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Karxrida Art by @anoderp from Darkness within Darkness Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
Art by @anoderp
Aug 19th 2017 at 5:00:57 PM

ComicBook.Teen Titans has a lot of editorializing and need a significant overhaul.

If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?
Aug 20th 2017 at 12:34:53 AM

Dune's work page description talks main about the film's Troubled Production history but mentions absolutely nothing about the film's plot.

Huthman Queen of Neith from Unknown, Antarctica Relationship Status: Pining for the fjords
Queen of Neith
Aug 27th 2017 at 4:08:51 PM

I'm not a good wiki editor here, but two pages are in desperate need of improvement and fixing.

Up in Useful Notes/Paraguay
TotemicHero Not a bug! from the next level
Not a bug!
Aug 28th 2017 at 8:56:52 AM

The Exalted page description needs a trimming bad - it's painfully long. Anyone here more familiar with the game than me who can take a whack at it?

Expergiscēre cras, medior quam hodie. (Awaken tomorrow, better than today.)
Dec 10th 2017 at 5:54:32 AM

Tarzan and Jane needs some rewriting, as right now it's mostly just one large Wall of Text description.

Dec 11th 2017 at 3:36:19 PM

I think Yentl's work page description goes a bit into too much detail and might wanna be rewritten or trimmed a bit.

TotemicHero Not a bug! from the next level
Not a bug!
Feb 8th 2018 at 3:13:13 PM

I think we've found a major contender for "description most like a sales pitch" award in the form of Rama. Anyone disagree that it needs a heavy rewrite?

Expergiscēre cras, medior quam hodie. (Awaken tomorrow, better than today.)
Karxrida Art by @anoderp from Darkness within Darkness Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
Art by @anoderp
Mar 21st 2018 at 3:32:30 PM

I just axed a bunch of text in Jason Griffith that focused on how devise he was as the voice of Sonic (to the exclusion of talking about the rest of his career).

If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?
Primis from Nsburg
Mar 21st 2018 at 8:49:27 PM

Stargate Infinity needs a new description. Its current description is mostly about how inconsistent it is with its parent shows in the Stargate-verse.

EDIT: Went ahead and gave it a shot myself. I'm not familiar with Infinity, but I think I was able to piece enough together from different sources to give it a decent description.

edited 22nd Mar '18 2:00:47 PM by Primis

Night Vision Image Quality Cleanup Thread
Jun 12th 2018 at 5:59:24 PM

ComicBook.Tuskegee Heirs has no description, just a trope / some tropes.

And no wicks to it.

It's also more than a year old. 3 edits, including mine?

edited 12th Jun '18 5:59:39 PM by Malady

Help with possible disambig and redirect issues!
Jun 13th 2018 at 1:43:56 AM

Hector and the Search for Happiness doesn't really have a work page descriptions. Just a mention of some of the actors that are in the film and the fact that it is based on a novel.

Silverblade2 Relationship Status: TV Tropes ruined my love life
Karxrida Art by @anoderp from Darkness within Darkness Relationship Status: I LOVE THIS DOCTOR!
Art by @anoderp
Dec 13th 2018 at 6:35:06 PM

VideoGame.Star Fox 2 focuses a bit to much on its unique release history (which is admittedly important) in leau of actually talking about the game.

Edited by Karxrida on Dec 13th 2018 at 6:35:26 AM

If a tree falls in the forest and nobody remembers it, who else will you have ice cream with?
Mickoonsley19 I love 'Pleasant Goat and Big Big Wolf'! from Green Green Grassland Relationship Status: It's complicated
Mar 2nd 2019 at 12:45:01 AM

I'm having trouble writing a good description of PGA Tour, can anyone chime in?

Mar 5th 2019 at 8:09:05 PM

LightNovel.Beyond The Boundary's description doesn't explain what Yomu are, or anything?

From what Wikipedia says, It seems like Spirit Hunters hunt Yomu, because they're visible to them, but Invisible to Normals, and do so to protect the normals.

Yomu are manifestations of negative human emotion, that... can do something? Possess people?

How are human-Yomu hybrids possible? Are some Yomu, sapient?

Help with possible disambig and redirect issues!
Primis from Nsburg
Apr 26th 2019 at 6:11:49 PM

The entire first paragraph of Code Lyoko: Evolution was written before the series premiered, six years ago.

I know nothing about this show, so I can't be the one to rewrite it.

Night Vision Image Quality Cleanup Thread
ShinyCottonCandy Actually sour cream from The Galar Region Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
Actually sour cream
Jul 8th 2019 at 8:39:56 AM

From Pokémon Sweets Version:

Pokémon Sweets Version is a ROM Hack from Pokémon FireRed.

To put it this way, about everything in the entire game is a Level Ate.

That’s it. That’s the entire description. Definitely could use some actual information if anyone here is familiar with the work.

Edited by ShinyCottonCandy on Jul 8th 2019 at 11:41:11 AM

I need to think of a better signature.
sgamer82 from Meridian, ID
Sep 21st 2019 at 12:51:50 PM

Bringing this over from the Removing complaining, bashing and other negativity from the wiki thread. The description for Ghost Whisperer is written in such a way that it bashes the show it's describing.

The first paragraph, for context sake

Ghost Whisperer is an American TV show that ran from 2005 through 2010. It's also known as that show where Jennifer Love Hewitt traipses around in vintage clothing, often low-cut. The episodes follow a formula: Ghost makes its presence known, Melinda flutters about trying to help, Melinda helps the ghost with its business, everyone cries, ghost goes into The Light. The few instances where that doesn't happen involves the ancient spirits that inhabit Grandview, Melinda's town, and some prophecy involving Melinda and her abilities.

It also has a list of characters in the description, which seems unnecessary since there's also a characters page.

Plus, remember how in Eragon everyone cries "a single tear"? Yeah, just try that with One Piece and see if it works
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