Either way, I made some progress, what do you think, I let myself inspire from TerraforMARS if that wasn't obvious.
"One may feel fear in the face of danger so long as one banishes fear when danger actually arrives"A fox, mantis, crab, octopus, and human hybrid. Sounds pretty cool, but I wonder how she got that. She'll be a formidable opponent to go up against since she's a walking Swiss Army Knife. (Not that my character isn't any different.) Will she be armed with conventional weapons?
Anyways, there's that explosive collar part. Is she a slave or battle thrall of some sort working for a secret shadow organization?
Hmm, so far we've got the following:
- A woman who's actually 10 years who doesn't know she's a gynoid and might explode from the revelation of it.
- A legendary bounty hunter who's suffering from PTSD, depression, paranoia, alcoholism, and tinnitus.
- A walking bio-engineered superweapon that is one with the animals and with an insect.
- A rocker turned vigilante cyborg street samurai that fights corruption.
I'm answering in order of asking:
- She was created via Gene-Splicing as an agent for Kaiser Neo
- She's got the Needler and I'm thinking about adding a Heat/Vibro-Blade for CCQ without serum injection.
- She was created by Kaiser Neo, though at least in her early years she was... not as obident as they wanted her to be (one could say she... ended the contracts of some scientists at the laboratory... violently and permanently if you catch my drift.), which is why her project was only regarded as a partial success. The only reason why they left her alive is that her production was expensive and they figured it would be more cost effective to just force her to do what they said than to create another hybrid. And, as time moved on she gradually came to accept her status as property for Kaiser-Neo, which is why she now doesn't need to be forced anymore.
edited 6th Dec '15 9:14:18 AM by Sergey_Smirnov
"One may feel fear in the face of danger so long as one banishes fear when danger actually arrives"The four mentioned applications look great so far guys, though sorry I haven't said much. I'm in love with Xenoblade Chronicles X, so that's what I've been doing. Though, as a spiritual twin/inverse(?) of Destiny Drive Third I can say Mecha technology has improved (we actually do have Mechs). However, whereas DDT focused more on Giant Robots, the Mechanical Armors in Cyberphile are more Knightmare Frame and Skell than Machine Gods. That brings up another point: The place this new technology has would be more focused on than Cyberphile. So honestly, barring certain changes, the Destiny Drive Third manual actually shares a lot with Cyberphile. However...
Like I said, love Xenoblade Chronicles X, so it'll be a pretty random thing when I finally fill out the Cyberphile Manual. Still, this is mostly stuff I consider pretty minor (since the Vitality Underground Discussion is the knowledge hub), so I'm more incline to simply show it in action than yap. Though if you have questions please do fire away.
"The Omniverse is the collection of all possibilities, and all possibilities must eventually come to pass."Well I'm a flithy American so America, but I'm not at all imitately familiar with any cities so I wouldn't be able to portray it properly. So, given the fact the technology is pretty rampant and there's more or less a war between the megacorps to become god-emperor... I would say a lot of places have become rather warped, so take your pick.
"The Omniverse is the collection of all possibilities, and all possibilities must eventually come to pass."I don't know American cities very well, being a somewhat antipodean. I have been to Seattle (and a town near-ish called Auburn), LA and San Francisco but I was only up there for about a month.
We can have a made up city or a particular, modified one - I don't mind, just wanted to know for my backstory. Catherine has a repair shop, I figured it'd be in the main city we're R Ping in (if there is a main city for the setting).
“Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too?”Okay, now its much better, still needs much work but at least better than before.
And regarding the place: I'm from Europe so my knowledge of American cities is... limited. I would be fine with anything really.
edited 7th Dec '15 12:55:14 AM by Sergey_Smirnov
"One may feel fear in the face of danger so long as one banishes fear when danger actually arrives"That post is fucking cool. I kind of wish I knew how to format in Tvtropes. Damn codes, what's that thing called? The thing that makes all those fonts smaller.
From the Experiment Log, I can genuinely empathize with the character already. She came from a can. She refused to follow orders and now they want to get rid of her. They're toying with genes and as a result they're toying with the person as well.
"In the grim darkness of the future, there is only war."Thanks, since Mireille was planned as a test subject I thought my application should reflect this,
and for this look you need to wrap the text with
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I'd say yes, currently also in a slump, so it will take a while until I'm finished
edited 7th Dec '15 5:55:55 AM by Sergey_Smirnov
"One may feel fear in the face of danger so long as one banishes fear when danger actually arrives"Thanks.
Today I don't feel so creative today, is this common?
Teslaa, I've taken time to read your backstory and there are a few errors from certain sections:
1. "CAT tried to stop them as well but they new her weakness to EMP,"
-It should be "Knew" rather than "new"
2. "was designed to be ascetically pleasing."
-It should be aesthetically pleasing.
3. "and she was stronger than see looked"
-Stronger than she looked
edited 7th Dec '15 9:03:58 AM by Victor_Skye
"In the grim darkness of the future, there is only war."Btw, what do you think, should I even expand the list further now, or be contempt with what I got here? Maybe the RP could start with the first fieldtest of her.
edited 7th Dec '15 2:31:05 PM by Sergey_Smirnov
"One may feel fear in the face of danger so long as one banishes fear when danger actually arrives"Thanks, I'll fix up those typos shortly. I wrote it pretty late and I have issues with spelling so I stuff up like that a lot.
Starting from her first field test could be interesting.
edited 7th Dec '15 2:55:32 PM by Lt.BGob
“Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too?”http://www.cracked.com/blog/4-reasons-to-forgive-yourself-being-bad-speller/

Yours will be awesome, Sergey! Don't stress, it's not a competition. Just have fun with your application.
“Isn't it enough to see that a garden is beautiful without having to believe that there are fairies at the bottom of it too?”