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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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IMPORTANT: To avoid a holler to the mods, please see here for the earliest date a work can be discussed, (usually two weeks from the US release), as well as who's reserved discussion.

  • Why do a cleanup?: This trope definitely exists and has a well documented history of use. That being said, it frequently gets misused to a character who meets one of the components, namely that they are smart, charming while not necessarily even being a villain, or create good plans. While these are components, there is also a certain personality required, not to mention that all of the above are required to be present for a character to be a true Magnificent Bastard. As the trope attracts interest, it unfortunately brings in a lot of misuse and I thought the best way to rectify this would be a Perpetual Cleanup Thread, as is being done and has seen success with Complete Monster.

  • What makes a Magnificent Bastard: Below is a list of the individual components to make this character. Note that they must all be present, not just some, which has lead to frequent misuse:
    • Must be intelligent: Goes without saying, to be a Magnificent Bastard, the character has to be smart in the first place and use their brain to work towards whatever their end goal may be;
    • Must be a Bastard: While going overboard in how vile the character is can be detrimental, a key aspect is the Bastard part of the trope, whether the character is an out-and-out antagonist in the work, some manner of Villain Protagonist, or something in between, they at least have some unscrupulous qualities to qualify for this trope;
    • Must not be too detestable: Again, there is a ceiling on how bad the character can be before they just become too nefarious, blocking out the Magnificent part of the trope. A genocidal racist or child-raping Sadist aren't going to make the cut;
    • Think on their feet: In addition to being a Chessmaster, a Magnificent Bastard, if the character deals with situations in which their initial plan is ruined, has to be able to pull a Xanatos Speed Chess and at least come up with a competent strategy to make up for lost time, otherwise they fail for being unable to think in tough spots;
    • Have charm: Even if they don't necessarily make every character they meet fall in love with them and can even be detested by others, the audience has to find an amicable social relation to the character, or they are failing to make the impact required for this trope.

  • What to do if a character is listed on a page but has not been approved?: They need to be removed, all candidates need to come through the cleanup thread first. The character could well count but they need to be analyzed properly and voted on first.

  • Do we list Playing With this trope?: No; as a YMMV trope, this cannot be Played With, so we only want examples that are Played Straight.

  • What do I do if I want a character to be listed as a Magnificent Bastard?: The greatest success Complete Monster saw for its cleanup effort was from the invention of the effort post format, so, borrowing from that, a troper wishing to propose a Magnificent Bastard will create such a post in the following format:
    • Begin by describing The work, this will help establish the setting the character is in and for the reader to understand what kind of a scenario they are in;
    • Summarize The character's actions, this will provide a listing for readers to understand what they do and how it applies to this trope because charm and lack of smugness are so crucial, this is a good time to be incorporating exactly the flavor of how they operate to explain this;
    • List circumstances in which the character must Think on their feet, these are times where a wrench might be thrown in their initial plan and they have to adapt on the spot or even come up with a new scheme all together, this is also a good time to explain how the villain reacts to defeat when they have to face it, a true Magnificent Bastard won't break down into tears at the thought of death, they should have known such a possibility could occur and be able to handle it with more dignity;
    • The competition, similar to the Heinous Standard dealt with for a Complete Monster, this section is to deal with how successful the character is in carrying out their plans compared to other characters. While, as a villain, they probably are going to lose in the end, it is good to explain how other characters handle the same situation. There is no exceptionalism case to be made for this trope but explaining the variety helps the reader have a better understanding of the proposal.

  • How do you know when the character's arc is done so they can be proposed? When their tenure as a villain or antagonist finishes. This could happen in a single Story Arc in an entire work, a single work of a franchise, or the whole series in general. We'll show lenience to Long-Runners with constantly recurring candidates or series with outstanding continuities (ex. comic books), and it's entirely possible to count in a work or two but not in general for a reason like Depending on the Writer.

  • What about candidates evil because of external sources? Those Made of Evil can qualify if they show enough individuality and tactical acumen — in other words, they have the personality to fulfill the magnificence requirement. Conversely, those brainwashed, especially if they're a better person without it, may fail the individuality aspect and cannot count.

  • What if they are under orders from a higher-up? Depends. If the boss created the plans down to the letter and the candidate is just following them, sounds like we should discuss the boss instead. However, if the candidate takes creative liberties with the orders, adds their own charm and flair to them, fills in holes in the orders, and/or actively deals with obstacles their boss did not talk about, the candidate shows enough individual thinking to qualify.

  • What about Character Development? An MB is something a character can develop into... a nice person who plots well might become more morally gray as the work goes on and hits the "Bastard" criteria, thus making them viable. Likewise, a Smug Snake might shed their ego, become more understanding of the threat others pose and gain the personality or "Magnificent" criteria, likewise making them viable. Conversely, a character who looks like this trope might suffer from a Sanity Slippage or just get outed as not being as smart as they thought they were and become incompatible with MB.

  • Can an MB be a good guy? Not in the conventional sense... it is required they have at least some dubious traits lest they fail the "Bastard" criteria. That being said, a character who pulls a Heel–Face Turn or eventually stops taking villainous actions is still fair game: as there was a point in time where they were both "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and they've merely adapted as time goes on. Now... if such a character begins showing other issues (i.e.: becomes prone to freak outs or starts getting outwitted) then they're compromising their Magnificence and will probably be deemed a cut. What's important is stylishly operating while at least for some time being willing to take at best underhanded methods to see a job done. A Heel–Face Turn in itself isn't a disqualifier but they do have to have been "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and afterwards can't start slipping on the former front.

  • What about characters whose stories can take different routes?: When proposing a character in a form of media that has them in multiple story routes. Said character must be consistent with their characteristics in all routes. (ex.: Can't have an example who shows promise on one route yet fails in another.) The only exception is if a later installment of the series confirms the character's actions which made them worth proposing are the canon route.

  • Is there a timeframe rule like with Complete Monster?: Yes, please wait two weeks until after the work has concluded before proposing a character (again, usually using the North American air date). As is the case with CM, we want to give a reasonable time frame so that everyone interested in seeing the work has done so and can participate in the discussion without having anything spoiled.

  • What about groups like with Complete Monster?: This is a point of divergence between the two tropes. While CM does not allow for a single entry encompassing more than three characters lest their heinousness for crimes becomes too watered down, with MB as long as they are treated as one "unit" it is acceptable to lump all characters provided they share acts of charm and intelligence.

  • Can I propose my own work's character as a Magnificent Bastard?: No, this is a YMMV subject and the creator of a content is way too biased to be able to evaluate the criteria we're looking for without a second opinion taking over. That being said, you are more than welcome to encourage someone to consume your creation and if they feel a character counts, are more than welcome to suggest them.

Thread rules

When voting a troper must specify the effort post they're voting on and cannot merely vote on "Everything I missed" as in the past it has indicated the poster didn't read the effort post and is guessing instead of analyzing.

Resolved items

In general, a character listed on this trope is considered "settled". This means they should not be challenged unless information used to list them was incorrect or information was missed in the initial discussion.

However, when re-litigating a candidate, the same rules apply for when they were originally proposed. If they do not have five or more upvotes than downvotes for approval upon a re-litigation, including votes from the initial discussion if they do not change, then they are a cut.

This especially applies to the characters listed below, who have been discussed excessively and repeated attempts to get them listed/cut may result in punitive action for bogging down the thread.

Definitely an MB

Definitely not an MB

  • South Park: The show's frequent use of vulgar comedy and mean-spirited humor leaves any potential candidates devoid of the dignity or charm to qualify.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:15:22 AM

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#16951: Apr 4th 2020 at 4:27:20 PM

[up]I like that quote

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
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#16952: Apr 4th 2020 at 4:39:21 PM

Kind of thinking that the description on Music could go like:

Grab your headphones and jam to these tales of devilishly cunning villains.

As for a quote...still looking for some; one that I had found was on GatoPaint's "The Puppet":

"I'm the guilty one behind/Those children look happy inside/Let me set your place around the others."
The Puppet singing about placing the children's souls into the animatronics, GatoPaint's "The Puppet"

Edited by AustinDR on Apr 4th 2020 at 4:39:41 AM

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#16953: Apr 4th 2020 at 4:47:16 PM

@ Mir, You're the expert there, so I'll defer to your judgement.

@ Bull, I literally just took what was in the Fan section. Lemme grab that stuff too.

Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
#16954: Apr 4th 2020 at 5:13:34 PM

As a side note I would like to expand my Shego write up a little bit. I hope that is ok. I know 43 doesn't exactly like that, but I am not proud of the old one. Here is what it would look like.

  • Kim Possible/Bram Stoker's Dracula fanfiction Drakigo: Once the leader of the Transylvanian knights, Shego Dracula forsakes god and willingly becomes a vampire after her beloved Elizabeta kills herself. Years after killing the vampire that turned her, Shego tricks Ronald Stoppable into selling her a house. As well having driven Renfield crazy, Shego has him buy her a backup house. Turning Ronald over to her brides, Shego journeys to London and runs into Stoppable's fiance, Kimberly. Determined to woo Kimberly, Shego takes her on dates and eventually turns her friend Monique into a vampire after feeding on her. Upon being betrayed and wounded, Shego scares Kimberly's location out of Renfield before killing him for betraying her. Even when cornered before she can return to her castle, Shego is prepared to fight to the death. Snarky and clever, Shego Dracula manages to live the rest of her life with her beloved.

Edited by Bullman on Apr 4th 2020 at 7:23:39 AM

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#16955: Apr 4th 2020 at 5:24:29 PM

@Austin I like the header but not the quote, doesn't really strike me as a 'bastard'

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#16956: Apr 4th 2020 at 5:29:33 PM

I honestly think your old one is sufficient but I'll leave it to the thread to decide.

Austin: Also, I agree with Papyru... does the Devil have any snazzy line? Generally I'm not a big fan of quotes that need a line of text underneath giving us the context.

Edited by 43110 on Apr 4th 2020 at 8:31:13 AM

Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
#16957: Apr 4th 2020 at 5:31:25 PM

Well I will happily let the old one stay if the thread thinks it's sufficient. I don't want to be a bother if it's fine as is.

Edited by Bullman on Apr 4th 2020 at 7:33:09 AM

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Lizzid people!
#16958: Apr 4th 2020 at 5:35:28 PM

Mmm...maybe this?

"Pleased to meet you/ Hope you guess my name/ But what's puzzling you Is the nature of my game/ stuck around St. Petersburg/ When I saw it was a time for a change/Killed the Tsar and his ministers/Anastasia screamed in vain"

Edited by AustinDR on Apr 4th 2020 at 5:37:20 AM

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#16959: Apr 4th 2020 at 5:38:42 PM

I like that quote... y'all can go pop those in and the descriptions that have been given thus far: pages aren't locked.

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#16960: Apr 4th 2020 at 5:41:55 PM

How about the opening line from that song.

Please allow me to introduce myself/ I'm a man of wealth and taste/ Been around for a long, long year/ Stole many a man's soul to waste/

Hell maybe even the chorus on its own

Pleased to meet you Hope you guess my name 'Cause what's confusing you is just the Nature of my game

[down] actually, I kind of like the section you proposed, let's go with that.

Edited by papyru30 on Apr 4th 2020 at 6:44:13 AM

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Lizzid people!
#16961: Apr 4th 2020 at 5:43:15 PM

The Man of Wealth and Taste quote was already on the trope page. Mainly chose the one about the tsars because it's where Satan is actually planning.

Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
#16962: Apr 4th 2020 at 5:44:23 PM

43: Done. I added the Thanos quote to Fan Works. I don't have any idea for a description though.

Edited by Bullman on Apr 4th 2020 at 7:44:55 AM

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#16963: Apr 4th 2020 at 6:16:45 PM

That's fine, I'm sure someone will have something. Worse comes to worst I'll think it up.

Oh shit that fan fic version of Thanos has his own character page for me to use [lol]

Edited by 43110 on Apr 4th 2020 at 9:22:05 AM

Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
#16964: Apr 4th 2020 at 6:21:00 PM

[up]Yeah I was surprised to, I just found it and liked the quote. So I proposed it.

Edited by Bullman on Apr 4th 2020 at 8:21:46 AM

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papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
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#16965: Apr 4th 2020 at 6:21:35 PM

Speaking of Fan Works I have a problem with the version of Oolong we have up. For one I think the write up is inaccurate about his motives, the part about him wanting to take over the universe is an offhand line that I'm pretty sure was just a joke. Two, no disrespect to Awesome Kid but I feel like the EP didn't properly represent the video. For one Oolong doesn't have any discernible personality aside from some brief and not very descriptive lines and whatever we can imply from his personality in the actual series, and he also has no real motivation aside from the aforementioned joke. Second, I don't think that this is the kind of video that can have a Magnificent Bastard, there is no dialogue, the entire video is just the creator explaining how the plan would work and the plan is the closest thing the video has to a story.

Here's the video if anybody wants to watch it, it's only ten minutes long. Also here's the original EP

Edited by papyru30 on Apr 4th 2020 at 7:25:37 AM

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Awesomekid42 Since: Jul, 2012
#16966: Apr 4th 2020 at 6:27:07 PM

I'm cool either way with what we do with Oolong

Bullman "Cool. Coolcoolcool." Since: Jun, 2018 Relationship Status: Longing for my OTP
"Cool. Coolcoolcool."
#16967: Apr 4th 2020 at 6:28:20 PM

[up][up] I mean Fanscription is like that, but it also includes voice acting and is genuinely a little longer. I mean if he doesn't talk I guess I agree that he could be cut. But how detailed is it?

Edit: Especially since Awesome is unsure, I think we're fine to cut.

Edited by Bullman on Apr 4th 2020 at 8:36:13 AM

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#16968: Apr 4th 2020 at 6:29:06 PM

Anymore votes on Grey ?

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
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#16969: Apr 4th 2020 at 6:32:49 PM

Awesome himself seemed uncertain on Oolong and I never got around to seeing it to verify, I'd be fine with a cut.

Also Klavice, what did you have from Keyes?

Edited by 43110 on Apr 4th 2020 at 9:35:13 AM

papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
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#16970: Apr 4th 2020 at 6:49:20 PM

Yes to Grey

The video isn't much more detailed than the Write up, it'd just a list of steps Oolong would have to take in order to defeat Whis.

Edited by papyru30 on Apr 4th 2020 at 7:53:07 AM

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#16971: Apr 4th 2020 at 7:06:00 PM

I'm fine cutting oolong

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#16972: Apr 4th 2020 at 7:24:24 PM

Speaking of cuts, I could sworn we decided to cut Lordgenome from Gurren Lagann for the whole sex slave thing.

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Eddy1215 Since: May, 2010
#16973: Apr 4th 2020 at 7:28:39 PM

Hey, I added a description to the new Magnificent Bastards page. Would anybody take a look and see if its good?

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#16974: Apr 4th 2020 at 7:31:40 PM

No, we discussed LG and the majority was to keep.

[up] Ehhhh... I feel like it could be spruced up a little, how about "Fan Fic writers have produced many witty, unscrupulous masterminds, be they versions of canon characters or their own original inventions."

Edited by 43110 on Apr 4th 2020 at 10:36:51 AM

papyru30 The wifi here sucks from South Dakota for school Since: Aug, 2016 Relationship Status: You cannot grasp the true form
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#16975: Apr 4th 2020 at 7:39:29 PM

I like the music one but not the fanworks one. How does this sound

Throughout the countless stories created by fans, there have been Original Characters and canon characters who have proven to be devious and brilliant

[up] Actually I kind of prefer that one.

Edited by papyru30 on Apr 4th 2020 at 8:44:56 AM

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