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During the investigation of recent hollers in the Complete Monster thread, it's become apparent to the staff that an insular, unfriendly culture has evolved in the Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard threads that is causing problems.

Specific issues include:

  • Overzealous hollers on tropers who come into the threads without being familiar with all the rules and traditions of the tropes. And when they are familiar with said rules and traditions, they get accused (with little evidence) of being ban evaders.
  • A few tropers in the thread habitually engage in snotty, impolite mini-modding. There are also regular complaints about excessive, offtopic "socializing" posts.
  • Many many thread regulars barely post/edit anywhere else, making the threads look like they are divorced from the rest of TV Tropes.
  • Following that, there are often complaints about the threads and their regulars violating wiki rules, such as on indexing, crosswicking, example context and example categorization. Some folks are working on resolving the issues, but...
  • Often moderator action against thread regulars leads to a lot of participants suddenly showing up in the moderation threads to protest and speak on their behalf, like a clique.

It is not a super high level problem, but it has been going on for years and we cannot ignore it any longer. There will be a thread in Wiki Talk to discuss the problem; in the meantime there is a moratorium on further Complete Monster and Magnificent Bastard example discussion until we have gotten this sorted out.

Update: The new threads have been made and can be found here:

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  • Why do a cleanup?: This trope definitely exists and has a well documented history of use. That being said, it frequently gets misused to a character who meets one of the components, namely that they are smart, charming while not necessarily even being a villain, or create good plans. While these are components, there is also a certain personality required, not to mention that all of the above are required to be present for a character to be a true Magnificent Bastard. As the trope attracts interest, it unfortunately brings in a lot of misuse and I thought the best way to rectify this would be a Perpetual Cleanup Thread, as is being done and has seen success with Complete Monster.

  • What makes a Magnificent Bastard: Below is a list of the individual components to make this character. Note that they must all be present, not just some, which has lead to frequent misuse:
    • Must be intelligent: Goes without saying, to be a Magnificent Bastard, the character has to be smart in the first place and use their brain to work towards whatever their end goal may be;
    • Must be a Bastard: While going overboard in how vile the character is can be detrimental, a key aspect is the Bastard part of the trope, whether the character is an out-and-out antagonist in the work, some manner of Villain Protagonist, or something in between, they at least have some unscrupulous qualities to qualify for this trope;
    • Must not be too detestable: Again, there is a ceiling on how bad the character can be before they just become too nefarious, blocking out the Magnificent part of the trope. A genocidal racist or child-raping Sadist aren't going to make the cut;
    • Think on their feet: In addition to being a Chessmaster, a Magnificent Bastard, if the character deals with situations in which their initial plan is ruined, has to be able to pull a Xanatos Speed Chess and at least come up with a competent strategy to make up for lost time, otherwise they fail for being unable to think in tough spots;
    • Have charm: Even if they don't necessarily make every character they meet fall in love with them and can even be detested by others, the audience has to find an amicable social relation to the character, or they are failing to make the impact required for this trope.

  • What to do if a character is listed on a page but has not been approved?: They need to be removed, all candidates need to come through the cleanup thread first. The character could well count but they need to be analyzed properly and voted on first.

  • Do we list Playing With this trope?: No; as a YMMV trope, this cannot be Played With, so we only want examples that are Played Straight.

  • What do I do if I want a character to be listed as a Magnificent Bastard?: The greatest success Complete Monster saw for its cleanup effort was from the invention of the effort post format, so, borrowing from that, a troper wishing to propose a Magnificent Bastard will create such a post in the following format:
    • Begin by describing The work, this will help establish the setting the character is in and for the reader to understand what kind of a scenario they are in;
    • Summarize The character's actions, this will provide a listing for readers to understand what they do and how it applies to this trope because charm and lack of smugness are so crucial, this is a good time to be incorporating exactly the flavor of how they operate to explain this;
    • List circumstances in which the character must Think on their feet, these are times where a wrench might be thrown in their initial plan and they have to adapt on the spot or even come up with a new scheme all together, this is also a good time to explain how the villain reacts to defeat when they have to face it, a true Magnificent Bastard won't break down into tears at the thought of death, they should have known such a possibility could occur and be able to handle it with more dignity;
    • The competition, similar to the Heinous Standard dealt with for a Complete Monster, this section is to deal with how successful the character is in carrying out their plans compared to other characters. While, as a villain, they probably are going to lose in the end, it is good to explain how other characters handle the same situation. There is no exceptionalism case to be made for this trope but explaining the variety helps the reader have a better understanding of the proposal.

  • How do you know when the character's arc is done so they can be proposed? When their tenure as a villain or antagonist finishes. This could happen in a single Story Arc in an entire work, a single work of a franchise, or the whole series in general. We'll show lenience to Long-Runners with constantly recurring candidates or series with outstanding continuities (ex. comic books), and it's entirely possible to count in a work or two but not in general for a reason like Depending on the Writer.

  • What about candidates evil because of external sources? Those Made of Evil can qualify if they show enough individuality and tactical acumen — in other words, they have the personality to fulfill the magnificence requirement. Conversely, those brainwashed, especially if they're a better person without it, may fail the individuality aspect and cannot count.

  • What if they are under orders from a higher-up? Depends. If the boss created the plans down to the letter and the candidate is just following them, sounds like we should discuss the boss instead. However, if the candidate takes creative liberties with the orders, adds their own charm and flair to them, fills in holes in the orders, and/or actively deals with obstacles their boss did not talk about, the candidate shows enough individual thinking to qualify.

  • What about Character Development? An MB is something a character can develop into... a nice person who plots well might become more morally gray as the work goes on and hits the "Bastard" criteria, thus making them viable. Likewise, a Smug Snake might shed their ego, become more understanding of the threat others pose and gain the personality or "Magnificent" criteria, likewise making them viable. Conversely, a character who looks like this trope might suffer from a Sanity Slippage or just get outed as not being as smart as they thought they were and become incompatible with MB.

  • Can an MB be a good guy? Not in the conventional sense... it is required they have at least some dubious traits lest they fail the "Bastard" criteria. That being said, a character who pulls a Heel–Face Turn or eventually stops taking villainous actions is still fair game: as there was a point in time where they were both "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and they've merely adapted as time goes on. Now... if such a character begins showing other issues (i.e.: becomes prone to freak outs or starts getting outwitted) then they're compromising their Magnificence and will probably be deemed a cut. What's important is stylishly operating while at least for some time being willing to take at best underhanded methods to see a job done. A Heel–Face Turn in itself isn't a disqualifier but they do have to have been "Magnificent" and a "Bastard" at the same time and afterwards can't start slipping on the former front.

  • What about characters whose stories can take different routes?: When proposing a character in a form of media that has them in multiple story routes. Said character must be consistent with their characteristics in all routes. (ex.: Can't have an example who shows promise on one route yet fails in another.) The only exception is if a later installment of the series confirms the character's actions which made them worth proposing are the canon route.

  • Is there a timeframe rule like with Complete Monster?: Yes, please wait two weeks until after the work has concluded before proposing a character (again, usually using the North American air date). As is the case with CM, we want to give a reasonable time frame so that everyone interested in seeing the work has done so and can participate in the discussion without having anything spoiled.

  • What about groups like with Complete Monster?: This is a point of divergence between the two tropes. While CM does not allow for a single entry encompassing more than three characters lest their heinousness for crimes becomes too watered down, with MB as long as they are treated as one "unit" it is acceptable to lump all characters provided they share acts of charm and intelligence.

  • Can I propose my own work's character as a Magnificent Bastard?: No, this is a YMMV subject and the creator of a content is way too biased to be able to evaluate the criteria we're looking for without a second opinion taking over. That being said, you are more than welcome to encourage someone to consume your creation and if they feel a character counts, are more than welcome to suggest them.

Thread rules

When voting a troper must specify the effort post they're voting on and cannot merely vote on "Everything I missed" as in the past it has indicated the poster didn't read the effort post and is guessing instead of analyzing.

Resolved items

In general, a character listed on this trope is considered "settled". This means they should not be challenged unless information used to list them was incorrect or information was missed in the initial discussion.

However, when re-litigating a candidate, the same rules apply for when they were originally proposed. If they do not have five or more upvotes than downvotes for approval upon a re-litigation, including votes from the initial discussion if they do not change, then they are a cut.

This especially applies to the characters listed below, who have been discussed excessively and repeated attempts to get them listed/cut may result in punitive action for bogging down the thread.

Definitely an MB

Definitely not an MB

  • South Park: The show's frequent use of vulgar comedy and mean-spirited humor leaves any potential candidates devoid of the dignity or charm to qualify.

Edited by GastonRabbit on Aug 31st 2023 at 4:15:22 AM

STARCRUSHER99 The Moron from one of my unhealthy obsessions (Captain) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Moron
#56526: Aug 24th 2021 at 9:18:08 AM

Also, she straight up rapes Angel himself in his sleep at the beginning of the season - she has a good run for a second there, but it's a no in the long-term. Don't worry though, keeping an eye on Holland, Lilah, and Lindsey for sure

Also Mir, you still gonna take James from "Heartthrob"?

Edited by STARCRUSHER99 on Aug 24th 2021 at 12:20:38 PM

username2527 Since: Nov, 2013
#56527: Aug 24th 2021 at 9:18:21 AM

Yes to President James.

Is that the last of the KND candidates? I honestly can't remember anyone else that may count but it certainly will be a pleasant surprise to see multiple keepers.

SkyCat32 The Draftsman of Doom from tall grass (Five Year Plan) Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
The Draftsman of Doom
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#56529: Aug 24th 2021 at 9:25:22 AM

[up][up][up]Yep. Just give me a bit.

Have one or two others I want to knock off first

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
EmeraldEmperor Lies and Violence! Since: Oct, 2020
Lies and Violence!
#56530: Aug 24th 2021 at 9:42:01 AM

[tup] imposter dude.

Lindsey I think has too humiliating an end — he fully expects a fight to the death with Angel, who instead offhandedly tells Lorne to unceremoniously gun him down while they're doing other stuff.

Edited by EmeraldEmperor on Aug 24th 2021 at 9:50:52 AM

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STARCRUSHER99 The Moron from one of my unhealthy obsessions (Captain) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Moron
#56532: Aug 24th 2021 at 9:43:51 AM

[up][up]I'll talk about it more when I get there if I think he's worth a talk, but while it isn't the best, it's not as bad as it could be given the circumstances - and I say that as someone who dismissed him for that exact reason before I rewatched the scene. For a start, the fact that Lorne kills him is a point both for and against him - yes, it's Lorne killing him, but also, literally how could he have possibly expected Lorne to be the one to kill him? He's such a pacifist that killing Lindsey literally gives him cancer. It's not the best, but it's not the worst either.

Edited by STARCRUSHER99 on Aug 24th 2021 at 1:12:18 PM

Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#56533: Aug 24th 2021 at 10:11:00 AM

'Yes' to the Sussy Baka

There will be a couple more KND baddies coming very soon.

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#56534: Aug 24th 2021 at 10:18:19 AM

[up][up]Its still weirdly unexpected and anticlimatic how he goes out. When you remember he's the closest Angel has to an Arch-Enemy after Holtz and Angelus.

"That's right mortal. By channeling my divine rage into power, I have forged a new instrument in which to destroy you."
STARCRUSHER99 The Moron from one of my unhealthy obsessions (Captain) Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
The Moron
#56535: Aug 24th 2021 at 10:27:51 AM

Like I said, if I think he's worth a talk at the end that's when we'll talk about him, I'm just saying that after just watching it, I don't think it's as bad as it could be. When embarrassing deaths are everywhere in the franchise, being gunned down by the literal last person on Earth he could've expected to do it isn't that bad.

Edited by STARCRUSHER99 on Aug 24th 2021 at 1:36:35 PM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#56537: Aug 24th 2021 at 11:12:22 AM

Okay, with a MAJOR thanks to Ravok for double-checking this for me. From Ray Bradbury's The Martian Chronicles. Quoth this wiki:

The Martian Chronicles is a series of short stories by Ray Bradbury collected into a single book (published in the UK as The Silver Locusts), describing episodes from a future history in which Earth sends several manned expeditions to, and eventually colonizes, the planet Mars. (The stories, written in the 1940s and 1950s, depict the planet as habitable and — initially — inhabited.)

As originally written, the sequence begins with the first manned expedition to Mars in the distant future year of 1999. The stories were revised in 1997 to push it back to 2030.

The story we're interested in, Usher II, takes place in 2005 (pushed back to 2036). The candidate is William Stendahl. This was a zero-context entry that I removed, but think he actually qualifies.

Who is William Stendahl and what does he do?

The story opens with Stendahl—who had inherited millions, thus allowing him to formulate his plan—looking with approval over a newly-built house, which along with the death of all nearby life (animals, not people) and machines that blot out the sun is meant to evoke The Fall of the House of Usher (hence the title of the story). Stendahl recalls how 30 years prior, on Earth, there was a "Great Fire"; this was after the Moral Guardians has gradually made their presence known; even decades later, Stendahl is aggrieved by the Burning, which included his own library of thousands of books.

Soon after, a "Garrett, Investigator of Moral Climate" arrives to inspect the house. He tells Stendahl it will be torn down, less than 24-hours after construction was finished. Stendahl has Garrett inspect the house (as he'll need to issue a full report), before having a robot ape kill him. Stendahl has a man named Pikes (who he had met three years ago; Pikes was a great horror movie actor, who basically suffered the same fate Stendahl did, since horror films were stamped out like books or anything else) create a robot of Garrett to return to Moral Climates; this is not the only robot they use.

Later on, there is a party with many of Stendahl's enemies, who "carefully, carefully, he had met and befriended each of them on Earth in the last year". He even convinces them to wear costumes.

However, he is interrupted by Pikes, who informs Stendahl that Garrett was just a robot…which Stendahl realizes isn't a problem, since they sent a robot back anyway. The real Garrett shows up.

One of the guests sees another guest being murdered (in the style of one of Poe's stories; this is how all the guests die), before seeing the guest healthy; the victim was just a robot, as are the others.

Stendahl eventually lures Garrett to a room, chains him up, and walls him in, but first revealing that Garrett actually WILL die, and that the other victims were the actual people, with the robots being the ones who witnessed the deaths.

Garrett dies, and the house collapses like in Poe's original story, while Stendahl and Pikes fly away via helicopter, victorious, with Pikes reciting the last part of Poe's story.

Is he Magnificent?

Without a doubt. In the course of at least a year, Stendahl befriends numerous people (who he secretly hates); creates robot duplicates of these people; creates an elaborate house with various death traps; kills all his enemies while tricking at least one into thinking the duplicates are being killed; and even gets to destroy the house in the way of Poe's original story. He ends the story completely and utterly victorious.

Even the one time his plans go awry—when the first Garrett turns out to be a robot—isn't a problem, as a robot is sent back anyways,

Is he a Bastard? Too much?

Stendahl is definitely a bastard, killing numerous people. That said, the victims are Moral Guardians, and while some might consider killing them Disproportionate Retribution, that's not how it's portrayed in the story itself. Stendahl is at WORST a Villain Protagonist, if nor an outright Anti-Hero.

While Garrett's death is a bit drawn out (and definitely unpleasant), I personally don't think this is enough to disqualify him. It seems kinda like Edward Lionheart (I gotta see that movie BTW).

Conclusion

My first MB I hope.

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LoreDeluxe Since: May, 2013
#56538: Aug 24th 2021 at 11:14:41 AM

Yes to the Imposter?

Guessing at more KND potentials, wasn't there a fat German kid that was number 5's arch? I remember he actually she being a competent rival.

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jjjj2 from Arrakis Since: Jul, 2015
#56540: Aug 24th 2021 at 11:19:44 AM

Welcome ACW! Happy for the CM curator to grace us with his presence. Honestly the death being drawn out helps his keep for me. Simply killing Asshole Victims who perpetuate what seems to be a oppressive state might not be bad enough, but torturing one does seem to give further bastard points. Although I will ask is it stated that purges are happening? Regardless [tup] Stendahl.

Edited by jjjj2 on Aug 24th 2021 at 2:22:21 PM

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ImperialMajestyXO Since: Nov, 2015
#56541: Aug 24th 2021 at 11:23:45 AM

[tup] to Stendahl (Roald's wickeder cousin?)

futuremoviewriter Since: Jun, 2014
#56542: Aug 24th 2021 at 11:24:41 AM

Good job ACW. [tup] to Stendahl. We read the whole Martian Chronicles anthology and watched certain episodes of The Ray Bradbury Theater—including that one—in English in I think my third year of high school.

Hoping to get to both Cutter and Rev-9 very soon.

While I noticed Nefario and El Macho were under MB Versus MB, they weren't under MB Team Ups too. I went ahead and added them in yesterday though.

Would Thinker & Bloodsport count as a CM and MB Team Up? While Thinker is being forced to for his life, he still helps Bloodsport and the team despite that.

Edited by futuremoviewriter on Aug 24th 2021 at 11:33:48 AM

ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#56543: Aug 24th 2021 at 11:31:43 AM

I think this is the first MB for Bradbury; we recently got I believe his first CM(s) not too long ago.

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Ravok RIP Toriyama Since: Jun, 2015 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
RIP Toriyama
#56544: Aug 24th 2021 at 11:35:08 AM

Stendahl's an easy Keeper indeed, his victims are Moral Guardians ramped up to new heights but their fates are pretty damn brutal. Magnificence ain't even an issue of course with how awesome and Wicked Cultured he is. Thanks a bunch for introducing me to this one, it was great and Stendahl a tremendous MB, good work!

Tonight I dine on monkey soup.
ACW Unofficial Wiki Curator for Complete Monster from Arlington, VA (near Washington, D.C.) Since: Jul, 2009
#56546: Aug 24th 2021 at 11:44:18 AM

I'll try and do the writeup tomorrow. My first MB writeup, so I may need some help, but I think I know which potholes I wanna use (The Fall of the House of Usher, Edgar Allan Poe, Nasty Party, Book Burning, Moral Guardians).

Edited by ACW on Aug 24th 2021 at 2:44:31 PM

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miraculous Goku Black (Apprentice)
Goku Black
#56547: Aug 24th 2021 at 11:54:58 AM

[tup]Stendhal..

Good job on your first ep acw

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TellAll111 Since: Jun, 2010
#56549: Aug 24th 2021 at 12:11:55 PM

[tup] for Grandfather, Naseri, Jimmy, the imposter, and Stendahl.

Okay, what the hell, I'd like to claim Zhukov, if I'm allowed.

erazor0707 The Unknown Unknown from The Infinitude of Meh Since: Dec, 2014 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
The Unknown Unknown
#56550: Aug 24th 2021 at 12:52:10 PM

[tup] Naseri, Jimmy, Imposter, and Stendahl.

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