Okay, so I reduced the stats, revised Apocalyptic Horseman's rules so that they're just imbued with Prana, and changed Big Stick into a buff that actually encourages him to use Big Stick Diplomacy.
And actually, those stats don't seem so bad when you consider that, according to the wiki, he is now thirty times stronger than a normal human ever could be.
Let me look at the free Servants and I'll see if I can bring in another Master, if you guys want.
Avatar from http://x0whitelily0x.livejournal.com/7486.htmlHere's mine. A Rider~!
Pfft. Signatures suck.Mine is an Archer.
Master of the Cliffhanger! Fire Emblem Elibe LP!- Name: Jackie Lee
- Age: 28
- Gender: Female
- Appearance: "I'll beat any man in this room in sixty seconds." (her before her Start of Darkness)
- Personality: It's evident from the get-go that Jackie has more than a few screws loose. She's got the mentality of an immature teenager, and acts like one too, practically making herself out to be a walking fountain of one-liners and pop-culture references. She hates rules and discipline, which is ironic considering her background in martial arts, but above all, one thing sets Jackie apart as strange. She enjoys hurting people. As in, a lot. To call Jackie sadistic would be implying restraint, which would in turn be implying most of the people on the receiving end of her wrath live to tell about it. If Jackie doesn't like you, she kills you. If she thinks killing you would be fun, she kills you. If someone tells her to, she kills you. She has no restraint, and no compunctions about brutally maiming and murdering innocents and combatants alike, apparently having skipped right out on the "discipline" part of martial arts.
- Abilities: Jackie is a prodigal master of a rare school of martial arts, one which her father was one of the last practitioners of. It isn't exactly a style unto itself, per se, but rather involves the teaching of twelve separate styles of fighting, each named after the Chinese zodiac. Many of the styles are borrowed or based off of other styles of fighting, and it is only the combining of the twelve into one fighter that sets this school apart, as the usage and random interchanging of twelve different styles makes the fighter hard to predict or counter. As it stands, Jackie only knows three of the twelve styles*, but possesses a fourth style of her own based on a modified version of one of the twelve. They are:
- Snake: A fighting style which uses a confusing set of flaccid, whip-like movements to disorient the enemy. What it lacks in power, it makes up for in maneuverability and obfuscation, as it relies primarily on loosening the body, making attacks harder to predict and dodging and countering much easier. Attacks in this style primarily consist of light punches, rising and falling kicks, and spinning/sweep kicks.
- Ox: A style which relies on a strong stance and minimal movement to deliver hard-hitting blows to the enemy. This style lacks in the maneuverability of Snake, and is comparatively less aggressive, relying on strong attacks with short range delivered from a rooted stance, like palm and elbow thrusts, and counter techniques, like various holds and grapples. Attacks in this style primarily consist of palm and elbow thrusts, and make heavy use of the knees and elbow, as well as the palm and ball of the foot.
- Hare Mk.1: A style reminiscent of kickboxing which ignores the fists in favor of focusing on delivering swift, powerful kicks in rapid succession. This style lacks in variety compared to the other two, but hits hard and fast, and can land multiple hits in rapid succession when pinning and enemy.
- Hare Mk.2: A modified version of Hare Mk.1 which trades the usage of the feet and applies a similar philosophy to the fists, focusing on swift jabs and powerful punches, similar to boxing. Like the Hare Mk.1, this style's strengths lie in its speed and rapid fire capabilities.
- Assets: None. No magical weapons or bases, not even a wallet. But she's a skilled killer and a master Mac Gyver, perfectly capable of adapting on the fly and using what's available to her.
edited 8th Jul '12 1:59:53 AM by KSPAM
I've got new mythological machinery, and very handsome supernatural scenery. Goodfae: a mafia web serialAnd Teddy? Is he good enough now that he's been nerfed?
Woops, sorry. Yeah, he's good.
I've got new mythological machinery, and very handsome supernatural scenery. Goodfae: a mafia web serialRad! Now to find a Master. Additionally, could I get a recap now or would it be more practical for Rider to get one IC upon summoning?
There's a recap of day zero in the discussion thread.
Also, as requested a Servant for Jackie.
- Class: Caster
- Master: Jackie Lee
- True Name: A certain Fish-Face.
- Gender: Male
- Height/ Weight: 196 cm/70 Kg
- Alignment: Chaotic Evil
- Appearance:JEANNEEE!!◊
- Personality: You really want me to describe this nut? Fine. Completely batshit insane, Gilles has a love for murder (especially children), and gore, lots and lots of it. He's completely obsessed with his "holy virgin", Jeanne. Also, due to Jeanne's death, he's gone out of his way to become an unholy blasphemer.
- Stats: (From E to A+, E being the worst, A+ being the highest)
- Strength: D
- Endurance: E
- Agility: D
- Magical Energy: C
- Luck: E
- Noble Phantasm (Rank): A+
- Class Skills:
- Territory Creation :B: Creation of a "Workshop" becomes possible.
- Personal Skills:
- Eye for Art: E-: If he happens to see a Noble Phantasm that possess artistic anecdotes, there is a small chance that he might be able to figure out its true name.
- Mental Pollution : A :makes it highly possible to shut out any mental interference Thaumaturgy, due possessing a distorted mentality. However, at the same time it becomes impossible to come to an understanding with individuals that do not possess an equivalent rank of mental pollution
- Noble Phantasms:
- Prelati's Spellbook: Text of the Sunken Spiraled City (A+, Anti-Army):is a demonic guidebook and summoning grimoire with a cover made of glistening and wet human skin. It allows the summoning of an army of Horrors water demons from the depth of the seas of another dimension, High Thaumaturgy, and Greater Rituals. Rather than simply functioning as tome of spells and curses, the book itself is a "monster" that functions as a prana core possessing it's own enormous prana furnaces completely independent of its wielder's prana. It can either be read from as regular tome for minor spells, such as summoning a single demon with "Cthulhu fhtagn", or it can be completely commanded by the user, causing the pages to rapidly flip by themselves, as the tome provides the necessary incantations and its own independent power to conduct the summoning spells.
...Yes, I dared to post this monster. There's a chance he won't be accepted, since the Grail isn't corrupted but....think of all the fun!
Side Note: Jeanne. Arturia. Nero. Jessica. Holy Virgins everywhere. Caster is in paradise.
edited 8th Jul '12 5:35:18 PM by DeathChariot
Master of the Cliffhanger! Fire Emblem Elibe LP!Accepted!
"Hey you! Nano-something or other!"Accepted. NOW POOOOOST.
I've got new mythological machinery, and very handsome supernatural scenery. Goodfae: a mafia web serial...Huh. Didn't think I'd get away with it.
You first. You're the Master.
edited 8th Jul '12 5:50:31 PM by DeathChariot
Master of the Cliffhanger! Fire Emblem Elibe LP!- Class: Lancer
- Master: TBA
- True Name: Scáthach
- Gender: Female
- Height/Weight: 188cm/80kg
- Alignment: Chaotic Neutral
- Appearance:
The Witch of ShadowsQueen of No Pants - Personality: A rather unscrupulous woman who seems to think she exists for the sole purpose of trolling her Master. Scàthach doesn't care much for authority or intimidation, and thinks of herself as separate from the system instead of a part of it, or at least that's the impression she gives off. She's got a devil may care attitude, and is unabashedly hedonistic and promiscuous, her main reasons for doing most of what she does boiling down to "it seemed fun at the time". Mostly just concerned with having fun, but is capable of being serious, or at least something approaching it.
- Stats:
- Strength: B
- Endurance: C
- Agility: A
- Mana: B
- Luck: C
- Noble Phantasm: B
- Class Skills:
- Magic Resistance (B): Cancel spells with a chant below three verses. Even if targeted by High-Thaumaturgy and Greater Rituals, it is difficult for her to be affected
- Personal Skills:
- Battle Continuation (A): Makes possible to fight even with deadly injuries and can remain alive so long as one does not receive a decisive fatal wound.
- Eye of the Mind (False) (A): An innate talent to sense and avoid danger based on intuition gained through many ordeals and adventures.
- Rune Magic (B): The capacity to use the eighteen original runes.
- Noble Phantasm(s):
- Gáe Bolg (Anti-Unit) (B): An innate property of Gáe Bolg which can only be realized by its true master. Upon piercing the flesh of the enemy, the spear will branch out into many thorns, rupturing the enemy's arteries, killing them instantly (and messily). These thorns will not retract as long as they are soaked in blood, which makes removal of Gáe Bolg... difficult.
- Gáe Bolg (Anti-Unit) (B)
- Gáe Bolg (Anti-Army) (B+)
edited 11th Jul '12 9:30:11 AM by KSPAM
I've got new mythological machinery, and very handsome supernatural scenery. Goodfae: a mafia web serial- Name: Edward "Eddie" Greyson
- Age: 24
- Gender: Male
- Description: Wanna die,punk?◊
- Personality: Loud, cocky, hotheaded and a bit of a dick. Seems to be always pissed. He's always looking for a fight, and is quite foul mouthed as well. Despite all that, he's a decent enough guy, with a particular soft spot for cute things. Like kittens. Incredibly easy to troll.
- Abilities: Is a magus, oddly enough. Specializes in fire magic. And beating people to a bloody pulp with his reinforced body. Also: That sword.
- Mystic Code: Carnage Scissors: The hunk of steel he calls a sword. It's a brutal weapon, which inflicts wounds that won't stop bleeding. It's a property of the sword itself, and the curse effect may be cured by a sufficiently skilled magus.
- Bio: Copy paste generic magus backstory. Except that Eddie has always been a problem to his parents, always getting into trouble, disrespecting the rules, generally being a dick. His parents would have given him up for adoption years ago, but as he was the only heir, and he was actually a decent magus, they kept him around. When the War started, the parents being Akasha-obssessed magi, made him join in. Eddie's just happy he can fight people.
- Assets: Parent's admittedly mediocre wealth. And lots of attitude.
edited 11th Jul '12 6:38:38 PM by DeathChariot
Master of the Cliffhanger! Fire Emblem Elibe LP!Fuck yeah manly fire mage with a sword! Also Ragna is a pretty awesome character in Blaz Blu. You interested in teaming up to create TEAM MASCULINITY?
Sorry, bro, but this particular Master was a request.
Master of the Cliffhanger! Fire Emblem Elibe LP!Scathach~
Also, accepted unless Ragna says otherwise (heheheheh... Ragna...)
I've got new mythological machinery, and very handsome supernatural scenery. Goodfae: a mafia web serialRAGNA THE BLOODEDGE...YOU'RE STUPID!
Someone make a Jin or Noel Master!
Master of the Cliffhanger! Fire Emblem Elibe LP!Actually, looking through mage profiles I really think Roosevelt and Naboro Ueno would work fantastically. They play as foils to eachother in some aspects but would hit it off well in others, it's freaking great. Is Flanker still following the thread?
- Class: Rider
- Master: TBA
- True Name: Medusa
- Gender: Female
- Height/Weight: 172cm/57kg
- Alignment: Chaotic Good
- Appearance: Bewitching Black Serpent ◊
- Personality: Rider is silent, sultry, and vigilant, never hesitating to shield her Master from harm.
- Stats:
- Strength: B
- Endurance: B
- Agility: A
- Mana: D
- Luck: E
- Noble Phantasm: A+
- Class Skills:
- Personal Skills:
- Noble Phantasms:
YAY! A CANON THAT'S NOT BEING PLAYED BY ME~!
Master of the Cliffhanger! Fire Emblem Elibe LP!Oh, gosh, I put off making a Master for Calamity for so long....Sorry about that,Ragna. And Death, you said you wanted a Noel Master~!
- Name: Katherine "Kate" Winters (Yes, I made her last name complement Elena's..)
- Age: 16
- Gender: Female
- Description: Um...Hi...◊
- Personality: An amazingly shy girl, Kate would probably collapse if she was put into the spotlight. Soft-spoken, easily flustered, and apologizes a lot. She loves all manner of cute things, and wants to be a novelist someday. Looks up to her friends, especially Elena. Also, she's a bit of a Covert Pervert.
- Abilities: None? She's a normal girl. Okay, writing talent, but that doesn't count,right? Maybe her infamously bad cooking?
- Bio: She's a friend and schoolmate of Elena's. Always bullied, she never really had friends until Elena, and as a result, Kate really looks up to her. But these days, Elena seems distracted, as if she's preparing for something really important....So, Kate visited her house...and one thing lead to another, and now she's in the War.
- Assets: Middle class. Not much else.
edited 12th Jul '12 1:33:37 AM by TheMightyZero
Pfft. Signatures suck.
Okay, this one actually qualifies as per 'verse regulations. However... he needs some nerfing. Newer Servants tend to be less powerful because, as with Noble Phantasms themselves, the older something is the more powerful it is. Compare Jack the Ripper to Gilgamesh or Heracles, and you'll see what I mean. Power increases with age, and Teddy is the youngest Servant I've seen so far (not counting EMIYA, because he comes from the future, and his stats are pretty shit too).
For stats, Ragna and I recommend C, D, D, D, and E. However, if you don't like this, feel free to come up with your own revised set. Just be reasonable.
We'd also like you to get rid of Apocalyptic Horseman, just because of the C-Rank Servant bit. Replace that with Prana Burst Rank D, and you should be able to apply the same effect to motorcycles and horses as the C-Rank NP bit. Just... the Servant bit was a bit overkill.
Finally... no Big Stick. It seems very similar to Charisma in effect, and brainwashing people... is an RP no-no. Sorry, but this is a long-standing rule. Along with time manipulation and telepathy, mind control is a power any responsible GM just doesn't allow, at least not usually.
Fix this stuff and you're good to go.
I've got new mythological machinery, and very handsome supernatural scenery. Goodfae: a mafia web serial