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VeryVileVillian Since: Dec, 2017
#1: Feb 4th 2020 at 12:14:12 PM

Since Redwall Mosnter Page lacks an image, here are two options to fill its place, both are images of Cluny The Scourge from animated series:

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Willbyr Hi (Y2K) Relationship Status: With my statistically significant other
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#2: Feb 4th 2020 at 2:08:55 PM

Previous thread; were either of the suggestions already discussed there?

I fixed the link, as well.

Edited by Willbyr on Feb 4th 2020 at 4:09:07 AM

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#3: Feb 4th 2020 at 3:02:14 PM

[up]I don't think so. 1.1 works.

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#5: Feb 4th 2020 at 10:30:51 PM

1.1.

(Annoyed grunt)
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#6: Feb 4th 2020 at 10:43:13 PM

[tup]1.1.

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Karxrida from Eureka, the Forbidden Land Since: May, 2012 Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
#7: Feb 5th 2020 at 12:20:34 AM

I prefer the second suggestion. A tapestry-looking still of someone burning down a house with its residents still inside is way more visually interesting than someone being held at knifepoint. Plus holding someone at knifepoint is super standard villainy.

(Please don't suggest knifepoint shots for Monster pages. They're typically super shit.)

Edited by Karxrida on Feb 5th 2020 at 12:25:41 PM

Synchronicity (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
#8: Feb 5th 2020 at 6:49:50 AM

[up]I'm inclined to agree; burning a house down while its inhabitants are still in it is more heinous.

Edited by Synchronicity on Feb 5th 2020 at 8:52:47 AM

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#9: Feb 5th 2020 at 10:00:17 AM

[up][up]The person being held at knifepoint appears to be a child, though.

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#10: Feb 5th 2020 at 10:12:59 AM

[up] I'm going to say 1.2 on the grounds that while 1.1 shows Cluny holding a child up to knifepoint, 1.2 shows him setting fire to a house to kill both a child and their mother.

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Karxrida from Eureka, the Forbidden Land Since: May, 2012 Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
#11: Feb 5th 2020 at 10:49:03 AM

[up]x2 I just thought it was an adult woman due to the hat.

VeryVileVillian Since: Dec, 2017
#12: Feb 5th 2020 at 10:50:45 AM

[up][up][up]Not appears. It is a child. Cornflower (the person, whom Cluny holds at a knifepoint) is only in her early teens during the events of the first season.

Edited by VeryVileVillian on Feb 5th 2020 at 9:50:56 PM

rachiebird Since: May, 2014
#13: Feb 5th 2020 at 9:24:17 PM

My vote is for 1.2 as well. Even if 1.1 is a teenager, 1.2 has two victims and one of them is clearly a child.

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#14: Feb 5th 2020 at 9:54:50 PM

Alright 1.2. It is then for me too.

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#16: Feb 6th 2020 at 7:30:28 AM

I'll change my vote to 1.2.

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Snicka Since: Jun, 2011
#17: Feb 6th 2020 at 8:46:21 AM

1.2 is better artistically (as a tapestry), and the victim on 1.1 can just as well be an adult mouse if you are unfamiliar with the work, so my vote goes for 1.2 as well.

Synchronicity (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
#18: Feb 6th 2020 at 8:50:09 AM

1.2, in case my vote wasn't clear.

ACW from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#19: Feb 6th 2020 at 11:00:32 AM

1.2 works for me. I guess use the current quote as the caption? Here's a new quote possibility:

"Laugh, yes laugh all you like, but stay hidden while you value your miserable lives. I am Tsarmina, Queen of the Thousand Eyes. Before I am finished with Mossflower, every creature who defies me will wish that its mother had never given birth to it. The crying and the dying will be loud and long. Now let me hear you laugh at that!"
Tsarmina Greeneyes, Mossflower

Edited by ACW on Feb 6th 2020 at 2:03:12 PM

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#20: Feb 6th 2020 at 11:27:20 AM

1.2 [tup]

Edited by KingofNightmares on Feb 6th 2020 at 11:27:30 AM

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ImperialMajestyXO Since: Nov, 2015
#21: Feb 6th 2020 at 11:58:05 AM

[tup] to 1.2 and ACW's suggestion regarding the quotes.

Willbyr Hi (Y2K) Relationship Status: With my statistically significant other
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#22: Feb 6th 2020 at 5:13:34 PM

Good enough. 1.2's in, the old quote's moved to the caption, and the new quote's in. I guess the only question now is if the caption is good as is or if it should be cut off after "year...".

rachiebird Since: May, 2014
#23: Feb 7th 2020 at 12:10:39 AM

Yeah, that caption's a bit long. Cut it off after the second "year".

VeryVileVillian Since: Dec, 2017
#24: Feb 7th 2020 at 1:31:36 AM

I think detail about piglets being eaten alive by Cluny's army should stay. It strengthen the horror to Cluny.

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