I think it's a decent Keep Until Better Image Suggested case.
I find the current hard to read. An alternative; second page, second panel.
Rhetorical, eh? ... Eight!Clock is set.
Pull current. It has too much on text, which is also hard to read. The suggestion might not be perfect, but a definite improvement.
The universe is under no obligation to make sense to us.Pull.
Health sure is versatile. It's possible to be both light-headed and dim-witted. At the same time, no less.(Annoyed grunt)
On second thought, I'm good to pull the current. That said, I think the current's text would work better for the page quote than the current quote.
Pull.
Current Project: The TeamPull it but you can use the text as the page quote
"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
Edited by eroock on Feb 15th 2020 at 1:54:44 AM
That's much easier to read, but the layout is a little disorienting since we're so used to reading comic panels left-right, not up-down.
Current Project: The TeamThat's a good edit.
(Annoyed grunt)
11.
You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"I still don't like the text, but at least it's legible.
11 is an improvement from the current, but I still prefer 3.
Edited by petersohn on Feb 17th 2020 at 4:55:34 PM
The universe is under no obligation to make sense to us.I can live with 11.
11 is good.
back lol
Tiny text, and even if you can read it it's not the greatest. There's a bit too much going on for it to be a clear demonstration of the trope.
I'd prefer no image to this one, but there have to be some basic "you saw a vampire, now I have to kill you" comics out there. A subtitled Fate/stay night screencap might work, from episode 0 when Lancer tells Shirou that he has to kill anyone who witnesses magic.