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alessandro from Italy Since: Feb, 2011
#1: Dec 10th 2012 at 3:58:39 AM

There's space for yet another scifi webcomic? Planet Outrun it's mine, it's already ~year old but only recently I am updating it.

I am on my way to re-learn how tvtropes works before add a tvtropes page of it ( guess I shall place it there

synopsis is: 'A delegation of peaceful alien lands on earth bringing terrible news for humans: earth's life cycle is set to its limits, within three months of life on earth will not be sustainable. A new international body, the EISC (Earth's international Scientific Community) was quickly established to do targeted researches which eventually confirms the terrible prediction The aliens offer to to rescue a small number of humans letting other by their own to find way of salvation. Planet Outrun is about a number of humans and their efforts escape the impending disaster'

first page ~ archive ~ last update RSS

edited 10th Dec '12 4:02:09 AM by alessandro

The President: a webcomic about romance, politics and vampires
Medinoc from France (Before Recorded History)
#2: Dec 10th 2012 at 11:55:02 AM

I think it's a bit confusing, with the Four Lines, All Waiting format...

"And as long as a sack of shit is not a good thing to be, chivalry will never die."
AceofSpades Since: Apr, 2009 Relationship Status: Showing feelings of an almost human nature
#3: Dec 10th 2012 at 1:53:50 PM

I don't know if English is the author's first language or not, but the guy needs some serious editing because there are some severe grammar issues with the dialogue. "We had be on the verge of mutiny", for instance. That's just.. that's just bad.

The art.... has pretty much the same issues all amateur comics have. If he keeps working at it he'll improve.

alessandro from Italy Since: Feb, 2011
#4: Dec 16th 2012 at 7:31:42 AM

@Medinoc: Yeah, I know first pages are messed. I knew I was going to update slowly and wanted to go forward in the plot as fast possible in order to introduce the three main characters. Now I am going to the point to merge everything in a single plot line (thus doesn't looks easy job).

@Ace of Spades: English is not my first language, it is just bad as the art as you notice. My main idea with doing these comics was, indeed, improve. I am open to any source for grammar editing, and just recently I had idea to place some kind of popup or mini banner to show/ask directly to my reader for help: the original transcript is available for each page so anyone can copy and paste their grammar edits directly in comments (just need to find a non-view bothering way to ask for help directly on the webcomic).

I've no problem to edit each page with the next text... and maybe in this way one can have sort of direct interaction between creator/reader?

The President: a webcomic about romance, politics and vampires
alessandro from Italy Since: Feb, 2011
#5: Jan 19th 2013 at 6:46:00 AM

The last update came with some grammar edit! [tup]

The President: a webcomic about romance, politics and vampires
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