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A thread to discuss My Little Pony: Friendship Is Magic and the tie-in media.

All of the usual forum rules apply. In addition, please remember that the thread is discussing a kids' show, and it's primarily focused on the work itself, not the fanfic — in particular, we don't want to see lewdness creeping in.

     Original OP text 
I don't know WHAT the Hell happened (I blame shenanigans) but we're going to start from scratch. Post your feels for this awesome show again! Naow!

Edited by Mrph1 on Aug 26th 2024 at 10:24:26 AM

darkabomination Since: Mar, 2012
#32651: Dec 27th 2013 at 2:10:11 PM

Both are pretty good sounding. And And yeah, make her Diamond's persona. Though that begs the question of what Spoony will be? Maybe her anti villain sidekick? Sometime friend, sometime rival to the Crusader heroes?

Also, we need to make the Crusaders Power Puff expies. That, or keep the general esthetic and dynamic, but with different powers.

edited 27th Dec '13 2:11:10 PM by darkabomination

Sereg Since: Jun, 2010
#32652: Dec 27th 2013 at 2:22:12 PM

Yeah, making Settled Score into Diamond Tiara's clear stand-in makes sense.

And Scootaloo would be Buttercup. I think she could be a pegasus earthbender. That's be cool.

Sweetie Belle can become liquid.

And Applebloom controls magnetism.

They all have Make Me Wanna Shout.

Those sound fun.

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#32653: Dec 27th 2013 at 2:33:51 PM

Ever since readinf Worm, I can't help but think of things in terms of the wormverse when superheros come up.

It doesn't make much sense for them all to have multiple powers. Maybe Make Me Wanna Shout should go to Sweetie Belle only, and she droped the liquid powers.

Let's see, Twilight is Legend or Eidlon, Rarity is Parian, Pinkie Pie is Circus, Rainbow Dash is Velocity, Fluttershy is Skitter, and Applejack is idk, Glory Girl maybe? I suppose Derpy would be L Abyrinth and Doctor Whooves would be Clockblocker.

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kegisak Element of Class Since: Feb, 2011 Relationship Status: In Lesbians with you
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#32654: Dec 27th 2013 at 2:34:16 PM

They'd need a Rowdy Ruff expy too then.

They could also combine Teen Titans from DC and... Young Avengers from Marvel? Scootaloo could work as a speedy, brash type(Buttercup/Kid Flash(or Superboy)/Miss America?), Sweetie Bell as the happy, personable, deceptively heavy-hitter type(Bubbles/Beast Boy/Wiccan[Or Hulkling, for shapeshifty goodness]), and Apple Bloom as a gadgeteer/weapon user/kung fu type(Buttercup/Robin/Hawkeye). Though Sweetie is the most inclined to plan and plot, so she might be better in the 'smart' role...

Also, perhaps a Fuzzy Lumpkins/Solomon Grundy/Abomination: Stupid, Obsessive and seriously tough. Perhaps he saw Radiance and fell in love(or Saddle Rager and fell in hate?), and constantly tries to break through the city to get at her, destroying everything that gets in his way?

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Sereg Since: Jun, 2010
#32655: Dec 27th 2013 at 2:41:27 PM

That sounds pretty good generally.

God_of_Awesome Since: Jan, 2001
#32656: Dec 27th 2013 at 2:51:41 PM

Was this posted here or di I find it on my own?

Feeeeeeels

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#32657: Dec 27th 2013 at 3:09:49 PM

Speaking of superheros, might as well get around to looking at the rest of the Spiderman fanfic.

"Here's your papers, mister Menken.", behind the half-glass half-concrete wall sat a woman

You've got excess punctuation and the speaker shouldn't come so far after the quote.

to see what was the title on the page

Why not just to see the title?

was the title of that page

And then you repeat it.

with what seems to be a cheap marker

You lasped back into present tense.

"I'm ahead of schedule. Good.", he let out a breath of relief and closed the briefcase

Did he say this out loud?

he was able to deduce that the sound was coming

The sound that he just missed??

Just in time the windows of the room shattered

This implies that the helicopter was scheduled to attack right after he went invisible. But I highly doubt that's what you intended.

The table's lifespan ended due to smashing against the opposite wall

This seems an unecessarily convoluted phrase. I'd just say that it smashed against the opposite wall.

Menken heard a voice spoken loudly, suggesting a megaphone

You don't suggest a megaphone. It's easy to tell when one is being used or not.

those of SAS

Should probably be those of the SAS.

They aimed those weapons at the poor bank employees and clients who couldn't escape in time

How did they know which ones would escape in time before they started aiming?

Menken has noted another sound

And now for the inexpliacable present perfect tense.

with a calling card or something?", the robbers heard a familiar voice behind them

It's not the robbers saying it, so those should be two seperate sentences.

into the window hole

You mean hole in the window?

they realised every shot either is in the floor or is still flying somewhere in the air

Again with the present tense? Did you proofread this, like at all?

while the rest of the hand is open

...

to both of the M4 rifles

You could just say to the rifles.

The robbers previously holding those rifles stepped back, pointing at those with shotguns

They pointed their shotguns at the rifles? Also, if they had extra guns, why not use them to begin with? There were some unarmed robbers, right?

and after a muffled growl from both at the same time they stepped forward

Again, the 'from both at the same time' part is completely unnecessary.

Their weapons fell down with M4s from before

Near the M4s you mean? The rifles weren't just floating in the air until now I would hope. And I'm sure the reader will remember that they're from earlier in the paragraph without you saying so.

Anyway, I know you wanted me to do the whole story, but there's just so many things to comment on that I think I have to stop here. It's too much for one post at least.

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Wryte Since: Jul, 2010
#32658: Dec 27th 2013 at 3:13:17 PM

^^ "Hmm. Stupid, stupid, heh, stupid, stupid, kinda funn-OH GOD WHY."

BigDannyC Since: Dec, 2013
#32659: Dec 27th 2013 at 3:45:50 PM

Hi me again! I'm sitting down to watch this. First episode.

Equestria. Clever name.

edited 27th Dec '13 3:47:46 PM by BigDannyC

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#32660: Dec 27th 2013 at 3:52:56 PM

So, why do human and anthro versions of Fluttershy have giant breasts?

BigDannyC Since: Dec, 2013
#32661: Dec 27th 2013 at 3:54:43 PM

Ha, the Dragon not spell so good. [lol]

But yeah so far this isn't bad. It's a fantasy adventure with a mythology behind it.

storyyeller More like giant cherries from Appleloosa Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: RelationshipOutOfBoundsException: 1
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#32662: Dec 27th 2013 at 3:55:41 PM

So, why do human and anthro versions of Fluttershy have giant breasts?

Why do all the human and anthro stuff have giant breasts?

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Wryte Since: Jul, 2010
#32663: Dec 27th 2013 at 4:00:17 PM

^^^ A combination of Fluttershy's "motherly" caretaker persona and the moe factor of a shy girl with big boobs to get embarrassed over, I believe.

^ Even humanized/anthro artists who draw the girls with varying breast sizes tend to give Flutters the biggest pair.

edited 27th Dec '13 4:01:31 PM by Wryte

NESgamer190 Since: Sep, 2012
#32664: Dec 27th 2013 at 4:00:55 PM

@Yeller: -shrug- I've honestly no clue...

Rinsankajugin Since: Feb, 2012
#32666: Dec 27th 2013 at 4:07:24 PM

Ever forest fires have boobs, but that's called cannibalism and I don't condone that.

Having a good time, Dan? smile

BigDannyC Since: Dec, 2013
#32667: Dec 27th 2013 at 4:08:29 PM

Oh yes. This show seems pretty fun! I'm liking Rainbow Dash.

BigDannyC Since: Dec, 2013
#32669: Dec 27th 2013 at 4:18:57 PM

Opp, this Rarity must be the fashion liking one.

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#32670: Dec 27th 2013 at 4:19:41 PM

Oh yes. This show seems pretty fun! I'm liking Rainbow Dash.

RD is great. I think Rarity, Fluttershy, and Applejack are probably the ones that take the longest to grow on you. At least going by my experience.

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BigDannyC Since: Dec, 2013
#32672: Dec 27th 2013 at 4:24:49 PM

This yellow one is...pretty adorable. There was that little hoof thing she did and her squeaky timid voice. That was cute.

What am I saying? tongue

crimsonstorm15 shine on from A parallel universe Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: [TOP SECRET]
Rinsankajugin Since: Feb, 2012
#32674: Dec 27th 2013 at 4:26:07 PM

That's the thing about Flutts, she the adorable hippie! grin

BigDannyC Since: Dec, 2013

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