Game's up!
Also, I finally actually thought up a name for it!
Dimentiosome, two things, if you will: first of all, please avoid allcaps, as it is annoying and there are better forms of emphasis (excessive emphasis is bad, BTW). Second, can you please write in past tense? Seeing one person write in present tense while everybody else doesn't is confusing and headache-inducing.
edited 4th Jun '14 7:21:05 AM by desdendelle
On empty crossroads, seek the eclipse -- for when Sol and Lua align, the lost shall find their way home.Alright, looks like I have some business to attend to here.
First and simplest: Musik, you're grabbing a hold of Lior's character without giving him a chance to respond. He might have said on this occasion that's okay, but please remember it for future situations.
Also, Dimentiosome, same goes to you, you've taken a lunge at Swanna and just assumed this is fine, that say neither of the Timburr would try and prevent you from attacking one of the most popular residents of Post Town or Swanna herself is able to get out of the way. In fact, I'm going to flat out ask if you can change your post so you're not doing that. Because really, attacking Swanna is a really, really bad idea given the amounts of ass some of Post Town's residents can kick, especially when some
Legendaries
take up residence there, not to mention it makes things a little difficult otherwise. You've also got a couple notes on your from from some of the other players, and I'd take note of them, they're giving good advice.
Also, technically you're not even in this RP yet. I asked if you could make some changes to your character sheet
before I'd accept your character and they haven't been made.
No need to do anything so drastic, mate. I might seem all big and scary and British (although those three are all the same concept really), but I'm not going to eat anyone alive here; I'm pretty difficult to offend.
Can I guess from your little spoiler-print at the bottom of your SU (It's fine now by the way, welcome in.) that you're new to forum RPs? Because I'll let you in on a little secret: We're all new one day and you remind me of me when I was new. If that's the case, really don't be scared. All of us are good guys really and we're all willing to help.
All you really need to do for the posts in question is not... randomly attack NPCs - this is a little more nuanced than forum games, and although as you can clearly see from the thread insanity tends to ensue, random acts of violence generally don't tend to achieve much.
Curse the ill fortune that led you to me.Dimentiosome: It's ConCrit time! We have two things on our agenda today.
- Please write in past tense. Having a tense shift in the middle of a page is headache-inducing.
- Do not presume for other people's characters. They're not necessarily going to react the way you think they will; specifically in this case, you don't know people will ignore Thomas. (I'm pretty sure Dour won't, once I get around to posting anyway.)
I'm pointing those things out so you will notice them. I don't expect you to become infinitely better overnight or some other stupid thing.
On empty crossroads, seek the eclipse -- for when Sol and Lua align, the lost shall find their way home.You know, it wouldn't be in character for Steven to ask but I will do it myself.
Pokemon is an abbreviation for Pocket Monsters, so does that mean the Pokemon in PMD are essentially calling themselves Pocket Monsters despite the lack of Pokeballs around?
Some people say I'm lazy. It's hard to disagree.I like to think that they aren't actually speaking English, but "Pokéspeak" (to give it a random name) and 'Pokémon' is just the English word we use to translate for when they're referring to their race as a whole, the equivalent "Pokéspeak" word being entirely unrelated to the abbreviation.
But I'm weird like that, so take it as you will.
edited 15th Jun '14 8:09:25 AM by Krika
edited 15th Jun '14 1:06:55 PM by desdendelle
On empty crossroads, seek the eclipse -- for when Sol and Lua align, the lost shall find their way home.Plummet's been through college lately.
On empty crossroads, seek the eclipse -- for when Sol and Lua align, the lost shall find their way home.

This is the place in which things are discussed about this game
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Discuss things.
edited 3rd Jun '14 6:43:21 AM by Plumbum
Curse the ill fortune that led you to me.