Hi
Locking (for now) per post
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Hi
Re-opened and moved back to IP.
I don't see 'first sight' anywhere in the picture, shock at being way too close yes.
I'm not seeing the trope either.
Alternative suggestion
◊ from One Hundred And One Dalmatians. There's a small squiggle in the top image, but we can either edit that out or replace it, so that doesn't matter.
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◊ is good too.
edited 29th Aug '15 2:56:25 AM by Morgenthaler
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Eh, just looks like two people looking at each other.
Maybe the top 3 panels from the right strip. A bit of just outright telling though.
Alternate version, top 3 panels. May not be clear enough.
Both from Yandere Kanojo
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I like the 101 Dalmatians pic and either in .
EDIT: Here we go. I flipped the text in the blocks in the second manga suggestion.
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edited 30th Aug '15 4:27:54 PM by Willbyr
The manga one works.
Hi
Ummmmm...
Oh wait, there's two?
They look similar; was one of them edited?
The manga has that weird situation where it's published in two magazines at once. So both versions have similar first chapters.
No, the other one.
The first manga (8.2) is better at illustrating the trope, but the second (8.3) is neater due to being much shorter, while still being clear enough.
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8.3 seems clear enough. Meanwhile, 8.1 could show anything to those unfamiliar to 101 Dalmations.
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I prefer 8.3, 8.2 kind of insults my intelligence.
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Bump; any other thoughts or suggestions, or should we go ahead with a crowner?
I agree. Those Captain Obvious narrations are obnoxious.
There is no Planet B
I'm not really keen on the suggestions. I don't like the manga at all. The best so far I think is the dalmatins, but I believe we could do better.
Sadly, I don't have any ideas right now.
Crowner time?
Hi
Crowner time.
There is no Planet B
Could we add an option "leave imageless until better suggestion"?
Edit to add: I added that to the crowner.
edited 8th Sep '15 3:36:04 AM by XFllo
Hi
Bump for votes; two in the green, one in consensus range.
Hi
One more bump...right now neither option in the green is in consensus range.
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Calling this as a BUPKIS page. I'll tag it shortly; locking up.
Hi
Forgot to actually lock it; doing so now.
Crown Description:
Nominations for replacement images:
Opening suggestion: DeviantArt artwork
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You've got roaming bands of armed, aggressive, tyrannical plumbers coming to your door, saying "Use our service, or else!"