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tricksterson Never Trust from Behind you with an icepick Since: Apr, 2009 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
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#76: Jul 18th 2014 at 5:11:23 PM

[up][up]I don't know if you're doing this on purpose but it comes across like you're trying to have a host without having a host. If he's a drugged up shell all the time it comes across as Loophole Abuse. Also Bakasura's background is "Bakasura is a demon who first" It looks like you meant to add more but got cut off in mid-sentence.

edited 19th Jul '14 5:04:49 AM by tricksterson

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kkhohoho (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
#77: Jul 18th 2014 at 5:20:57 PM

[up]Thanks for catching that. Troyhand, in this RP, you're going to have play as your host at some point. In that case, you'll probably want to flesh out your PC a bit more. Sure, he may be a 'shell', but even shells have character traits.

edited 18th Jul '14 5:38:13 PM by kkhohoho

TroyandHawk The Blinder from Back Home. Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: 700 wives and 300 concubines
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#78: Jul 18th 2014 at 5:34:19 PM

Alright, sorry, I usually flesh it out as I go along, but I'll try to do that.

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tricksterson Never Trust from Behind you with an icepick Since: Apr, 2009 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
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#79: Jul 18th 2014 at 5:59:29 PM

I have that problem myself. Background and personality always make me cringe a little.

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Rpglegend Dipper fan from Mexico city Since: Mar, 2014
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#80: Jul 18th 2014 at 6:12:44 PM

No a split personality.

Rather a memory issue. It's hard to explain as its a bit of an experiment I wan to pull off. The human would be in control but would forget at first being overtaking by the myth when turning back to normal. I hope that makes sense.

edited 18th Jul '14 6:14:29 PM by Rpglegend

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kkhohoho (4 Score & 7 Years Ago)
#81: Jul 18th 2014 at 6:21:43 PM

[up]Let me try to get this straight; correct me if I'm missing something. So your host has two sides; the side that uses her magical abilities and can 'speak' to her Inner Myth, and the side that can't do any of that, and is essentially just a normal human being. Am I getting that right?

Also, part of the reason I'm confused might be that your Sign-up sheet is somewhat wonky, with akward formatting, numerous grammar issues and typos, and several run-on sentences. You might want to work on that at some point.

edited 18th Jul '14 6:22:26 PM by kkhohoho

Rpglegend Dipper fan from Mexico city Since: Mar, 2014
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#82: Jul 18th 2014 at 6:54:04 PM

I suck at explaining,Lets do this.

I will redo it, is that alright?.

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TroyandHawk The Blinder from Back Home. Since: Jul, 2012 Relationship Status: 700 wives and 300 concubines
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#84: Jul 18th 2014 at 8:12:42 PM

I'm going to redo mine too.

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