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WarJay77
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#4: May 10th 2021 at 7:26:18 PM
I like 3.3, because it's more obvious with the halo that they're being greeted by a dead guy.
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Synchronicity
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#8: May 10th 2021 at 8:10:00 PM
3.3 is my favorite because the afterlife and the welcome are both immediately clear. OP is a little too Psychopomp-y, and 5 is really hard to read.
Edited by Synchronicity on May 10th 2021 at 10:10:17 AM
#9: May 11th 2021 at 12:25:53 AM
3.3 is fine. For that matter, maybe we should replace the image on Psychopomp with one of the OP, because the image there is really bad.
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GastonRabbit
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