A thread to discuss My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic and the tie-in media.
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apply. In addition, please remember that the thread is discussing a kids' show, and it's primarily focused on the work itself, not the fanfic — in particular, we don't want to see lewdness creeping in.
Edited by Mrph1 on Aug 26th 2024 at 10:24:26 AM
Yeah, making Settled Score into Diamond Tiara's clear stand-in makes sense.
And Scootaloo would be Buttercup. I think she could be a pegasus earthbender. That's be cool.
Sweetie Belle can become liquid.
And Applebloom controls magnetism.
They all have Make Me Wanna Shout.
Those sound fun.
Ever since readinf Worm, I can't help but think of things in terms of the wormverse when superheros come up.
It doesn't make much sense for them all to have multiple powers. Maybe Make Me Wanna Shout should go to Sweetie Belle only, and she droped the liquid powers.
Let's see, Twilight is Legend or Eidlon, Rarity is Parian, Pinkie Pie is Circus, Rainbow Dash is Velocity, Fluttershy is Skitter, and Applejack is idk, Glory Girl maybe? I suppose Derpy would be L Abyrinth and Doctor Whooves would be Clockblocker.
Blind Final Fantasy 6 Let's PlayThey'd need a Rowdy Ruff expy too then.
They could also combine Teen Titans from DC and... Young Avengers from Marvel? Scootaloo could work as a speedy, brash type(Buttercup/Kid Flash(or Superboy)/Miss America?), Sweetie Bell as the happy, personable, deceptively heavy-hitter type(Bubbles/Beast Boy/Wiccan[Or Hulkling, for shapeshifty goodness]), and Apple Bloom as a gadgeteer/weapon user/kung fu type(Buttercup/Robin/Hawkeye). Though Sweetie is the most inclined to plan and plot, so she might be better in the 'smart' role...
Also, perhaps a Fuzzy Lumpkins/Solomon Grundy/Abomination: Stupid, Obsessive and seriously tough. Perhaps he saw Radiance and fell in love(or Saddle Rager and fell in hate?), and constantly tries to break through the city to get at her, destroying everything that gets in his way?
Birthright: an original web novel about Dragons, the Burdens of Leadership, and Mangoes.Speaking of superheros, might as well get around to looking at the rest of the Spiderman fanfic.
You've got excess punctuation and the speaker shouldn't come so far after the quote.
Why not just to see the title?
And then you repeat it.
You lasped back into present tense.
Did he say this out loud?
The sound that he just missed??
This implies that the helicopter was scheduled to attack right after he went invisible. But I highly doubt that's what you intended.
This seems an unecessarily convoluted phrase. I'd just say that it smashed against the opposite wall.
You don't suggest a megaphone. It's easy to tell when one is being used or not.
Should probably be those of the SAS.
How did they know which ones would escape in time before they started aiming?
And now for the inexpliacable present perfect tense.
It's not the robbers saying it, so those should be two seperate sentences.
You mean hole in the window?
Again with the present tense? Did you proofread this, like at all?
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You could just say to the rifles.
They pointed their shotguns at the rifles? Also, if they had extra guns, why not use them to begin with? There were some unarmed robbers, right?
Again, the 'from both at the same time' part is completely unnecessary.
Near the M4s you mean? The rifles weren't just floating in the air until now I would hope. And I'm sure the reader will remember that they're from earlier in the paragraph without you saying so.
Anyway, I know you wanted me to do the whole story, but there's just so many things to comment on that I think I have to stop here. It's too much for one post at least.
Blind Final Fantasy 6 Let's PlayWhy do all the human and anthro stuff have giant breasts?
Blind Final Fantasy 6 Let's Play^^^ A combination of Fluttershy's "motherly" caretaker persona and the moe factor of a shy girl with big boobs to get embarrassed over, I believe.
^ Even humanized/anthro artists who draw the girls with varying breast sizes tend to give Flutters the biggest pair.
edited 27th Dec '13 4:01:31 PM by Wryte
RD is great. I think Rarity, Fluttershy, and Applejack are probably the ones that take the longest to grow on you. At least going by my experience.
Blind Final Fantasy 6 Let's Play@Big Danny C: there's more to Rarity than meets the eye.
All things are lawful for me, but all things are not expedient: all things are lawful for me, but all things edify not.that's Fluttershy. and yes, she is adorable.
All things are lawful for me, but all things are not expedient: all things are lawful for me, but all things edify not.

Both are pretty good sounding. And And yeah, make her Diamond's persona. Though that begs the question of what Spoony will be? Maybe her anti villain sidekick? Sometime friend, sometime rival to the Crusader heroes?
Also, we need to make the Crusaders Power Puff expies. That, or keep the general esthetic and dynamic, but with different powers.
edited 27th Dec '13 2:11:10 PM by darkabomination