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GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#108976: May 20th 2013 at 8:56:29 PM

I see. I will try to improve upon this without moving into That Makes Me Feel Angry territory.

Is there anything I am doing right?

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Azure Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist from The World Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: We finish each other's sandwiches
Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist
#108977: May 20th 2013 at 8:59:38 PM

Well for one I don't really think you've done a bad character just yet. Generally things that you do are fun.

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SR3NORMANDY Problem Child from N/A - In constant flux Since: Jul, 2012
Problem Child
#108978: May 20th 2013 at 9:01:21 PM

Yes. I rarely fail to be entertained when RPing with you, Spaz.

What if there’s no better word than just not saying anything?
Higginbid vee-gor from Mt. Ebott Since: May, 2012
vee-gor
#108979: May 20th 2013 at 9:03:21 PM

[up] Same here.

How about me? What do I do right/wrong? Just curious like the rest of us.

edited 20th May '13 9:03:35 PM by Higginbid

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GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#108980: May 20th 2013 at 9:06:30 PM

Okay then.

MY SOUL IS DARK BUT MY HAIR IS COLORFUL — Brahian Pokémon Alchemist
eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#108981: May 20th 2013 at 9:07:05 PM

I'll jump on the paranoia train with Higg and ask what I do best and what I do worst.

Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#108982: May 20th 2013 at 9:11:34 PM

Jumping on the paranoia train, choo choo!

I think I accidently infect my characters with my own stupid when I play them like if I don't know about something then... Well I make my characters look dumb.

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RegularDefender MAYONNAISE from Blighty Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: Singularity
MAYONNAISE
#108983: May 20th 2013 at 9:12:34 PM

I think I accidentally make my characters sympathetic sometimes. Even when they shouldn't be.

Or they seem to mesh- to me at least.

edited 20th May '13 9:12:50 PM by RegularDefender

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rockmanx Since: Jun, 2011
#108984: May 20th 2013 at 9:14:58 PM

I think I make my characters too snarky at times.

Azure Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist from The World Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: We finish each other's sandwiches
Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist
#108985: May 20th 2013 at 9:17:34 PM

Higg, Seer I don't really see anything you can improve on right now.

Daisy, all of your characters over 12 act younger than they are.

Olive, your only problem was that you didn't interact much or found a reson fromt them to not care. You've since fixed that. Griffin is probably your best character.

Now I will jump on ze wagon of bands.

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thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#108986: May 20th 2013 at 9:18:44 PM

Your characters all seem... I dunno, a bit blunt. I got no idea why. Not that this is a bad thing, just a thing I've noticed.

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Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#108987: May 20th 2013 at 9:19:52 PM

... FFFFFFF—Damnit why am I so bad with maturity!?

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RegularDefender MAYONNAISE from Blighty Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: Singularity
MAYONNAISE
#108988: May 20th 2013 at 9:20:03 PM

Thanks, Jam.

I try to interact at points- even if Griffin's more of a reactionary character.

Which kind of plays into my hands a little.

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Higginbid vee-gor from Mt. Ebott Since: May, 2012
vee-gor
#108989: May 20th 2013 at 9:20:49 PM

Alright. Good to know.

Jam, your characters are up to par, IMO. Believable, fresh, and quirky. I can't find any problems.

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eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#108990: May 20th 2013 at 9:20:53 PM

who's characters seem blunt, space

Azure Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist from The World Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: We finish each other's sandwiches
Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist
#108991: May 20th 2013 at 9:21:10 PM

@Space:If you mean me what do you mean by that?

Thanks Hig!

edited 20th May '13 9:21:48 PM by Azure

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Lunarcat Star Child from I'll be right here Since: Jul, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Star Child
#108992: May 20th 2013 at 9:21:29 PM

-de lurks-

Can... can I ask also? Best and not best?

Jam: You are very good at jumping between characters and making them all seem separate. You are a good writer, and your characters are defined nicely.

Not as good... I haven't actually seen you make, like, any royal mess ups. Umm... you're pretty good.

I've been trying to find my second main Avvie and I think it's going to be meowth.

All our wishes can come true
thestonedog78 Princess Warlock from from deep space Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Princess Warlock
#108993: May 20th 2013 at 9:21:45 PM

back!!

So Guys I dont know what to do?

I want to play Gamzee but I dont think he going to work.

I could drop and spend the time reading homestuck or i could keep playing with some one else.

They can't for the life of them understand why nobody liked being ruled by a group of manic depressive demigods - 4chan
thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#108995: May 20th 2013 at 9:21:58 PM

Yeah, I mean Jam. Sorry, should've clarified.

I... don't know exactly what I mean. It's kind of hard to explain. Just sort of a thing I've noticed.

Lunar's thing is definitely writing characters. You're good at writing sort of optimistic, idealistic characters. Like Pikachu!

edited 20th May '13 9:22:48 PM by thespacephantom

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Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#108996: May 20th 2013 at 9:22:56 PM

Jam your the best writer and everyone knows it.

As for me I think I need to learn how to act like a adult... Which will take a long time.

edited 20th May '13 9:24:22 PM by Lilqueendaisy

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Azure Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist from The World Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: We finish each other's sandwiches
Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist
#108997: May 20th 2013 at 9:23:57 PM

Hm...

Norm found me out! -bails-

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eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#108998: May 20th 2013 at 9:24:04 PM

I love it when the thread really starts posting

Also, how is the whole Fallen London Plotlet looking?

thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#108999: May 20th 2013 at 9:24:57 PM

Hmm...

What do you guys think about my characters? Because, I keep thinking there's a problem with them, and I'm not really sure what it is.

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rockmanx Since: Jun, 2011
#109000: May 20th 2013 at 9:25:44 PM

@Space: I don't see a problem with them, really.


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