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Welcome to the new Complete Monster (CM) cleanup thread! This thread is where we clean up or cut already-existing entries.

If you're looking to add new entries, please see the approval thread.

IMPORTANT: Before you begin any discussions on this thread, please see the Frequently Asked Questions and Common Requests List. Here, you'll find explanations of the criteria for the trope as well as our rules/procedures for approving and cutting candidates.

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    Examples 
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    Examples 
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Other than this, once again, welcome to the cleanup thread, and we look forward to your contributions!


Edited by Mrph1 on Jan 14th 2024 at 11:30:03 AM

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#7401: Jul 3rd 2023 at 1:20:49 AM

Alright I've gone through the Anime&Manga folder to start off with and here's the ones I think need removing or trimming down. Moving this to be a page topper.

     Quotes 

Shira: [You] ought to be..."Tai-Tai", yeah? Heh, scored with that one, didn't I?
Magatsu Taito: Y-You scum! You didn't know [me] for sure?
Shira: Not until now. So, THAT was your little sweetie. Too skinny, but an okay piece of ass.
Magatsu: You're screwing with me. A bastard like you doesn't remember everyone he kills.
Shira: True enough, but I remember THAT one...that was the last bitch I ever screwed. So, yeah, I remember. I did her before I "did" her. Spare me the shock. She was a WHORE. Spreading her legs was her BUSINESS, yeah? For anybody who had the cash. Heh heh. Hey, kid, wanna hear a cool trick? Normally I ain't interested in screwing, see? Too boring. But lemme tell ya a secret. Get inside 'em, THEN start cutting them up! Get it? When ya cut bitches where it HURTS, first the muscles go limp, and then they all tighten up. THOSE muscles, too, kiddo. Heh heh heh. Think about it. YOU'RE a guy. There's nothing like it, man! Now, hey, I ain't no serial killer. I don't do it that way every time. Your girl? She was only number FIVE on the hit parade. THAT'S WHY I REMEMBER HER! GYAH HAH HAH!!!
Blade of the Immortal

Quote could be trimmed from the "Normally I ain't interested in screwing" sentence and why does the quote have random words captalised? Does he randomly shout them or something?


"In the end, you're nothing more than a crazy serial killer. That's all you are. Nothing more, and nothing less."
Near to Light Yagami/Kira, Death Note

Seems more suitable for “The Reason You Suck” Speech tbh


"I can't believe you fell for that trick! You should be ashamed! Did you really think I have the capacity to feel compassion or empathy for any living creature?!"
— Nagi Mokuren as he slowly tries to suck the life out of his former partner, Flame of Recca

Wah I'm so evil mwahahaha. I say cut


"Can't you see? To taint Kikyō's heart with spite, so that the Shikon jewel would absorb the blood of malice. Two who had trusted each other would now despise and kill one another. What purer evil could be found to taint the jewel? And the more profound the love had once been, the more powerful the resulting hatred, and the more evil the jewel. Magnificent."
— Naraku, Inuyasha, chapter 71 ("Naraku")

I don't get where the CM is for the quote? Cut


Noriaki Kakyoin: They're alive. How is that even possible?
Jotaro Kujo: Bastard... You took their souls!
Telence T. D'Arby: Obviously, as making dolls is my hobby. But, of course, ordinary doll makers cannot imbue their handiwork with human souls. I suppose I may be giving too much away, but that's my Stand's ability. Comparatively, my brother's collection of simple coins made of souls is rather... uninspired. With my collection, you can play dress-up, and have actual chats!
Joseph Joestar: You're just as messed up in the head as your brother! Actually, you're more sadistic than your brother ever was! I'd hate to see what your parents were like!
Kakyoin: I'm out of patience with this sociopath's puppet show. He makes me sick!
—>— Jo Jo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders

Lacks the oomph IMO but can go either way for this one


"You may have come this far, but you are still only human. You think like a human, who has so little time to live. About things leaving a bad taste in your mouth, or living your life with no regrets. That kind of reasoning is about as compelling as rat shit in a bathroom, and it will be your demise! I, DIO, have no such thoughts. Within my mind is but one simple thought. Just one! To be victorious and rule! That is all. That is all I need to feel satisfaction! How I do it... does not matter!"
— DIO mocking Jotaro Kujo for having a conscience, Jo Jo's Bizarre Adventure: Stardust Crusaders

Seems more suitable for either Determinator, The Unfettered or any trope seeing goodness as weakness. Cut


"It would appear that I still have a bit of humanity left within me... I'll just have to rid myself of it!"
— Ragyo Kiryuin, Kill la Kill

This is just bad, Cut.


Ridley: Thanks to you, the Afloraltite exploded and I was also engulfed in flames! Can you imagine how I managed to survive? Shall I tell you what I had to feed my injured body, hmm?!
Samus Aran: Ah... uu...
Ridley: FLESH!!! [smiles] I somehow survived by consuming the bodies of your kind, tossed every which way. Foul, foul human flesh. [smacks Samus across the face]
Samus: Guah-help… Ugh... N-... no
Ridley: Heh, humans are always weak to the death of their own kind!! You don't know, maybe I even ate your "mama" so that my cells can live, hm? Is she here [points at his body] or here?! [grabs Samus] At least pay your respects!
Samus: N-... No...
— Metroid, Chapter 8

The structure is odd and the actions in it are unncesscary, could literally just be shortened to Ridley's dialogue.


Apos: [After Apos kills his father by stabbing him and Rin tries to take the Time Fruit that he had but Apos stomps it] Isn't that tragic? It such a pity you couldn't receive his white blood.
Rin: You bastard! I'll kill you...You worthless son of a...
[Suddenly Apos stabs Rin]
Apos: It must be so painful realizing that you kill your former lover with your own hands and now you just saw the love of your life get killed. This hasn't been your day Rin. Do you want to know why I did all this? Of course you did...It's because I want to eat your memories.
Rin: What?...My memories?
Apos: Yes, the more painful the memories the sweeter it tastes.
— Mnemosyne

Could just be shortened to Apos "painful" speech


"I am a warmonger. I can't help it, I love everything about war. I'm the very worst kind of person, someone who lives and dies for humanity's most primitive impulse."
— Ali Al-Saachez, Mobile Suit Gundam 00

More Card-Carrying Villain tbh, leaning cut


Tenma: You can't just go around killing!
Johan: Why not?
— Johan Leibert expressing his utter lack of empathy, Monster

Lacks oomph, leaning cut


Professor Clover: Are you shocked, phantom thieves?
Joker: What are you...
[Suddenly an explosion occurs and the two Phantom Thieves hear and see it]
Joker: Spade! Queen!
Professor Clover: Your allies are dead.
[Suddenly Joker goes angry]
Professor Clover: What a fine look on your face. Hate me! Despise me!
Shadow Joker: Even sacrificing your own underlings... why?!
Professor Clover: I have acquired everything. I have no need of an organization now. Envy me for my power to hold the world in my grip, phantom thieves! Hahahahaha.
— Professor Clover confronting the Phantom Thiefs in their Final Battle, Mysterious Joker

This is just a bad one IMO, cut


"Things of beauty, things of power, things of splendor, and things that epitomize all what's right in the world, those are the things I love see broken. All things are in there most brilliant when there being broken into tiny bits. It's obvious right? It started of small at first. Breaking this tiny thing and that, watching it's life fade, feeling it's body growing cold in my hand. And since these were small things, it was easy to hide from adults. But soon that wasn't enough. Thankfully I realized it was fine as long as no one found out. All I needed to do was scar someplace that couldn't be seen. That way nobody could say a world and the softest place that can't be seen, from the outside anyway, is the heart."
— Ulith, selector infected WIXOSS

The quote is too context heavy IMO because what does scarring the heart mean in context? Cut


"Come on Roku. You really should've cast Iron Armor. Still, I guess in the end,[Looks at Benio] a loser will never be anymore than a loser, huh? [Grabs Benio's head] You know...You weren't really trying to kill me at first, were you? I'm sure I'm wrong, but...Did you perhaps think this was all some kind of misunderstanding? That maybe I was someone other than the brother you knew? You didn't believe that, did you!? [Proceeds to take Benio's hair tie that Yuto gives to her years ago] The fact that you're still wearing the hair tie I gave you proves how pathetic you are. [Proceeds to smashes the Hair tie]. You really don't deserve to live neither as a human being nor an exorcist. I don't even need to destroy you myself. Go on hating your own weakness as you die a meaningless death."
— Yuuto Ijika taunting Benio as he tries to left her to death, Sousei no Onmyouji

“The Reason You Suck” Speech, Cut


Yuuto: Listen up, Roku. This is your last warning.
Rokuro: What...are...you...
Yuuto: I said this yesterday, too...It's easier to achieve my goal with you at my side. If you do as I say—-
Rokuro: If I do that...You're saying you'll spare Ryogo and the others, right?
Yuuto: [Laughs] You're right, I did say that. Sorry though. The truth is, I was just lying to move things along.
[Rokuro looks surprised]
Yuuto: Now that I have the body and power of a Kegare, just like they do, I can steal the spell power of humans and become stronger by killing them. I'll have power surpassing that of any exorcist. And to have that, I need one thing...The spell power of everyone in the country!
Rokuro: You...They'll all die if you do that!
Yuuto: Maybe so. But when you think about what's to come, oddly, it makes the sacrifice at Hiinatsuki seems a bit insignificant, doesn't it?
— Yuuto reveals that he has been lying all along regarding him wanting to spare Rokuro's loved ones, Sousei no Onmyouji

Can be shortened to the last 3 pieces of dialogue IMO.


"This apprentice witch has sold her soul to the devil. To use dark magic, an abyss in your heart is required. An inferiority complex regarding one's deficiencies. When I first saw her, I knew she was the one. [...] When a person gets a hold of something that they felt they had always lacked, even if it's only for a moment, they ultimately become unable to ever let that one thing go. 'Little girl, you do want to be able to use your magic once again, don't you?' For the Warlock Realm to live on, proceed! Spread your absolute blackness of magical darkness so that I may be ruler of all!"
— Grande describing how he's manipulated Eva into casting dark magic, Tweeny Witches, "Light Magic"

Lack of oomph, Cut


People fine with this? And dw G I saw your agreement there bud.

What's wrong D-16? Rise up!
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#7402: Jul 3rd 2023 at 4:06:53 AM

Yeah cut those.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Bullman Enid Sinclair Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
Ravok Son of Liberty from Big Shell Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
Son of Liberty
#7404: Jul 3rd 2023 at 4:48:42 PM

Yeah all for snipping those Wet, good work!

No! That is NOT Solid Snake! Stop impersonating him!
STARCRUSHER99 The Moron from one of my unhealthy obsessions (Captain) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Moron
#7405: Jul 3rd 2023 at 4:52:19 PM

All good to snip those if you haven't yet, Wet, great job and analysis on all of them!

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#7406: Jul 3rd 2023 at 4:53:36 PM

Alright cheers for the feedback folks! I'll remove them accordingly from the sandbox.

EDIT: I had put the quote sandbox in the drafts page with the other sandboxes to be moved but it's seemed to have been removed, or was it updated with the batch? I was keeping it there for easy access.

Alright found it, @ACW I was keeping it there so I could update it accordingly while I'm doing this quote purge bud.

Edited by WetFlannels on Jul 3rd 2023 at 12:59:43 PM

What's wrong D-16? Rise up!
WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#7407: Jul 3rd 2023 at 5:06:52 PM

Alright quotes have been removed, are folks alright with me going through the next folder?

[down] That it will be. Just sorting out the doc to have the correct indentation!

Edited by WetFlannels on Jul 3rd 2023 at 1:15:38 PM

What's wrong D-16? Rise up!
STARCRUSHER99 The Moron from one of my unhealthy obsessions (Captain) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Moron
#7408: Jul 3rd 2023 at 5:13:44 PM

I think you are bud, go right ahead! I’m not looking but it’s comics, right??

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#7409: Jul 3rd 2023 at 5:37:47 PM

Alright here's the comic quotes which I think should be removed.

     Comic Book Quotes 

"Eli Morrow, is it? You murderous, sadistic, unrepentant Satanist! I've seen the foulest of souls... mortal and immortal alike. But nothing like yours, Morrow."
— Johnny Blaze to Eli Morrow, All-New Ghost Rider

More appropriate for You Monster!, cut.


"Because I can. Because I am a wolf in a world of sheep. Because terror is the blood of life and its guiding principle. I have no politics to espouse through my terror, no ideals to force through. Terror is its own reward. That's why."
— Kaizen Gamorra on being questioned on murdering hundreds of innocent people, The Authority

More suitable for Card-Carrying Villain IMO, cut


"His eyes, unfathomably empty, devoid of all compassion... all humanity... No one has eyes like that... no one!"
— Captain America on Red Skull, Captain America Vol. 1 issue#370

Ngl this one's just bad IMO, cut


"Cletus Kasady I AM that man, eating human sandwiches at the bus stop... making Jeffrey Dahmer eyes at the nice young boys, John Wayne Gacy hands a'twitching... I AM those kids burning dogs and hobos in the dark alleyway. The woman cutting a hole in the tied-to-bed Mr. Goodman and inserting a vacuum cleaner tube in his stomach. The wife shoving broken glass down the husband's throat. I'm the American flag on fire, the Founding Fathers crucified for a chat show, lies, cursed lies, and government. I'm the end of the world as we know it and I feel like a DRINK."
— Cletus "Carnage" Kasady, Carnage: Mind Bomb

This is more of a twisted Badass Boast and Carnage already has two far superior quotes listed. Could go either way with this one.


"My ancestors were destroyed for wanting to use the Forbidden Mechanism to ensure world domination. For ages since, our people have enjoyed a rich heritage of honorable combat. But I say, 'Screw Heritage!'"
— Emperor Pago, Gear

Another bad quote, cut


"What about this one? His name was Jason Huntington. He was your best friend in grade school. He was the only other boy you could relate to. He loved pulp magazines and the science fiction pictures. He kept you from feeling isolated. From being without friends. Think I'll take him too. Thanks to the Red Morgue, your friendship with Jason never existed. Jason died when he fell—I mean, when he was pushed—out of his crib. Your childhood is becoming quite bleak. Yes... I wonder if you even remember Jason anymore? Or do you just recall the loneliness? The empty void during your school years. Stretching out each day. Who else, Hourman? Perhaps the first girl you kissed? Shall I erase her from your timeline, too? Shall I erase Wendi Harris?"
— Per Degaton to Rex Tyler, JSA Vol. 1 issue #71

Just a lengthy threat, cut.


"Brainiac hates all living things. Nuclear armageddon was always his plan for those who remained."
— Batman on Brainiac, Justice (DC Comics)

More appropriate for Omnicidal Maniac, cut


"Quite. Our Mr. Griffin seems utterly incapable of feeling remorse. I rather think our so-called 'alienists' could learn much about criminal insanity by talking to him."
— Mina Murray on Hawley Griffin, The League of Extraordinary Gentlemen

This is just a bad one for the trope, cut.


Slug: Scum! It was you who slew my parents, horribly destroyed the man I loved, stole my youth!
Baron Karza: An endless list of atrocities, eh, my lady Slug? Yes! I am an artist of atrocities—a master of disaster! And you—while you may be the real Lady Slug in spirit—are now only a pale, pathetically frail old woman, so susceptible to nervous shock!
Duchess Belladonna: [After Karza kills Slug] Y-you killed her! You struck her down in cold blood! You MONSTER! You evil, inhuman MURDERER.
Karza: Such strong words, Duchess! I do not understand!...Now you'll have no rival for your Baron's love!
Belladona: L-love a heinous horror like you?! I-I'd rather die!
Karza: I am always willing to oblige a lady, Duchess! [Snaps Belladonna's neck]
— Micronauts (Marvel Comics)

Karza's other quotes are far more nasty than this one and it relys too much on the context with the actions inputted, cut.


Tulip: Whyyy?
Simon "Si" Coltrane: Because it's fun. Two years back, I was driving home drunk when I ran a guy over. I got out to help, saw I'd killed him. It was four A.M.; no one around. I got back in the car and drove like Hell, and it was five minutes before I realized I was 'laughing fit to bust — 'cause I'd gotten clean away with it. So I began seeing what else I could get away with, and it just got funnier each time. Why? You were expecting some crap about getting raped by my dad? Or being a wolf that preys on humanity, blah-blah-blah? Anyway, don't scream, or the cops'll come and they'll get Jesse anyway. I'm gonna go tell Bridges about his lucky break. Then we'll head up to my folks' place, and I'll get them out of the freezer... and then I'll show you just how much fun serial killing can be.
— Preacher #7

Seems more Freudian Excuse Denial, can go either way.


"The fact I derive pleasure from cruelty doesn't make me feel guilty, Frank... guilt is ridiculous. There is no 'good' or 'bad'. There is only pleasure and pain... with no Heaven or Hell at the end of it!"
— Colonel De Sade, The Punisher

More suitable for Sadist, cut.


"The others... the big guys... the devils, they thought I got a little too big for my britches. So they threw me out. Trapped me in a stillborn baby, purged of my memory of Hell, and my ambition... they thought. Mephisto. Satannish. Lucifer. Satan. Murray. I'll bet they thought that was really funny. They didn't count on me being born into a mob family. They didn't count on me killing. They didn't count on the blood giving me back my memory. If I was going to go back, I needed an edge. I needed power. An engine of death and sacrifice. I made you that engine, and all it cost was your family's blood."
— Lord Olivier, The Punisher: Purgatory

Lacks the oomph IMO, cut.


"I am something you have never seen before. I am Solus. I herald the death of you all. Boys, feast! Kill as many as you can."
— Solus, Spider-Verse

Lacks the oomph and seems more of a Badass Boast, cut.


"But don't worry, I'm not going to kill you. At least not yet. After all, we have so much to learn from one another. Though I should warn you...this is probably going to hurt."
— Dr. Stanley Burgess prior to operating on Muadun, Star Craft: Frontline

Lacks oomph, cut


"It was my misfortune to be taken by those godless bastards. Sergeant Chow was the fattest, most godless bastard of them all."
— Charlie Hewitt (aka Sheriff Hoyt), on Sergeant Chow, The Texas Chainsaw Massacre: By Himself

Woo this group of evil guys has a guy who's the most evil of them. Cut

What's wrong D-16? Rise up!
STARCRUSHER99 The Moron from one of my unhealthy obsessions (Captain) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Moron
#7410: Jul 3rd 2023 at 5:42:04 PM

I honestly like the Per Degaton and Preacher quotes personally, but yeah, I think the rest are good to slash

G-Editor The 47th President Since: Mar, 2015 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
The 47th President
#7411: Jul 3rd 2023 at 6:01:27 PM

Keep the Degaton and Preecher quotes cut the rest

Edited by G-Editor on Jul 3rd 2023 at 3:01:43 AM

My sandbox of EPs and other stuff
Agentofchaos A God Am I from Somewhere in the Universe Since: Dec, 2021
#7412: Jul 3rd 2023 at 7:43:29 PM

I say keep the Preacher and Carnage quotes, rest I'm fine with going

"We'll meet again" | 🏳️‍⚧️
DemonDuckofDoom from Some Pond in Hell Since: Sep, 2015 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#7413: Jul 3rd 2023 at 9:57:25 PM

Okay, as the ones who did the Morrow, Degaton and Brainiac quotes, may I ask what standard we're operating on here? I've been focusing on quotes that illustrate the utter cruelty required for the trope, and specifically fail to see how a You Monster! description or a "lengthy threat" contradict being listed here too. Not too attached to the Brainiac quote, but I say keep the other two, especially as Morrow's quote explicitly describes him as the worst of the worst.

papyru30 from Colorado for summer break Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
#7414: Jul 3rd 2023 at 10:23:05 PM

I'm also curious about the standard here. Imo I like the Morrow, Kaizen, Brainiac, and Coltrane quotes myself.

AustinDR Lizzid people! (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
Lizzid people!
#7415: Jul 3rd 2023 at 10:48:13 PM

Mainly, I feel a quote would have to exemplify most of the criteria for the trope i.e. showing zero remorse/no mitigating factors along with showcases of their worst acts albeit not in the context of a Badass Boast or whatnot.

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#7416: Jul 3rd 2023 at 10:54:38 PM

[up] Mainly that, also my opinion isn't the final one for this. People are fine with the Preacher one, I'm not gonna remove just because I disagree.

As for the Morrow quote, all I get is You Monster!, there's no reason why he's a CM behind it, just that he's murderous and a Satanist.

[down] Done

Edited by WetFlannels on Jul 4th 2023 at 8:24:37 PM

What's wrong D-16? Rise up!
ACW from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#7417: Jul 4th 2023 at 12:04:55 AM

Wet: My bad. Feel free to re-add it.

TheLaurelCrownedRaven Since: Apr, 2022 Relationship Status: One Is The Loneliest Number
#7418: Jul 4th 2023 at 3:12:06 AM

I noticed one of the writeups on the Silent Witness CM page required a minor edit:

Errol’s brother is actually called Levi. AJ is the guy in charge of the community service. Here’s the edited version:

WetFlannels Classy, Refined, Unstable from Nearby, on a cosmological scale. Since: Oct, 2021 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Classy, Refined, Unstable
#7419: Jul 4th 2023 at 5:42:23 AM

[up][tup]

Imma let folks gather more opinions on the comic quote cuts before I remove them from the Sandbox although the Preacher one seems to be fine to stay.

What's wrong D-16? Rise up!
Libraryseraph uu~ from Canada (Handed A Sword) Relationship Status: Raising My Lily Rank With You
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#7420: Jul 4th 2023 at 6:19:55 AM

I'm fine with the quote assessments in general, but I like the Degaton and Preacher quotes

HAPPY HALLOWEEN FOR MARIA
TheLivingDrawing Lucas the Dreamer from The Town of Clayton Since: Apr, 2019 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Lucas the Dreamer
#7421: Jul 4th 2023 at 10:17:45 AM

A general policy question is how is The Sociopath handled? Is it under the assumption they aren’t a medical sociopath (which would instantly disqualify them on grounds of agency) or just that they just act like they are one but actually aren’t technically one.

Once Upon A Time.
STARCRUSHER99 The Moron from one of my unhealthy obsessions (Captain) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Moron
#7422: Jul 4th 2023 at 10:29:48 AM

I think it primarily depends on how far the work leans into the idea that they are genuinely mentally ill, but we generally accept them regardless (sociopathy in itself doesn't generally turn someone into a monster). For examples of each, if I understand the source material correctly, Rhoda Penmark is so sociopathic that she's genuinely incapable of understanding that she's doing anything wrong, but characters that are in themselves diagnosed sociopaths (such as my own Susan Reynolds) are still fair game.

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#7424: Jul 4th 2023 at 2:40:02 PM

With Wet's explanation I'm fine axing the Morrow and Brainiac quotes.

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#7425: Jul 4th 2023 at 3:03:55 PM

Cut the quotes save Degaton and Preacher. Also, got some rewrites.

  • Gotham Society of Fireproof Women:
    • David Cain was a member of the League of Assassins, assigned to the creation of "The One-Who-Is-All" as a bodyguard for Ra's al Ghul. Training his daughter Cassandra since birth to fulfill this role, Cain refused to teach her to read, write, or even speak; he instead taught her how to be the perfect weapon by murdering people in front of her. One of his favorite lessons involved shooting her in a non-vital area, and if she so much as flinched he would shoot her again. When Cassandra ran away after her first assassination at the age of nine, Cain would betray the League as he obsessively tried to hunt her down. Recruited years later by Harmonia, Cain assisted in creating distractions for Batman by massacring Black Mask's forces, later attempting to cause an international incident by assassinating a Kahndaqi diplomat. Cain taunts Cassandra for becoming a "faulty sword" under Batman's tutelage but runs for his life without hesitation in a fair fight, even threatening to shoot a hostage in a vain attempt to avoid defeat. He later tries to draw out Cassandra for a final match, threatening to kill thousands with bombs set around Gotham. Cain ultimately cares for nothing except securing his "immortality" through the creation of the perfect weapon.
    • A Faulty Sword: Nemesis is the Greek Goddess of Grudges, Blood Feuds, and the Unjustly Slain. Centuries ago she created the Army of Nemesis, an unstoppable force of evil that horrified the Olympians and caused Zeus to kill her. Possessing Harmonia in modern times, Nemesis hijacks her plan to destroy the multiverse with the Army, inflicting Jason Todd with horrific visions of the Joker torturing him and forcing him to massacre a bar full of innocents after he raises his voice at her. Nemesis later tricks Wonder Woman into killing both her and Harmonia, activating the Army and sending them to destroy all life on earth so that the Olympians will starve to death, while the alternate versions of Harmonia throughout the universe will be eternally trapped in maddening insanity without the Army to end their pain. While her plan is foiled, the Army nevertheless manages to kill hundreds of innocents and four dozen heroes.
    • Motherland: Ra's al Ghul is the head of the League of Assassins, an organization dedicated to wiping out ninety percent of all human life in his egotistical desire to save the planet and rule the dwindled population. Killing thousands throughout the centuries in pursuit of his goal, Ra's seeks a male heir in the form of Batman, raising Astrid Arkham to believe Bruce murdered her mother so she'll kill all his friends and sever his ties to Gotham. Once Astrid is old enough to enact this plan, Ra's shifts focus, targeting Cassandra Wayne to become his bride and loosing Astrid to wreak havoc. Now seeking petty revenge on the city that foiled him time and time again, Ra's starts fires in the Amazon to draw out Poison Ivy, intending to use her to disperse Venom throughout Gotham so the populace will tear itself apart. Learning that he has an illegitimate granddaughter through Talia, Ra's wipes out the entire town of Parisot in an attempt to rid himself of the potential usurper. Even after Cassandra sabotages his plan,, Ra's tries to kill Bruce and Selina, revealing himself under his thin veneer of politeness to be a petty narcissist obsessed with continuing his lineage.

Cleaned up an awkward phrasing in Cain's (Black Adam's diplomat -> Kahndaqi diplomat); added the bit about driving the other Harmonias insane for Nemesis, just to emphasize she counts on personal cruelty over attempted kills when Harmonia is aiming higher with the same resources; and emphasized that Ra's is motivated by ego in his usual ecoterrorism, since the original doesn't properly refute it.


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