#108454: May 19th 2013 at 8:51:59 PM
The only thing I could suggest is to make it more clear that Alpha is a teenage boy who hasn't lived thousands of years.
What if there’s no better word than just not saying anything?
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#108461: May 19th 2013 at 9:02:13 PM
No, I never said he did, I was just saying that if you want to make them more distinct, that's a difference to make very clear.
What if there’s no better word than just not saying anything?
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#108472: May 19th 2013 at 9:13:19 PM
It's been a while since I've had this much fun with him
At least FG!Cloud got to see his family after all that, instead of getting rejected by the first and best friend he ever had and mindraped some more.
@Norm: Okay.
Irony: At one point, I suggested that TAR use Cirno since he liked Touhou so much, just to get him to stop using his mouthpiece prinnies. He said no, because he claimed Cirno didn't have much of a personality.
Ha. Ha. Ha. Aha.
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did you just
use my exact words
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