Akashic is basically based off the Akashic Records, but she's basically a deitific (sp) AI interface, meshed with an avatar function. Plus her AI is basically based on golden Life Energy. And her realm coexists with the Dream realm and exists inside every creature's soul in the universe. But her special ability is to completely over-ride the Venusians' free-will and possess them as a vessel and it is shown by golden eyes and an extremely bright shining light motif.
She has omnisence and knows literally everything in the universe and has the ability to read thoughts.
Edited by sabrina_diamond on Nov 7th 2018 at 7:46:17 AM
In an anime, I'll be the Tsundere Dark Magical Girl who likes purple MY own profile is actually HERE!I don't think this needed a new thread, and a thread on this particular topic would be more suited for the World Building forum either way.
I'd give the same feedback I gave in the last thread though, which is that you may want to draw down and focus on just a few things. This character is doing a lot of different things, like a whole lot. Conceptually, it's all over the place.
They should have sent a poet.Could you explain how it's all over the place, exactly? (Plus the main reason I put it in Writer's Block is that my parents don't help me with any of my story ideas or even contribute feedback, so it's rather difficult for me)
Edited by sabrina_diamond on Nov 7th 2018 at 1:37:47 AM
In an anime, I'll be the Tsundere Dark Magical Girl who likes purple MY own profile is actually HERE!Yeah, basically what Marquis said. It’s an AI but also a god and made out of life energy and lord of the soul plane and also omnipotent but needs human direction but also twists that direction and can possess people!
That’s kind of wild. Not only are there several areas where powers seem to overlap or contradict each other (is it really all-powerful if it needs a human to guide it? Why doesn’t it just mind control someone to issue commands to it?) but from a narrative view it’s doing way too many different things.
A pitfall a lot of writers hit is thinking of their characters and objects as actual concrete things. Now, world building and consistency are good, but you should never forget that worldbuilding serves the story and not the other way around.
Think of the narrative role these objects or characters play in your story and work from there.
They should have sent a poet.Since Akashic is rather analoguous to the Holy Spirit of the Bible (in a similar vein to CS Lewis's writings), it's kind of a given that her powers are powerful in nature.
Edited by sabrina_diamond on Nov 21st 2018 at 12:23:36 AM
In an anime, I'll be the Tsundere Dark Magical Girl who likes purple MY own profile is actually HERE!

So since there was some discussion on my earlier thread about the Akashic Cube, I decided to dedicate this discussion about the entity of the Cube itself, Akashic!
In an anime, I'll be the Tsundere Dark Magical Girl who likes purple MY own profile is actually HERE!