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strangerthenever Since: Nov, 2009 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
#1852: Aug 16th 2015 at 2:21:27 PM

Awesome.

Say, have you reviewed any of my fanfics? Eva's usually the one who does that from this site, it would be cool if another troper see what I did and tell me what they think of it.

Of course, if you want to, that is.

A stranger is like the shadows.It is so common to the world everyone will just ignore them.
Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#1853: Aug 16th 2015 at 2:38:48 PM

[up] I remember reviewing Dusts of Avarice and said how I liked it.

strangerthenever Since: Nov, 2009 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
#1854: Aug 16th 2015 at 2:46:35 PM

Huh. I think you did; just not in that site.

If you can, how about Rising Unto the Stars? That, and Dusts are basically my babies, I'd love to hear some proper criticism on them. I know that I still need some work on them, but my problem is that I just can't see what's wrong until someone points them out.

Also, if you don't mind, can you review RUTS on FF? If you want to/have the time, that is.

edited 16th Aug '15 2:46:54 PM by strangerthenever

A stranger is like the shadows.It is so common to the world everyone will just ignore them.
Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#1855: Aug 16th 2015 at 3:09:46 PM

I'll see what I can do, though I'm not familiar with a lot of Precure.

strangerthenever Since: Nov, 2009 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
#1856: Aug 16th 2015 at 3:15:38 PM

Which is why I wrote expositions on the Cures for the uninitiated. It will be a once-a-chapter thing whenever the plot formally introduces SI-Me to the next Pretty Cure team he'll meet.

For me to properly do that, I must watch ALL of the entries. I dunno why I keep delaying it, but one of these days I will go watch Fresh Pretty Cure so I can properly write the characters from that series for the next chapter.

Anyway, it's alright if yer not familiar with Precure, I'm wondering how I fare in the storytelling department. And my English. Due note that the story is two years old.

But you can pick my other, newer stories if you want.

A stranger is like the shadows.It is so common to the world everyone will just ignore them.
ChrisX ..... from ..... Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: Singularity
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#1857: Aug 16th 2015 at 7:38:59 PM

I think I might not be one to say that my fic got a lot of readers. But...

Here's the 30th chapter regardless.

EvaUnit01 Fandom Heretic Since: Mar, 2011 Relationship Status: Complex: I'm real, they are imaginary
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#1858: Aug 16th 2015 at 9:14:54 PM

@Psyga: I've been reading Rising Unto the Stars for ages, and I've only seen one episode of Precure. Namely, the first episode of the first series.

Being unfamiliar with it isn't really an issue.

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#1859: Aug 16th 2015 at 9:27:04 PM

Had a random idea for a(n as usual) weird crossover. Kamen Rider Gaim X Pathfinder.

After the events of the Gaim/Drive movie, Kouta decides to investigate an aborted incursion by Sagara/Helheim. As in, Sagara decided not to pull his evolution games on his most recent destination. Deciding to investigate to learn what could cause the forest to turn around and call it a day, Kouta finds himself on the world of Golarion.

Hilarity Ensues as he finds local adventures dealing with Invess now-native to Golarion as CR 5 fights, learns about about people immune to Invess transformation (undead and paladins), and finds himself being mistaken for a god...

RBomber Since: Nov, 2010
#1860: Aug 17th 2015 at 1:14:03 AM

Kouta is, technically, a god. He just had good graces to realize he's not a top god or something like that.

I think Sagara actually prefers game where you could, relatively speaking, "grow sideways".

Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#1861: Aug 17th 2015 at 7:03:12 PM

[up][up] Speaking of random Kamen Rider Gaim Crossovers, I sort of have one...

A simple what if question: What If? The Enchanted Forest became the Helheim Forest? From there, it erupted into several ideas that evolved from "OUAT Character as Gaim Character".

Basic idea of the fanfic (abridged for those who haven't seen OUAT): Evil Queen from Snow White casts a dark curse under the guise that it's a magic "save the Enchanted Forest from Helheim" spell. Said curse pretty much traps people in a small pocket of time in our world, robbing their memories in the process and having them altered to having unfavorable outcomes (for example, Prince Charming's married to someone that's not Snow White). The Evil Queen relishes in her victory... for a brief while before she realizes that the Curse also dragged Helheim with them.

The good news is that Helheim is contained in the pocket too, though for how long no one knows. So she pretty much makes a mini-Yggdrasil and hiring out a scientist by which I mean Dr. Frankenstein to construct the Genesis Drivers and work on a way to mass produce the Sengoku Drivers (because she's most likely not wanting to contend with a crapton of H-Class Inves) while she keeps the whole forest thing under wraps.

Then things go from bad to worse for her when her adopted son's birth mother strolls into town. Said birth mother is also the love child of Snow White and Prince Charming, a prophesied savior of the forest. So now the Queen has to contend with both the forest and the savior... Which is problematic because the latter ends up getting her hands on a Genesis Driver as well.

Needless to say, I sort of have a lot of stuff in mind, at least extending to reinterpreting the first three seasons. The only drawback is that Once Upon A Time is not exactly combat-heavy. There's fight scenes, yes, but not a lot compared to Gaim. So trying to avoid random battles is gonna be a hassle.

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#1862: Aug 17th 2015 at 7:21:24 PM

I can help with that! You just add more fairy-tale characters that got glossed over by the TV show. Bisexual Aurora, Mulan and Philip, Elsanna, Arturia-chan Sword in the Stone...

Need a co-writer to help you tackle this?

Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#1863: Aug 17th 2015 at 7:25:33 PM

[up] Hm... Probably. The only glossed over characters in OUAT that I have ideas on are Ruby and Whale. Whale being obviously the Ryoma of the group and inventing the Drivers and Ruby... Well, reinterpreting her other side is gonna be pretty easy.

Yeah, I'm also considering other Riders in the show.

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#1864: Aug 17th 2015 at 7:36:12 PM

Let's see, Emma (NOT Bella, though dangerously close, see 'random powers every season' syndrome) is the Gaim analogue, Regina is the mildly eviler Zangetsu (or possibly Idunn, for the Apple lockseed, and the Apples vs Oranges thing), Sidney/Genie as either Duke or Sigurd (and he was way better here than in that stupid Scandal show, ugh), Ruby, since she can't have a scyhte that's also a high-impact customizable sniper rifle, is possibly Baron (thematically, anyway, since as you say, Faiz...). Ruby could get hold of a flawed prototype, and is slowly going mad/Invess wolf as a result (possibly resulting in something like Kouta's result in his little lotus Eater machine episode, where she chooses human despite, technically, twice-over not being one anymore)...

Hmm...

Perhaps, to avoid Random Encounters, we play up the 'Cosmic Horror' aspects of both settings? Emma thinks she's in a small-town detective story, Regina is playing it as a Fractured Fairy Tale and trying to keep up the Masquerade, but both are collapsing as the Helheim influence gets stronger and stronger, and the little pieces of the Enchanted forest that she bough along but ignored combine explosively.

For example, Invess Dragon Maleficent under the town.

Things take a turn towards survival horror as Invess invade (because the thing about Frankenstein is, even though he SAYS he learns better after making the first monster, he STILL makes a 'bride' for it, so you know he has impulse control issues, and his experiments end up drawing Redyue's attention), and the town basically turns into Raccoon City, and the braindead protagonists (you know they are, don't deny it), get it into their heads that the solution is to end the curse to 'banish' Helheim or something. Unfortunately, this just means the Invess can leave town and infect the world...

Wow, I see no way this can end happily, and I'm on the optimistic end of the spctrum in my thinking.

edited 17th Aug '15 7:38:34 PM by SCMof2814

Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#1865: Aug 17th 2015 at 7:48:01 PM

[up] I sort of had the idea of who would be what Rider.

  • Emma becomes Malika (And probably later Gaim, since that Apples vs. Oranges thing sounds good)
  • Regina becomes Zangetsu Shin (and later Iduun)
  • Graham becomes Sigurd (Huntsman just sort of fits the Dragon Slayer)
  • Sidney becomes Tyrant (Might consider having him lose the Driver midway for Albert to have)
  • Whale becomes Duke
  • David becomes Baron (if you've seen Season 3, you'll get the idea of where I'm going with him)
  • Henry becomes Ryugen

Your idea of Ruby being an Okami Inves sounds a bit better than her being an Orphnoch. I just recently had an idea of how Robin Hood and the Merry Men protect themselves from Helheim (either training their bodies to endure the Helheim poison and control it a la Kaito or trying to fashion an Inves-control system with the ripe Lockseeds).

And yeah. At one point they will realize that the only way to stop the Inves is to banish them somehow. The problem is, like I said, Regina ended up dragging Helheim with a chunk of the Forest, and thus, spread the seeds to Storybrooke. So the only way to banish the Inves now is to obtain Earth's Forbidden Fruit.

edited 17th Aug '15 7:48:39 PM by Psyga315

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#1866: Aug 17th 2015 at 7:54:52 PM

Which will lead to a villain battle royale, especially if the local equivalent of Sagara (NOT Gold, maybe August possessed? Argh, too many family connections in that series!) makes it clear that it is the EXCEPTION to 'Magic comes at a price'. Drop phenomenal cosmic power with NO thematic backlash consequences for the wielder (the world around them might be screwed, depending on said wielder) and see who starts backstabbing first. That automatically means that no matter how much they want to get rid of Helheim, EVERYONE from Gold to Regina to Whale automatically want to use it to try and bring back someone they love, and don't trust anyone else to get it, regardless of all previous alliances. And given the stupidity of the protagonists in canon, they'll all easily decide they are the 'only one' responsible enough to wield it, so you can have Snow versus Ruby Versus David versus...

edited 17th Aug '15 7:58:01 PM by SCMof2814

Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#1867: Aug 17th 2015 at 7:56:56 PM

[up] Oooh shit. Yeah.

Sadly I'm sort of am considering Gold to be Sagara's equivalent, and August is probably getting a Mach Driver (I had this idea that each World wound up having a Rider, so Enchanted Forest had Gaim, Earth had Drive, Wonderland had Blade, etc.)

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#1868: Aug 17th 2015 at 8:00:20 PM

How about Maleficent as the equivalent of Sagara? Until the 'sacrificed a baby' plot, she's only another boss fight. This gives her a REASON to be crazy ass powerful AND not interfere.

Plus, Diend shows up randomly to steal all Gold's stuff...

And in that case, OZ should have either Den-O or Wizard, and Whale's original world should have Kiva. Neverland would have... Kuuga?

Oh, and to justify having the uber-tech of the Drivers, the small town Regina rules is Eureka.

edited 17th Aug '15 8:04:52 PM by SCMof2814

Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#1869: Aug 17th 2015 at 8:08:32 PM

Sad to say that I have thought a bit about the other worlds too.

  • Oz is the Bujinverse. Zelena ends up being a combination of Bujin Gaim and Megahex as a result
  • Whale's world... Yeah, Kiva makes sense due to the monster mash (we only seen Frankenstein and the world's implied that it's the Hammer Horror movies all rolled into one)
  • Neverland was a world long consumed by Helheim, with the only Overlord remaining being the Shadow, who took precautions to ensure his world doesn't spread to other worlds. Unfortunately, a bean ruins all that.
  • Bit fuzzy on Arendelle, though it's mainly because I'm sticking to 1-3 right now. But due to Time Travel crap going on, I might decide for Den-O.

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#1870: Aug 17th 2015 at 8:11:14 PM

Eh? I thought Arendelle was a different country in the same world.

And if it's long-consumed, then it most certainly used to be Saban Masked Rider. If any Rider could be said to be 'consumed'...

edited 17th Aug '15 8:13:16 PM by SCMof2814

Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#1871: Aug 17th 2015 at 8:14:16 PM

[up] Oh right... yeah.

edited 17th Aug '15 8:26:14 PM by Psyga315

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#1872: Aug 17th 2015 at 8:24:18 PM

Was really necessary to spoiler that one? waii

So, how does it go... The evil queen Regina, barging in on the wedding of the other side of the civil war (she's STILL queen, after all), talks trash, and Snow white brings up 'people turning into monsters... only Regina had nothing to do with that. And with the fruits growing in people's wounds...

They grudgingly set aside their differences as incidents increase and escalate. More and more countries are affected, such as Arendelle, Camelot with it's new High King Arturia, the Sun Kingdom and it's recently found princess Rupunzel, etc. Regina tricks them into using the Dark Curse as a 'save everyone' spell. At the last minute, Rumpelstiltzkin spills what it REALLY does, and Pinochio and Emma barely escape by being sent to another world...

Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#1873: Aug 17th 2015 at 8:27:39 PM

[up] The first and last part basically. Only with the addition of Inves attacking during the wedding and Regina going It Wasnt Me This Time.

edited 17th Aug '15 8:27:52 PM by Psyga315

SCMof2814 Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: I don't mind being locked in this eternal maze!
#1874: Aug 17th 2015 at 8:30:23 PM

So tempting... well, do you want my help to write it?

Psyga315 Since: Jan, 2001
#1875: Aug 17th 2015 at 8:35:04 PM

[up] Hm... I'll give it a think over, though I'm liking the ideas you gave me so far so if I ever decide to do it, I'll let you know and we'll brainstorm from there. I haven't exactly gotten to work on the story yet and I had someone PM me an idea a while back that is sort of an expansion of a fanfic I did where it small stories where the Madoka cast talked with the Gaim cast.

edited 17th Aug '15 8:35:36 PM by Psyga315


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