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Visitantlord Since: Oct, 2017
#1: Dec 24th 2021 at 4:12:23 AM

I need with setting up my female character is a cold-based supernatural being from another dimension. How can I make the description sound like she has unearthly beauty? How would I go about the describing the horns in link so I can add them to her description? https://imgur.com/I7Lv0kv How would I go about show that she like to flirt and that she is highly intelligent?

What help you give me with setting up her history from the following. She is from another dimension that has supernatural beings. Her younger sister Thesipha was cursed to become a hag. After hearing about for Earth for a couple of time she decided to check out the Earth to see what it is all about What type of supernatural being could she and her sister be?

Physical Description: A statuesque woman walks in, moving with both surety and seduction. There is something sexy about the way she carries herself, a hidden power to her movements, but covered by a demure facade. She has an hourglass figure with luminous snow-white skin that is icy cold to the touch. Her radiant white hair flows down her back in cascading waves down to the ground. Her face has a forehead and jawline that is narrow with regal, well-defined cheekbones. In both of her delicate pointed ears, she wears a large silver icicle-shaped earring. Her white brows gently curved into an unpronounced arch, lead to a dainty upturned nose. Her perfectly curling long eyelashes bat sweetly over her eyes that are like shards of blue ice, seeming to look into the very soul of those she gazes upon. Her full crimson lips deceive her authority. The blue silk dress she wears has silver embroidered vine work that goes up and down the chest and the back of the dress. The dress is pinned together in the front with a small silver clasp and the dress has a contrasting simple cream undress. She tends to go about barefooted, each toe adorned with a gorgeous ring, much like her long fingers.

Edited by Visitantlord on Dec 24th 2021 at 3:58:16 AM

TitanJump Since: Sep, 2013 Relationship Status: Singularity
#2: Dec 24th 2021 at 8:09:38 AM

Here is an advice in general

Treat "details" in story-writing like you would treat "butter" when cooking/ or making a sandwich.

Too much is going to clog the arteries and be bad for the stories.

You either stroke the details into it one, two or three sentences at maximum.

No more.

Now, take what you feel is important in the paragraph you wrote above and cut it down to three sentences, at maximum.

Tylzrynuss Since: Aug, 2020
#3: Dec 24th 2021 at 9:59:51 AM

Nevermind

Edited by Tylzrynuss on Dec 24th 2021 at 1:56:50 AM

DeMarquis Who Am I? from Hell, USA Since: Feb, 2010 Relationship Status: Buried in snow, waiting for spring
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#4: Dec 24th 2021 at 12:00:46 PM

"In walked a woman of radiant, cold beauty."

There, you're done. Everything else you can imply from the reactions of the other characters toward her.

By the way, except for the horns, the obvious comparison is with Elsa of Arrendale. It's like she and Maleficient somehow had a daughter.

"We learn from history that we do not learn from history."
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