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neoYTPism Since: May, 2010
#1: Nov 11th 2019 at 7:17:45 AM

This one seems to rely too heavily on the speech balloon. Here's something that at least shows the "lovebirds" in question; Sonic Issue 130. First, a couple different panel arrangements...

https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/leavethelovebirdsalone101.png

https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/leavethelovebirdsalone.png

...and secondly, the context of the panels, in case anyone wants to make alternate panel arrangements.

Sonic and Sally kiss

Sonic and Sally are photographed kissing

Edited by neoYTPism on Nov 11th 2019 at 7:20:46 AM

Willbyr Hi (Y2K) Relationship Status: With my statistically significant other
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#2: Nov 12th 2019 at 11:15:39 AM

I fixed the link; it should've been Leave the Two Lovebirds Alone. Can't look at all the suggestions ATM so reserving comment until I can.

WarJay77 It's NaNo, Bay-beeee! (10,238/50,000) from My Writing Cave (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: Armed with the Power of Love
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#3: Nov 12th 2019 at 11:16:26 AM

1.2 is actually pretty good, if a bit blurry.

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eroock Since: Sep, 2012
#5: Nov 12th 2019 at 12:33:17 PM

https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/leavethelovebirdsalone_16.png

Edited by eroock on Nov 12th 2019 at 1:19:48 AM

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#7: Nov 12th 2019 at 12:45:51 PM

[up][up] Definite improvement, but man are those profile shots of Sonic jarring.

Brainulator9 Short-Term Projects herald from US Since: Aug, 2018 Relationship Status: I get a feeling so complicated...
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#8: Nov 12th 2019 at 1:00:24 PM

[up] I know, right? I swear the art of some of those comics is really wonky...

Conceptually, though, the latest take works.

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#10: Nov 12th 2019 at 5:49:43 PM

Yeah, that is much better.

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TheUnsquished Filthy Casual from A youngun between two oldies Since: Nov, 2014 Relationship Status: Married to the job
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#11: Nov 12th 2019 at 10:32:50 PM

[up]

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Willbyr Hi (Y2K) Relationship Status: With my statistically significant other
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#13: Nov 13th 2019 at 6:35:44 AM

Good enough. It's in and tagged; caption?

Old pic:

https://static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/LeaveTheTwoLoveBirdsAlone2_2465.png

neoYTPism Since: May, 2010
#14: Nov 13th 2019 at 3:42:47 PM

Caption idea: The dialogue immediately after it.

"Where were you raised? In a kennel?"

Edited by neoYTPism on Nov 13th 2019 at 3:46:53 AM

TheUnsquished Filthy Casual from A youngun between two oldies Since: Nov, 2014 Relationship Status: Married to the job
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#15: Nov 16th 2019 at 1:49:10 AM

[up] I could go with that.

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neoYTPism Since: May, 2010
#16: Nov 17th 2019 at 7:35:10 PM

Anyone else want to weigh in on the caption idea?

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#17: Nov 19th 2019 at 1:31:36 PM

No consensus on a caption; locking up.

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