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- Wrong: The Mentor: Kevin is this to Bob in the first episode.
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- Wrong: Badass Adorable
- Right: Badass Adorable: Xavier, the group's cute little mascot, defeats three raging elephants with both hands tied behind his back using only an uncooked spaghetti noodle.
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- Wrong: Full Moon Silhouette: Diana
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Edited by SeptimusHeap on Jul 17th 2025 at 8:59:01 PM
Since you're not getting what I mean about Gaston's behavior to Belle at the beginning, I apologize for not making it clear. Here's my analyisis of Gaston at the beginning and why Belle is justified in rejecting Gaston. First let's start with the common forms of stalking behavior.
- Following you or showing up wherever you are. They may or may not make contact with you, but it doesn’t matter. Watching someone repeatedly is a form of harassment.
- Sending persistent, unwanted gifts, letters, notes, e-mails, texts or messages via social media. Damaging your home, car, or other property.
- Monitoring your phone, computer use or social media accounts to learn about you, your family, your personal life and your whereabouts.
- Using technology, like hidden cameras or global positioning systems (GPS), to track where you go.
- Driving by or hanging out at your home, school, or work.
- Threatening you, your family, friends, or pets. They may also threaten to reveal information (true or not) that could damage your reputation or relationships.
- Seeking information about you via public records, online search services, private investigators, or by going through your garbage, personal property. They may also contact your friends, family, neighbors, or co-workers to gain access or information about you.
- Posting personal information or spreading harmful rumors about you.
- Creating or manipulating situations in order to have contact with you, such as applying for a job where you work or calling you with a personal emergency to make you feel guilty or sorry for them.
So lets start with Gaston at the beginning.
- He is shown at the beginning watching Belle from afar, with a telescope, calling her his future wife.
- Later Gaston starts following Belle around, stealing flowers from someone without paying for it. And then when they do meet up, he offers her flowers even though she wasn't expecting flowers and then immediately asking to join her for dinner straight after he compliments her book.
- Later when Belle got in trouble with the headmaster for teaching a girl to read, Gaston starts following Belle again, while stepping on her cabbages. When she tries to get past Gaston he blocks her path. By the time she nears the door, after he tells her about the spinster's life, he grabs her dress and pulls her close, which is invading her personal space. And he continues to follow her to the door until she close the door on him right in his face.
I hope this is more clear to why Belle is right in rejecting him.
edited 30th Mar '17 5:49:17 PM by EdwardDavies
It was Chris Valentine who thought that Belle is wrong in rejecting Gaston, and thought that Maurice is wrong in rejecting Gaston as well.
Are these examples from YMMV.Supergirl 2015 S 2 E 17 Distant Sun being used correctly?:
- Internet Backdraft: Although Mon-El was already a Base-Breaking Character, the vitriol from haters seemed to have come to a head this episode with people enjoying him getting beat up by Kara under mind-control, to chastising him for carelessly blasting the window to the Daxamite ship where everyone could have been sucked out into space, to complaining that his storyline took away from the Sanvers storyline, and ultimately wishing Mon-El's parents took him away so Kara can be with Lena.
- Special Effects Failure: The alien bounty hunter that engages in a Beam-O-War with Kara at the beginning of the episode looks incredibly fake.
- They Wasted a Perfectly Good Plot: An episode about Kara dealing with alien bounty hunters, yet not even a single reference to Lobo.
There is a reason why Belle was disgusted with Gaston. I've listed the common forms of stalking in my other post up there. ![]()
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Girls get creeped out by people who stalk them because they like them. There's a reason why Gaston was part of the Stalker with a Crush characters.
- Dull Surprise: Some viewers take on the finished product versus the idea.
- Take shirt-and-tie white collar workers, trap them in their office building and make them kill each other? Sounds like an interesting premise. But many left disappointed by the lack of creative kills throughout (most came from guns, rather than use of everyday office equipment) and the buildup of characters to little to no payoff (ie, Dany, though Dany's arc may have been a Overly Long Gag itself to make her seem important only to have her die with no fanfare).
Isn't Dull Surprise when a character fails to display emotions?
~silverblade2 Dull Surprise is indeed a characterization trope, not an audience reaction.
Can this be considered as an Art Evolution?
In show The Loud House https://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/WesternAnimation/TheLoudHouse
Lori, Leni, Luna and Luan had simple cartoonic feet in episode "Linc or Swim", but since episode "A Tattler's Tale" their feet have more realistic shape.
This seems like shoehorning, but I'm gonna ask anyway before giving it the axe just in case. In DissidiaFinalFantasy.Tropes A To M:
- Lost Forever: Though it's closer to Lost And Very Hard To Get Again, in the original Dissidia Cecil, Cloud, Squall and Tidus each had a level one exclusive weapon found in their storylines. These weapons weren't available anywhere else and weren't sold in the shop. If the player made the mistake of selling them, they would later be out of luck because those weapons are needed to craft their respective exclusive weapons, which are made in sequence. For example, sell the Dark Sword from Cecil's story, you can't craft the Mythgraven Blade, and thus can't craft the Lustrous Sword, and can't craft the Cimmerian Edge/Lightbringer. If you lost them, the only way to get the weapons again was to face a low-level character in Quick Battle, reset the match until they equip it at random, then fight them over and over until they dropped it. And by the way, you read that right, Cecil has two Level 100 weapons, do even if you hung onto the Dark Sword, you're still going to need a second one. Thankfully averted in Dissidia 012, where the level one exclusives are all available in the shop.
edited 1st Apr '17 2:37:09 PM by Gosicrystal
From YMMV.Fire Emblem Heroes.
- Win Back the Crowd: While the fanbase is still heavily broken on the game, the confirmation that it would feature characters from every game in the series, complete with full voice acting for characters who have never been voiced before, won over some fans who otherwise weren't too interested in the game, especially those who expected the game (and Fire Emblem Warriors) to be heavily Awakening/Fates-centric like in other crossovers like Super Smash Bros., Tokyo Mirage Sessions ♯FE, and Project × Zone 2.
The FE fandom was already kicking beforehand and the dissenters are likely a Vocal Minority; the two previous games were very successful (read: highest selling games in the series) and a number of characters from said games ranked very high on a recent worldwide poll covering the entire franchise. I think this is a shoehorn but would like some second opinions.
edited 1st Apr '17 4:03:10 PM by Karxrida
Do remakes count for Surprisingly Improved Sequel and Even Better Sequel? Someone added an entry about the 2014 Robocop reboot to the former, claiming it to be better than the other Robocop movies released after the original, and I wanted to know if the trope applies to it.
Edit: Another example was added to the Surprisingly Improved Sequel page since this post. (Ignore grammar and indentation for now.)
- And now the Calvin Timeline has its own case. Star Trek Into Darkness is considering a very meh film due to the director getting ready to jump ship to the franchise he really wanted to direct, a weak rehash of one of the best villains, and a muddled plot. The sequel, Star Trek Beyond, is hailed as the best of the Calvin Timeline series and the first time Trek has managed to make a great Away Mission Film.
I'm not really involved in the Trek fandom, so maybe that's my problem, but I've found no evidence that Star Trek: Beyond is generally hailed "as the best of the series." My concern is that the entry is making an objective claim about the fanbase that I'm not really seeing, and I'm wondering if someone can confirm or deny this.
edited 1st Apr '17 7:50:25 PM by supergod
For we shall slay evil with logic...I'm not sure if this example counts as Spell My Name With An S, because usually L/R differences in Japanese transliteration don't count. The work have at least one other legitimate example of that trope, so I can swap that example with another.
- The anime of Is the Order a Rabbit? fell victim to this despite official romanizations being given in the opening credits. The Crunchyroll subtitles used Lize for Rize and Sharo for Syaro for the first half of Season 1 before switching to the official names. The Sentai translation uses Rize, but this was apparently done after the fact via find-and-replace, as words that happen to contain the sequence "lize" had "Rize" introduced into them (e.g. specialize is misspelled as speciaRize).
Would those characters from game Witcher 3 be good examples as Complete monsters?
Morkvarg - He was a ruthless pirate, who have been robbing, plundering, murdering and raping for many years. He was completelly remorseless for killing all men, women and children. Even his crew member Einar was disgusted by him when he murdered priests. Einar cursed him by turning him into a savage monster and said he should have suffered for his crimes to end of the world and one day longer. If Geralt lifts the curse from Morkvarg he outrightly says he'll return to continue robbing and plundering. His complete lack of remorse shows he learned nothing.
Weavess, Brewess and Whispess - those 3 Crones manipulate peasants in Velen to worship them and give them their children so they could eat them. For disobidience they turn their servants into mindless monsters, what is a fate worse than death. They also collect limbs of their victiims. They planned to cut of Ciri's feet to be sure she won't escape before they deliver her to the Wild Hunt.
On page of Adult characters of the show "The Loud House" Lynn Sr. and Rita have mentioned "abusive parents" in "good parents" section. I suggest to take the former from the latter and add separate section "Abusive Parents: In the episode "April Fools Rules" they agreed to put Luan in cage to prevent her from pulling dangerous pranks and in the episode "No Such Luck" they agreed to lock Lincoln out the house believing he's a badluck and sold his furinitures.
~First Drell Specter: Take your Complete Monster nominations to the dedicated thread for that trope HERE.
Make sure that you read the pages linked in the pinned post at the top of the thread; there is a specific procedure to follow and if you don't do so, your nominations will be ignored.
@Supergod: Star Trek Beyond is considered to be the best of the Star Trek reboot movies by hard-core Trekkies.
However amongst film critics and general audiences it's considered the weakest going by scores given to it on various websites:
- IMDB:
- ''Star Trek: 8
- Star Trek Into Darkness: 7.8
- Star Trek Beyond: 7.1
- Rotten Tomatoes (Film Critics):
- ''Star Trek: 95%
- Star Trek Into Darkness: 86%
- Star Trek Beyond: 84%
- Rotten Tomatoes (Audiences):
- ''Star Trek: 91%
- Star Trek Into Darkness: 90%
- Star Trek Beyond: 81%
- Meta Critic:
- ''Star Trek: 83
- Star Trek Into Darkness: 72
- Star Trek Beyond: 68
- Cinemascore:
- ''Star Trek: A
- Star Trek Into Darkness: A
- Star Trek Beyond: A-
Does the spirit of Marie Kessler appearing in the series finale of Grimm count as The Bus Came Back? I added that example today.
Is this a proper lampshade on Power Trio or is this a shoehorn?
Power Trio: Lampshaded by Jay and Cole when objecting to Kai becoming a part of the team. Apparently, they and Zane considered themselves to be one while training together.
- Jay: Whoa, whoa, whoa. you never said anything about a fourth. It's always three - three blind mice, three musketeers, three-Cole: Uh, what he's trying to tell us, Sensei Wu, is that the three of us have always trained together. We're solid.

No, a human face isn't necessary; [BatB] is just the first thing that came to mind (I can't imagine why :P ). Luxo, the little lamp in the Pixar title cards is also an example of the same sort of thing as in [BatB]: he is an animate lamp — even though he has no face. He can still function as a lamp. But a hemka who has shaped itself like a lamp is still a hemka inside. It just has the appearance of a lamp.
Eh, I'm overthinking it. Just put something like