Well, it illustrates the trope rather well. It's mostly just characters talking, though, so more text than illustration, but the trope is clear from it, and it's not that much text. So it's okay, and the trope is probably hard to illustrate with pure imagery anyway. That said, it's kind of the same as the quotation already on the page.
Also, always left-to-right, unless it doesn't matter for comprehension (i.e. order of bubbles doesn't matter). This is an English-language wiki.
edited 14th Aug '14 9:22:11 AM by AnotherDuck
Check out my fanfiction!Probably sounds better in Japanese. If you understand Japanese. Or maybe better if you don't, at worst...
edited 14th Aug '14 6:10:06 PM by AnotherDuck
Check out my fanfiction!I made a version with the large top panel cut out. I don't think it's necessary. Unless the characters' reaction to pure evil is somehow an essential part of the trope.
I also made the panels go top down. It works better for webpages than left-to-right.

edited 14th Aug '14 10:33:57 PM by goto124
Also prefer the three-panel one. It just adds a little extra that's just lacking in the two-panel one. It's kind of what tips the scale between "illustrating" and "might as well be a page quotation".
Check out my fanfiction!

This scene
◊ from Dragon Ball Z is a pretty good representation of this trope. Here's the same scene in the original right-to-left format
◊. Whichever one works.