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thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#108951: May 20th 2013 at 8:08:29 PM

...Huh. That's a tough one. I would say you're good at characterization, at coming up with memorable characters, and basically cool, memorable stuff in general.

As for faults... I dunno, I can't really think of any at the moment.

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Lunarcat Star Child from I'll be right here Since: Jul, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Star Child
#108952: May 20th 2013 at 8:11:36 PM

Well... your writing style is very interesting, it sound unique, and I can tell you have a strong voice behind your writing.

You play characters well and most of them are very interesting. They are imaginative.

Weaknesses... give me a little while on that.

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fancywig ⋆ ⋆ ⋆ from heckie Since: Apr, 2013 Relationship Status: It was only a kiss
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#108953: May 20th 2013 at 8:14:37 PM

Your writing is really good, to be honest! I love how you roleplay some interesting characters, 'specially Rose.

Like many others, I'm nooooooooot too sure about weaknesses.

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LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#108954: May 20th 2013 at 8:16:08 PM

Probably gone for a while.

Going on a schoolwork spree. So don't expect to see me very often.

Just letting you guys know.

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#108955: May 20th 2013 at 8:17:04 PM

Man. Everyone's leaving now. Later, Badger. :/

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Lunarcat Star Child from I'll be right here Since: Jul, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Star Child
#108956: May 20th 2013 at 8:18:01 PM

There there space, soon summer will arrive.

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RegularDefender MAYONNAISE from Blighty Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: Singularity
MAYONNAISE
#108957: May 20th 2013 at 8:18:40 PM

And during that Summer I'll be moving / going to a History festival for a weekend in one of those weeks.

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SR3NORMANDY Problem Child from N/A - In constant flux Since: Jul, 2012
Problem Child
#108958: May 20th 2013 at 8:18:47 PM

You sometimes write on impulse. This is a two edged sword, as it leads to clever, spur of the moment writings on your good days, but leads to inconsistency in characterisation on your bad days.

What if there’s no better word than just not saying anything?
Azure Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist from The World Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: We finish each other's sandwiches
Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist
#108959: May 20th 2013 at 8:20:50 PM

Okay. Rando, you have two main faults.

One comes out when playing characters like Majora. You seem to want all of your characters to be nice people, so they'll be likable. SO your more morally black characters end up inconsistent as you try to weed out traits you believe would be negative.

Your second one is that you worry too damn much about your writing and everyone liking what you're doing.

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fancywig ⋆ ⋆ ⋆ from heckie Since: Apr, 2013 Relationship Status: It was only a kiss
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#108960: May 20th 2013 at 8:22:35 PM

aaaand here is jessie in 3, 2, 1....

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GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#108961: May 20th 2013 at 8:25:13 PM

What they said. Relaaaaaaaax. :::;)

But, yeah. I think an issue you've had is that you do stuff that you think would be cool, without thinking about the repercussions of said things, which, as you've seen, can lead to a lot of trouble. You're not quite worst-case scenario (that would be Czer *shudder*), but, well... look at a shitload of stuff with Majora. Or, in a more minor example, Sagi!Marno. I don't think you planned his development very well.

edited 20th May '13 8:25:59 PM by GameSpazzer

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Randomman5 "The Perfect Villain Doesn't Exi-" Since: Oct, 2011 Relationship Status: Forming Voltron
"The Perfect Villain Doesn't Exi-"
#108962: May 20th 2013 at 8:27:48 PM

Okay. Thanks for the input, guys. s you can tell from my sig, title and avatar, this is where I say farewell.

Until our paths cross once more.

GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#108963: May 20th 2013 at 8:28:19 PM

On a more positive note, when you do bother doing spur of the moment things, and they work, they turn out to be quite fun. You also have a fairly expansive character vocabulary, if that's the right term for it. Coming from someone that loathes using two characters at once, this is a good thing to have. You also have the ability to have them play off of each other very well.

I might as well ask the same question he did.

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Lunarcat Star Child from I'll be right here Since: Jul, 2011 Relationship Status: Shipping fictional characters
Star Child
#108964: May 20th 2013 at 8:29:19 PM

Bye Random...

You were Rambo Magic.

edited 20th May '13 8:29:27 PM by Lunarcat

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thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#108965: May 20th 2013 at 8:29:20 PM

Later, Random. sad

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GlobsterAGoGo from Mobile Leprechaun's alt account Since: Jan, 2013 Relationship Status: Above such petty unnecessities
#108966: May 20th 2013 at 8:30:47 PM

This post, then bed for me.

Not much to add flawswise that the others didn't cover. One of your strongest points, I think, is your handling of comedic scenes. You might not be aware of this, but you have a real knack for comedic dialogue and timing. You are also pretty damn solid in the character development department, and as I said before, you do a good job of fleshing out combat-heavy characters.

Oh, shoot, I was too slow again. :( Hope you get to read this before you're off, and I'm wishing the best for you, whatever it is you're going through right now.

Bye, man. Take care of yourself. I hope you come back soon. :)

@Spazz: God, I'd have to think a good while about that. I'll think on it and post something sometime tomorrow if I get the chance.

edited 20th May '13 8:34:16 PM by GlobsterAGoGo

and then they fricked in the booty
rockmanx Since: Jun, 2011
#108967: May 20th 2013 at 8:31:35 PM

Bye, Ran.

also, i'm going to lurk now.

Higginbid vee-gor from Mt. Ebott Since: May, 2012
vee-gor
#108968: May 20th 2013 at 8:32:43 PM

Bye, Random. Hope we see you again soon.

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SR3NORMANDY Problem Child from N/A - In constant flux Since: Jul, 2012
GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#108970: May 20th 2013 at 8:37:21 PM

Come back soon!

I ask because I fear that as of late, my merit as the character writer/psychoanalysis bullshit writer has fallen somewhat significantly. More often than not, I've had to fall back on having my characters state how they feel when it becomes clear that my preferred, more subtle methods are not working.

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fancywig ⋆ ⋆ ⋆ from heckie Since: Apr, 2013 Relationship Status: It was only a kiss
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#108971: May 20th 2013 at 8:37:30 PM

bye random!!! ;w;

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Azure Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist from The World Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: We finish each other's sandwiches
Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist
#108972: May 20th 2013 at 8:39:27 PM

Spaz I would have to say that you try to be too subtle. You try to give hints about things that would have been better if they were just said. And alot of the time, the hints only make sense to you.

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SR3NORMANDY Problem Child from N/A - In constant flux Since: Jul, 2012
Problem Child
#108973: May 20th 2013 at 8:44:25 PM

Some of the time I pick up on the hints, but that's just because I've built up a big understanding of Cloud's character.

It definitely shuts out those less intimate with him.

What if there’s no better word than just not saying anything?
fancywig ⋆ ⋆ ⋆ from heckie Since: Apr, 2013 Relationship Status: It was only a kiss
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#108974: May 20th 2013 at 8:45:11 PM

gotta goo

i'll see you guys in the morning byeeee

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thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#108975: May 20th 2013 at 8:47:51 PM

Later.

-is planning to stay up alllll niiight-

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