Any more information about the RP?
Also, formatting.
Why only vidya's and anime?
And then there was silenceBecause, the Cartoon universe is took over by The Darkening. It's Remains of the cartoon universe are allowed for entry, But you had to PM me.
The Darkening came from a video game called: Corpse Party. (If you hate it, I suggest you to have another name of this dark cloud.)
Why i wanted to make this RP is because it's the ultimate fate of a Floran Hero known as Strifer Stabber.
There is a source of the darkening, Creepypastas, Heartles, and Black-Hearted Demons.
But it's a spoiler, Don't look at it.
And that's it.
I care for Starbound: My universe, My home, My unification. For the Peglaci as we know it.Hmm...
Let me be blunt for a moment: I don't think this RP will work well.
This bit is okay, but seems more like something put forward for brainstorming rather then signups. Though I'm curious what this "game" is.
I'll be blunt: restrictions on genres on any crossover RP is never a good idea, unless it's series specific things based on good reason (and not reasons like "that universe was overcome, I mean reasons like "we can't allow Dragon Ball Z characters because they are much too powerful for the plot"), and even then, it's still rather iffy with me (that problem can easily be fixed with Nerfing). Plus, not everyone here is into video games and manga: What if someone wanted to bring in Frollo from Lord Of The Rings, or the Tenth Doctor from Doctor Who?
And also, not everyone here has played Starbound or Terraria. In fact, I think the number of people who haven't outweighs those who have. (I myself played and enjoyed it, but my computer despises it so.)
Fair enough, though you'd be astounded at how easy it is for someone to just say they are 15.
This is usually a given, though it's always a good idea to remind people. Though termination at the first act seems a bit excessive. If someone is actively autohitting and godmodding in rapid succession, then maybe some form of disciplinary action is needed.
As for the two characters at once: understandable, it's your first RP. But "termination" for trying to bring in a second character is a bit too harsh, imo.
Not going to comment on your character since that's not what I'm here for, but this is formatted poorly. A better way to format this would be
Name: Strife Stabber
Universe:Starbound Race: Floran Personality: Very, Very helpful, Hates other florans that stabs the Hylotl. Friendly, Likes meat: But he likes Hylotl Foods.
Appearince: Has Light blue skin, Wears the Survivalist outfit, Has 4 flowers on his air along with a dagger on his back.
Gender (Also optional!): Male.
You can also add bullet points to make it seem more "offishul" (that's with an asterisk(*) or * like this)
Fairly interesting, if very Enix-Y. Though I'd recommend a name other then True Org XII, something that you preferably made yourself.
hoboy
Firstly, this is more of a pet peeve for me, but "even anime and Video games" isn't a great way to word things. Instead, try something like "the entire Multiverse is in peril". This not only alludes to the above restriction problem, but sounds a bit more professional.
Secondly, is my biggest complaint, "One Floran Hero: Strifer Stabber Or known as Toki Namura, Who is the leader of all Anime and Video games' universes."
No. Just no. This tells me that this is more of a fanfiction with a bunch of strangers helping out rather then a collaborative effort to make an enjoyable RP. I'm not saying a leader character is bad, but you make it seem as if he's the main character. ''No roleplay should have a single main character. Ever.'
"Why i wanted to make this RP is because it's the ultimate fate of a Floran Hero known as Strifer Stabber."
And that outright confirms my fear.
But it's a spoiler, Don't look at it.
Don't bring up plot spoilers, ever. Not even in spoiler text.
And then there was silenceYou are right......I should fix things that are off.
Well, It's a bad idea...
I should fix it.
First of all, Your opinions, I guess the first one is okay, But the others.....It's under polished.
I'll try to polish it more.
I care for Starbound: My universe, My home, My unification. For the Peglaci as we know it.It's fine. Again, first roleplay, never gonna be the best. I'm glad you actually heeded my advice, though: an unfortunate amount of people tend to just go "NO I IS PERFECT" and then wonder why no one signed up. Hope to see this become a good rp in the future!
And then there was silenceI feel like this was intentional on your part, but it still has me raise an eyebrow.
Being serious here now though, Trip seems about right with his prediction. No offense to you, but in my personal opinion it doesn't seem like you're fit to run a RP as a GM just yet. For starters, your formatting ability needs work. I also suggest bullets since they're IMO easy to get a hang on and sort stuff rather nicely.
Secondly, while I don't mind limiting medias of choice - like, keep an Anime-based RP, why not - choosing specific franchises while also claiming this to be a multiverse crossover thing is simply contradicting yourself. Nota bene, I'm one of the people who know nothing about Starbound or Terraria.
Also, oh my goodness, there are so many words and so little meaning in that opening post. It really does looks like some oddball fanfiction given how there's "True Organization XIII" and all that. I don't agree that having a main character in such a thing is bad, but making it look like it's basically "Strife Stabber does awesome things and others watch" kind of deal is asking yourself for minuscule to nonexistent interest.
My suggestion is that you work on your formatting first and then try to join some RP yourself before attempting your own. Hopefully you can make use of at least some of this advice and try to make your RP once you're prepared. :)
How do lizards fly?frodo and frollo are totally the same
And then there was silenceOops, Still needed more polishing. ( Besides, I am a a good R Per, My improved RP skills was in march. Now in Creepy October. But i am bad at starting RP sign ups once i can get the hang of it. 8 Days left okie? I am not joking.)
Still learning how to use Text formatting.
Oh and one more thing...I will make improvements to the Sign up page after the deadline.
Almost forgot, There is unlimited slots for the RP. I might add one rule in later.
edited 2nd Oct '14 3:55:12 PM by TheBloodMasterVX
I care for Starbound: My universe, My home, My unification. For the Peglaci as we know it. You're such a troll.
I'll add to what Fergie said and say your grammar needs work, too.
Oh boy you haven't even seen 10% of my power.
And then there was silenceI know that i hate lying, But i'll try not to.
I am improving my sign up page so, Don't try to harass me.
Never try to harass me or else: You will not be in the RP. No kidding.
I don't like bullying. ( Just trust me. I am pretty honest.)
I care for Starbound: My universe, My home, My unification. For the Peglaci as we know it.Eh, my trolling's more like friendly riffing, never meant in malice.
And then there was silenceI was joking when I was calling Trip a troll. That said, I wasn't joking when I said your grammar is bad, and I doubt Fergie was joking when he said you're probably not ready to GM yet.
The voice of thy brother's blood crieth unto me from the groundHehehe.
Is my GM ready?
After 2 updates from thursday, I made sense of the info and makes it readable, with text formating and headers.
By the way, Did you like my sign up info?
I made it polish and shine. (Warning: Spelling errors ahoy!)
I care for Starbound: My universe, My home, My unification. For the Peglaci as we know it.Question: When did you make your account? Because some of the markup seems broken.
And then there was silenceI made it yesturday.
Because i was bored: The reason?
Is because i wanted to RP with many people in a special crossover. The Rp contains Halo, Starbound (If you haven't heard of it, Go look into the Starbounder Wiki.) Kingdom hearts 1 and 2, Terraria, Left for dead, Super mario galaxy 1 and 2, Dragon Ball Z ( During Wrath of the Dragon.), Hetalia Axis Powers, Corpse Party, Naruto, Spongebob Squarepants (This was a universe was survived by The Darkening. Red Mist was included because, Squidward was kidnapped right?), The Elder Scrolls: Skyrim, And many more! (Included, More anime and Video games: Touhou, The legend of Zelda, Chrono Cross, Chrono Trigger, One Piece, Super Hydlide, Banjo Kazooie, And Many others are included!)
So, will it gets popular?
I care for Starbound: My universe, My home, My unification. For the Peglaci as we know it.The reason I ask is that that probably has something to do with why markup is all phucked.
As for the second part, that's a little oversaturated for my tastes, but I don't want to shoot down all of your ideas, so go for it, I guess.
And then there was silence1st Idea: The main idea is the Heavenly Host Elementary school in the closed spaces gets too full for the hurting spirits to live in, Although The Darkening gets too tight for the closed spaces to carry from the devoured spirits it has. So, The Closed spaces burst, Allowing The darkening to get bigger and bigger that it can go to the outside word, Then into the cartoon universe. It caused massive amounts of damage to the universe. That lead to the Cartoon universe Get devouered after it flew away. (Although, Pieces of the Surviving Cartoon universes flew away from fear.)
2nd Idea: The Hero, Also known as Toki. His universe is now targeted by The Darkening. When a mysterious portal opened in the sky, He then went into it to save his life, But not his race itself. He lands in the Steven's Universe. After his universe gets eaten, He finds some friends along the way and the invention of traveling through universes was shown to the whole 2 universes. Leaving the Hero to start his journey.
3rd idea: The Hero's goal is to halt the darkening, By sealing or destroying it with a powerful beam of light. The RP consists of 10 long arcs and seasons. Each arc or season has a saga in it. Right now it's The journey Arc. Each arc contains 4 or more sagas. This will help you to understand what you are in.
And that's it.
I care for Starbound: My universe, My home, My unification. For the Peglaci as we know it.Interest check is now avaible!
Somewhat...Anyway, The main Hero will be changed from Toki to.....
- Drum Roll*
- Dramatic Silence*
And it's: Uub! From Dragon Ball Z/GT! (My Favorite! Yay!)
Also Positive news:
2 Days left till this RP starts! Better hurry the sign ups up!
It's been a while...
I care for Starbound: My universe, My home, My unification. For the Peglaci as we know it.Since I figure you might as well start somewhere, and I want to see what happens.
- Name: Asuka Langley Soryu
- Universe: Neon Genesis Evangelion
- Race: Human (German/Japanese)
- Personality: Is haughty and very precocious (or at least wants people to believe she is), with a willingness to be admired but an unwillingness to admire back. Will often challenge others to see if they are worthy of her wanting their attention.
- Appearance: "What are you, stupid?"
- Additional Wishes: To feel worthwhile without being at risk to be hurt herself.
- Gender: Female
edited 8th Oct '14 5:34:11 PM by GameSpazzer
MY SOUL IS DARK BUT MY HAIR IS COLORFUL — Brahian Pokémon AlchemistWell, Your chareter....Is now in the RP!
It's really good.
So, You are accepted!
I care for Starbound: My universe, My home, My unification. For the Peglaci as we know it.Season one is now launched!
You may RP now!
If You are accepted!
I care for Starbound: My universe, My home, My unification. For the Peglaci as we know it.
Okay, So...... Due to The Info being messed up The Concept and Lore/Story goes here.
Concept and Story: It was the Age 781 and Uub's turning 15 on his birthday, Everything's going well. The light is all around universes. There was no dark forces around here, The life sprouts outward to universes and it was peaceful. Till a Tragic but most dark and evil event led to the multiverse in peril. The Darkening is freed after the closed spaces had burst, It saps Light from sources and turning itself to dark. The dragon Ball Universe was eaten away by the Dark forces that Drove Uub to the Starbound universe.
Therefore, He has to travel to every universe by Ship but seems impossible right? What about FTL portals? That should do the trick! But it's impossible to make an FTL Based universal drive or portals. So he's stuck. but there is some allies from other universes too1 Like Kirito From SAO Right?
But One flaw on the FTL Universal based drive it was only used on bigger ships. The Catch is it needed a lot of fuel but only accepts Solarium, Uranium or Plutonium rods Which it's rare and hard to find!
But when Uub do manages to get his new ship...He's out of luck. It only dose travel to planets and Other solar systems. (Rather Hilarious right?) His only hope is to Rescue the whole multiverse from the clutches of the Dark forces and save everyone's lives.
But when his Vision of the final battle was right or wrong? You'll see...
[[ So Follow the rules and to make sure you are quallfied to sign up.]]
[[ Rule 1 kid: You can use chars, As long as it Anime or Video game based! Even it's canon! If you wish to put up fan anime or video games, PM me. (Any Type of genre except Only Video games and anime and Cartoons!)]]
[[ Rule 2 Boy: You must be 13 years old and up to enter this RP. (Rated T for Teen!) If you are younger than that, You will be illegible to enter.]]
[[ Rule 3 Teen: Now, No Autohittin' and Godmoddin' here. This will result a termination of the post and RP. You can use 2 or more Charecters at once! This also result at a termination if your limit is at 4.]]
Name: Universe: Race: Personality' Appearince: Additional Wishes: (Optional!) Gender: (Optional!)
For EX:
Name:Uub
Universe:Dragon Ball Z/GT
Race:Human (Of course he's reicarnated!)
Personality: Very, Very Timid, Becomes Frightened at someone's slight expression, At many years later, He became a fighter. Wanting to vanquish evil.
Appearince: Link (If you wanted.): http://dragonball.wikia.com/wiki/Uub
Gender (Also optional!): Male.
So, If you are intrested in this Rp: Join now! (Deadline: Oct 10. Shut down sign up page if Season 2 is up: April 28th, 2015.)
Thursday, October 02, 2014:
Added lines to the Information to make it polish even more. Removed name. Reason: Dosen't make any sense. Decresed age restriction from 15 to 13. Changed rules to be a little loose on the restricting.
End of update 1.
(Note, Can't reformat because where's the reformat code? (I am Honest about it.) (Never mind! I know how to use the header.
Update 2: Made some secret....You know.
Update 3:
Interest Check is now online! Changed the Main hero to Uub. The reason: One or more guys didn't like it. So, changed it! Small fix to the Info...
End of Update 3.
Small note: Interest check is now open! See for your self if you are interested: https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/posts.php?discussion=14127945070A17123000&page=1#1
Update 4: Season zero is now Started! Because Can't waste 2 days of no Signups right? Because It's time wasting!
Update 5: Fixed a lot of typos....
I will post season one right in one day...
Update 6: Major Update Time!
I Know my concept needed to be fixed last time but, I did! Added Concept/Story/Lore Removed the Info and replaced it. (Because it's getting old!)
Update 7: Added The Hall of Blamed/Denied Chars, Because For revenge. >:) Also Why not? Why are you doing this? Because Being denied into an RP = Slaughter The Guy With a chainsaw, while wearing Jason's mask, while laughing in an evil way.
List of Accepted chars/ Hall of Granted Chars:
Asuka - Game Spazzer
Hall of Blamed/Denied Chars of HELL:
edited 11th Oct '14 3:39:17 PM by TheBloodMasterVX
I care for Starbound: My universe, My home, My unification. For the Peglaci as we know it.