About what I was gonna say to Lior, doesn't Lehav feel like... Kind of a Captain Obvious?
Though maybe that's an intended character trait. Iunno.
"I like girls, but now, it's about justice."Dammit I knew this was gonna happen and I'll create a character with mistakenly somehow I don't have any idea when he is but he is a Captain Obvious. I just seem to not notice these things. Ever.
@Mobile: Thanks.
Gonna have to agree with Pancake. He narrates and states the obvious a lot. To the point where it's kind of distracting, and it's difficult to get a handle on his character, because instead of dialogue, I just hear narration. I think this might simply be a language barrier issue, though, since you certainly speak it fluently, but maybe haven't picked up on some of the nuances yet? I'm not sure.
MY SOUL IS DARK BUT MY HAIR IS COLORFUL — Brahian Pokémon AlchemistNo, this might be a part of my traits rubbing off on him, basically I expect every possibility as a possibility, which includes the person near me of not knowing what I say. But yes I probably need to improve my way of writing his dialogue, make myself a list of things of what he says to a person shouldn't be. Could be language, what is Nuances exactly?
edited 7th Jun '13 10:00:18 AM by LiorVal
When he pointed out Luis may have been embarrassed. That was pretty obvious.
"I like girls, but now, it's about justice."

I'd say Hig's mold is Snarky and/or Surreal Humor.
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