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eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#109001: May 20th 2013 at 9:25:50 PM

You're characters are different, they all seem pretty well written, though.

Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#109002: May 20th 2013 at 9:26:17 PM

Hmmm... Their good Space.

LOVE IS STORED IN THE AXOLOTL!
Lunarcat Star Child from I'll be right here Since: Jul, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Star Child
#109003: May 20th 2013 at 9:26:52 PM

Yeah, I like the more idealistic characters, that are also funny and strong. That's why I think Meowth is gonna be my second main. He's a jerk with a heart of gold type, but kids show jerk with a heart of gold, which I can work with.

I've watched waaaaayyy to many disney movies. It's broken me.

Your characters are great Space. No problems from what I can see!

All our wishes can come true
thestonedog78 Princess Warlock from from deep space Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Princess Warlock
#109004: May 20th 2013 at 9:28:17 PM

Hey guys what are my problems?

They can't for the life of them understand why nobody liked being ruled by a group of manic depressive demigods - 4chan
eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#109005: May 20th 2013 at 9:29:47 PM

@Stone: ur face, ur face, ur face, ur face.

Just the grammar and spelling, as far as I can tell.

thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#109006: May 20th 2013 at 9:30:20 PM

Hmm...

Stone, I think your only problem is just sort of, like, grammar and punctuation. It's a minor thing, don't worry about it too much.

UN JOUR JE SERAI DE RETOUR PRÈS DE TOI
GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#109007: May 20th 2013 at 9:31:01 PM

@Daisy: Okay, I think I mentioned this on a previous page, but... why the hell does someone from a society where VR space and data and shit have advanced to the point they have still not know at least the basics of what's going on?

MY SOUL IS DARK BUT MY HAIR IS COLORFUL — Brahian Pokémon Alchemist
rockmanx Since: Jun, 2011
#109008: May 20th 2013 at 9:32:13 PM

@Stone: Aside from the typos and stuff, you're good.

thestonedog78 Princess Warlock from from deep space Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Princess Warlock
#109009: May 20th 2013 at 9:32:59 PM

so my character are believable?

They can't for the life of them understand why nobody liked being ruled by a group of manic depressive demigods - 4chan
GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#109010: May 20th 2013 at 9:34:01 PM

@Jam: Some of your characters seem kind of the same sometimes. Not that they're bad, because you stick to what you're good at, and you are good at it, but branching out a little might be good.

@Stone: They might sugarcoat it, but I won't. Stone, you're a good writer, but half the time I can't understand a damn thing you or your characters are saying. Your posts are like riddles. We tolerate spelling errors and stuff from time to time, but would it kill you to look at what you've typed before you hit "add post"?

MY SOUL IS DARK BUT MY HAIR IS COLORFUL — Brahian Pokémon Alchemist
Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#109011: May 20th 2013 at 9:34:11 PM

Well its just that I don't.

I said I don't know what to post if I don't know the basics, but I want to still be part of it. So it comes out as a stupid post.

edited 20th May '13 9:41:04 PM by Lilqueendaisy

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eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#109012: May 20th 2013 at 9:34:26 PM

Yes, even the crazies like Washu and Gamzee.

thestonedog78 Princess Warlock from from deep space Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Princess Warlock
#109014: May 20th 2013 at 9:34:52 PM

@Spazz: Thanks im trying.

seer: Thanks

edited 20th May '13 9:35:27 PM by thestonedog78

They can't for the life of them understand why nobody liked being ruled by a group of manic depressive demigods - 4chan
Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#109015: May 20th 2013 at 9:42:29 PM

So is the Paranoid train still moving?

edited 20th May '13 9:47:08 PM by Lilqueendaisy

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gameknight102xx Since: Aug, 2011
#109016: May 20th 2013 at 9:43:01 PM

God, too much freaking work. Uuugh. Done most of it so now I have a bit of free time.

Anyway, anything new popped up?

edited 20th May '13 9:43:41 PM by gameknight102xx

eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#109017: May 20th 2013 at 9:43:12 PM

CHOO CHOO

ALL ABOARD THE ANXIETY TRAIN!

[up]The RP is going through Schedule Slip, so we decided to do a Sub-Plot~

edited 20th May '13 9:44:03 PM by eldritchseer

gameknight102xx Since: Aug, 2011
#109018: May 20th 2013 at 9:46:23 PM

Figures.

Also, I've found that a lot of people actually like Sword Art Online. I haven't seen many negative reviews for it. Although they all had the same complaint about the main character. The same one you guys had.

RegularDefender MAYONNAISE from Blighty Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: Singularity
MAYONNAISE
#109019: May 20th 2013 at 9:51:30 PM

Thinking of doing something more with Griffin.

However- it'd probably have to be a teaser.

As it is- It's approaching the hour of six in the morning.

1.5 imperial gallons of tea were consumed during the writing of this post
thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#109020: May 20th 2013 at 9:58:02 PM

get sleep

UN JOUR JE SERAI DE RETOUR PRÈS DE TOI
RegularDefender MAYONNAISE from Blighty Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: Singularity
MAYONNAISE
#109021: May 20th 2013 at 9:58:27 PM

No u

But I'm Hungry.

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Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#109022: May 20th 2013 at 10:04:39 PM

Then eat, then sleep.

edited 20th May '13 10:04:49 PM by Lilqueendaisy

LOVE IS STORED IN THE AXOLOTL!
RegularDefender MAYONNAISE from Blighty Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: Singularity
MAYONNAISE
#109023: May 20th 2013 at 10:05:24 PM

I suppose I could sleep.

Eat later.

I mean.

I'd still get the healthy four hours that means I live longer.

If I get up at ten that is.

edited 20th May '13 10:05:37 PM by RegularDefender

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SR3NORMANDY Problem Child from N/A - In constant flux Since: Jul, 2012
Problem Child
#109024: May 20th 2013 at 10:06:33 PM

Four hours isn't healthy.

It's meant to be eight hours for adults.

Nine hours for teens.

What if there’s no better word than just not saying anything?
eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#109025: May 20th 2013 at 10:06:33 PM

Hungry, eh?


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