don't recall him even bringing up Marie after Henry rightfully pointed out he was the one who killed her and his entire so called crusade is a lie.
I linked the episode, it's free on YouTube and even time stamped the moment i was talking about. I feel kinda insulted that i linked the episode and pointed out when the scene takes place and it seems nobody checked it out, despite the scene being little over a minute long.
Mendoza directly mentioned Marie and tells Henry to "confess" and when Henry asks what he needs to confess about, Mendoza said: "You killed her. You killed Marie."
Then Henry doesn't confess but says Mendoza how it actually happened (that Mendoza killed her upon seeing that she was turned into a vampire), which led to Mendoza screaming that he "saved her" and when Henry refused to back down, he furiously throwed Henry a smell of blood and left Vicky to be killed by feral Henry.
Edited by VeryVileVillian on Jul 13th 2023 at 3:57:47 PM
Let's stay calm, I don't see a reason to feel "insulted" here. MGD's seen the episode and felt they recalled it well enough to comment and Lighty voiced this being concerning. I'm going to vouch for a cut looking at it myself, it does sound to me like a twisted form of care given Mendoza's beliefs but I don't think this needs to get heated either.
Very: Apologies, I meant no offense. Having watched through I understand where your coming from, but for me its the scene that comes immediately after that, namely between 38:50 to 39:30.
Where he immediately goes right back to his calm, supposedly righteous act flat out denies the very same confession he was demanding moments earlier just so he can further hurt Henry and brushes off it being pointed out.
Now I understand if others disagree, but to me that was enough to subvert any genuinely I took from his feelings to Marie. But as Very rightfully says, the clips are available for everyone to watch, I appreciate you linking it.
I didn't get heated. I'm sorry, if i presented miself in that way. It's just, by the look of the comment, i thought MGD didn't recheck the episode, since they talked about Henry "confessing", which didn't happen, Henry defied Mendoza and kept saying that, in reality, Mendoza himself "condemned" Marie.
Edited by VeryVileVillian on Jul 13th 2023 at 4:00:07 PM
Sorry I think we we're talking about different points. Yes Henry refuses to confess when Mendoza demands it pointing out he killed her. But when he realises where this is going, he does agree to in the hopes of saving Vicki, only for Mendoza to deny it despite it being literally what he was demanding moments earlier, as it wasn't "freely given".
Considering his MO is to torture confessions out of people, and his entire emotional state disappears in seconds. I took it that he wasn't genuine in his feelings to her, just that it was part of his own twisted egotistic fanaticism. Still I can understand if you disagree.
Edited by MGD107 on Jul 13th 2023 at 6:10:41 AM
Keep Mendoza & Blofeld.
Is it okay to discuss quotes and then swap Sandbox.Monster The Bill? I haven't heard of or seen any new proposals for the show in a few weeks and we have enough entries for a page (9).
Humanity is defined by its absurdity, and I am no exception.Here's a rewrite on an entry of mine i want to make, cause i feel like it could be written better.
Original:
- "Jezaille Brett", real name Asa Shinn, is in truth a sadistically xenophobic assassin sent by the justice system of Britain, one of the most important members of the main conspiracy in the game, and the most despicable of them for lacking any of the good intentions of her co-conspirators. Already known as an assassin in the dark corners of London, Brett was hired by Mael Stronghart to assassinate every person who escaped the guilty verdict from the cases of Barok van Zieks, with a total of 16 victims killed in numerous "accidents", effectively being the one who made him into "The Reaper of The Bailey". Later on, Brett would be sent to Japan under a fake identity to be a student of John Wilson, only for her to assassinate him with an agonizing, undiscovered poison, and later shooting the corpse for Ryunosuke Naruhodo to take the fall. When Brett was pulled to the trial of the murder, she would make racist remarks against the Japanese throughout the trial, and at one point, break an important piece of evidence just to laugh about her untouchable superiourity. Taking pleasure in the pain of others, including those of her own ethnicity, Asa demonstrates how low the British could go in terms of hating other races.
Rewrite:
- "Jezaille Brett", real name Asa Shinn, is in truth a sadistically xenophobic assassin sent by the justice system of Britain, one of the most important members of the main conspiracy in the game, and the most despicable of them for lacking any of the good intentions of her co-conspirators. Already known as an assassin in the dark corners of London, Shinn was hired by Mael Stronghart to assassinate every person who escaped the guilty verdict from the cases of Barok van Zieks, with a total of 16 victims killed in numerous "accidents", effectively being the one who made him into "The Reaper of The Bailey". Later on, Shinn would be sent to Japan under a fake identity to be a student of John Wilson, only for her to assassinate him with an agonizing, undiscovered poison, and later shooting the corpse for Ryunosuke Naruhodo to take the fall. When Brett was pulled to the trial of the murder, she would make racist remarks against the Japanese throughout the trial, and at one point, break an important piece of evidence just to laugh about her untouchable superiourity. Taking pleasure in the pain of others, especially of other races, it's her own hatred and narcissism that leads to her death, even when she was already about to remain scot-free from her crimes.
@VVV "I just mean that I remember that we DQ candidates, who despite refusing to take responsibility for their crimes, still holded some sort of care for someone."
There have been candidates cut on the basis of twisted care, true, but there is still a difference between care for someone as a part of a fanatic mindset rather than care for Marie as a person.
This seems to be the former and not the latter, and even if he had held care for Marie it seems to be only in past tense because it seems like his emotional response was just to manipulate Henry into giving a false confession which might make him even worse.
In short, I am not getting any vibes from this villain in the same way as someone like Brenner or that Slasher show villain who got cut. Keep Mendoza.
Edited by Mediamagician on Jul 14th 2023 at 4:00:42 AM

Edited by ForgoLight on Jul 11th 2023 at 11:24:34 AM
"Us weirdos have to stick together!"