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Deadlock Clock: Jun 21st 2019 at 11:59:00 PM
DivineFlame100 Since: Mar, 2014 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#1: Apr 17th 2019 at 7:14:27 PM

Ok, so I'm reading the main description of Planet Looters and... what I find there is not necessarily a summary of the trope but rather paragraphs of complainy material describing contradictory info and criticisms of the trope, like "Why are aliens not targeting uninhabited planets for resources?" and the like. I don't know about you, but this is something I would usually see in a Fridge page under Fridge Logic. I think the trope description needs to be rewritten to describe the trope more properly without any of that unnecessary info getting in the way.

SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#2: May 17th 2019 at 12:27:20 AM

Opening. Seems like a description overhaul would be needed here.

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
eroock Since: Sep, 2012
#3: May 18th 2019 at 4:49:00 AM

To kick things off, here's my revised version at Sandbox.Planet Looters. Turned the paragraphs into bullet points where I folded complainy parts of the original second paragraph into a footnote and cut most of the third paragraph. Feel free to adjust.

Edited by eroock on May 18th 2019 at 4:50:49 AM

SeptimusHeap from Switzerland (Edited uphill both ways) Relationship Status: Mu
#4: Jun 18th 2019 at 12:52:03 AM

Clock is set.

"For a successful technology, reality must take precedence over public relations, for Nature cannot be fooled." - Richard Feynman
crazysamaritan NaNo 4328 / 50,000 from Lupin III Since: Apr, 2010
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#5: Jun 19th 2019 at 1:18:34 PM

I approve of the description swap.

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DEIDATVM from East Fishkill, New York Since: Dec, 2016
#6: Jun 20th 2019 at 6:35:49 AM

Sandbox does seem better than what's currently on the page.

Berrenta How sweet it is from Texas Since: Apr, 2015 Relationship Status: Can't buy me love
How sweet it is
#7: Jun 24th 2019 at 6:44:59 AM

[tup] on the description proposal.

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Brainulator9 Short-Term Projects herald from US Since: Aug, 2018 Relationship Status: I get a feeling so complicated...
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#8: Jul 4th 2019 at 5:58:42 AM

[tup] Sandbox proposal.

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eroock Since: Sep, 2012
#9: Oct 19th 2019 at 1:28:11 PM

Any more [tup] for the sandboxed version?

WarJay77 Bonnie's Artistic Cousin from The Void (Troper Knight) Relationship Status: Armed with the Power of Love
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eroock Since: Sep, 2012
#11: Nov 20th 2019 at 11:04:37 AM

Anyone else for the rewrite? If not, tell us what's better in current.

Edited by eroock on Nov 20th 2019 at 11:06:47 AM

Tabs Since: Jan, 2001
#12: Nov 20th 2019 at 10:00:28 PM

That's five votes for the sandbox and no objections.

naturalironist from The Information Superhighway Since: Jul, 2016 Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
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Berrenta MOD How sweet it is from Texas Since: Apr, 2015 Relationship Status: Can't buy me love
How sweet it is
#15: Dec 2nd 2019 at 8:13:34 AM

Okay, that's good enough; let's swap it in.

Update: Done. Sandbox is now cutlisted, so thread is finished. Closing.

Edited by Berrenta on Dec 2nd 2019 at 10:17:41 AM

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