No, not exactly. A dark OC is fine, but the sudden and unexpected violence and gore might make some players uneasy, and it really seems to come out of the blue. Can you please tell us what you intend to do with this scene?
Also, the attack on the workers is technically an autohit, as Baron Green is controlling them all. Particularly the autokills and bites.
We understand that RL and time constraints are an issue and we don't mean to rush you.
Sorry, I got on my computer and thank you for waiting.
2. This is partially an Establishing Character Moment for Tsuchigumo, she's a humanoid abomination based off of hungry ghosts (Gashadakuro if I've got that right), Split Mouth Women, Onibaba and that sort of thing. She's meant to be creepy, disturbing and out of sync with the rest of the world. (Her babbling) and the ramped up blood and gore is supposed to fit that idea that she doesn't belong in this world.
3. Basically, the plan I had would be that Tsuchigumo crosses blades, gives a diatribe on honor, gets bored and leaves-it allows for her to creep everyone out, noy kill anyone and leave. This establishes her as a threat, horrifying and a good bad guy for this rp. Not the bad guy, but still...
4. As for the workmen, I'm used to the gms nameless npcs to be cannon fodder-I apologize to Green.
Shold I still change it?
edited 26th Jul '16 10:29:33 PM by TroyandHawk
Good to be back2 We understand that that may be the case in other rps, but please change it to an attempt, versus an autohit. We generally don't use autohits on any characters unless it's explicitly allowed by the player involved.
3. That would be fine.
4.Yes, we'd like you to change the parts about her killing the workers. Violence is fine, just keep in mind that excessive gore might disturb some players. Please keep it PG-13 (ish).
edited 27th Jul '16 8:38:36 AM by GhostElm
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Greg (Baron Green) won't have internet access for a few days, so he won't be present here starting Wednesday. Please proceed without him then, if it's possible. He'll most likely return on Friday. Thank you
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edited 22nd Aug '16 4:26:42 PM by AqueousBunnies
Sorry for the double post, but I decided to make Yama something of a pervert. See, I cannot stand being unoriginal, so I took what was going to be a gritty and edgy character and have made him into a silent pervert type of guy. Someone who would be a deadpan snarker is it wasn't for the fact he cannot talk.
Please allow me to introduce myself, I am a man of wealth and taste. Nice to meet you, hope you can guess my name.Okay, updates, finally finished with adding updated information to the OP in the signups, please check it out here.

Yep. Discussion thread just doesn't get much use, is all.
we will survive.