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Randomman5 "The Perfect Villain Doesn't Exi-" Since: Oct, 2011 Relationship Status: Forming Voltron
"The Perfect Villain Doesn't Exi-"
#47726: Jan 10th 2013 at 8:26:45 PM

-Phoenix Down on Normandy-

SR3NORMANDY Problem Child from N/A - In constant flux Since: Jul, 2012
StrawberrytheSecond Just a Bug from the Ark Since: May, 2012
Just a Bug
#47728: Jan 10th 2013 at 8:31:21 PM

Yay~

This is a robbery. Give me all of your money and I'll kill you.
Imca (Veteran)
#47729: Jan 10th 2013 at 8:39:35 PM

.... Oh dear... O_o

H-How did you manage to get it in your eye though?

thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#47730: Jan 10th 2013 at 8:40:49 PM

Ouch. At least you're okay now, I guess. :/

UN JOUR JE SERAI DE RETOUR PRÈS DE TOI
LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#47731: Jan 10th 2013 at 8:44:18 PM

Glad you're all better Spazzerino. :)

Man, inking is not as bad as I thought it'd be!

edited 10th Jan '13 8:44:31 PM by LatverianBadger

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#47733: Jan 10th 2013 at 8:47:22 PM

Ha.

There's still some things that I'm just noticing mistakes with. Like her eyes. I mean, what the fuck.

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
Rivux same old me from [a jump to the sky turns to a rider kick] Since: Aug, 2010
same old me
#47734: Jan 10th 2013 at 8:48:22 PM

Not bad. Try out varying line thickness when you can, though. It can really make an image pop.

I will concede eyes to you... her torso is rather thin..

edited 10th Jan '13 8:49:41 PM by Rivux

mario is red, i am green, i try my best, but everyone's mean
GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#47735: Jan 10th 2013 at 8:51:52 PM

I slurped. Noodles do that.

Also, well done.

edited 10th Jan '13 8:52:03 PM by GameSpazzer

MY SOUL IS DARK BUT MY HAIR IS COLORFUL — Brahian Pokémon Alchemist
LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#47736: Jan 10th 2013 at 8:52:19 PM

Varying thickness, eyes, torso. Got it. Thanks Riv! :)

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
Randomman5 "The Perfect Villain Doesn't Exi-" Since: Oct, 2011 Relationship Status: Forming Voltron
"The Perfect Villain Doesn't Exi-"
#47737: Jan 10th 2013 at 8:52:56 PM

Spaz, I am loving this plot right now. Just Saiyan.

GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#47738: Jan 10th 2013 at 8:53:30 PM

Thanks.

MY SOUL IS DARK BUT MY HAIR IS COLORFUL — Brahian Pokémon Alchemist
thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#47739: Jan 10th 2013 at 8:58:15 PM

TACTICAL ESPIONAGE ACTION is the best kind of action.

edited 10th Jan '13 8:58:51 PM by thespacephantom

UN JOUR JE SERAI DE RETOUR PRÈS DE TOI
Rivux same old me from [a jump to the sky turns to a rider kick] Since: Aug, 2010
same old me
#47740: Jan 10th 2013 at 8:59:03 PM

WHOA YEAH

mario is red, i am green, i try my best, but everyone's mean
LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#47741: Jan 10th 2013 at 9:02:11 PM

Fuck, I need to get in on this already....

...how can I put Lynne in now?

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
Rivux same old me from [a jump to the sky turns to a rider kick] Since: Aug, 2010
same old me
#47742: Jan 10th 2013 at 9:04:18 PM

Temsik Meteorite + Lynne = Area 51 dissection tiem?

mario is red, i am green, i try my best, but everyone's mean
StrawberrytheSecond Just a Bug from the Ark Since: May, 2012
Just a Bug
#47743: Jan 10th 2013 at 9:04:28 PM

Now? Not a good time.

This is a robbery. Give me all of your money and I'll kill you.
GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#47744: Jan 10th 2013 at 9:07:14 PM

She was totally there the whole time?

MY SOUL IS DARK BUT MY HAIR IS COLORFUL — Brahian Pokémon Alchemist
LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#47745: Jan 10th 2013 at 9:08:19 PM

[up][up][up] Hmmm....do go on.

[up][up] Too much action going on?

[up] I....don't really like having characters just pop up since they were "there the whole time".

edited 10th Jan '13 9:08:34 PM by LatverianBadger

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
StrawberrytheSecond Just a Bug from the Ark Since: May, 2012
Just a Bug
#47746: Jan 10th 2013 at 9:09:13 PM

I'm having too much fun with this.

[up]Just having someone pop up out of nowhere during the heist mission seeems kinda....incredible.

edited 10th Jan '13 9:11:13 PM by StrawberrytheSecond

This is a robbery. Give me all of your money and I'll kill you.
GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#47747: Jan 10th 2013 at 9:11:13 PM

Hmm... Since I hadn't planned on doing both heists at once, this is going to shorten part one significantly.

MY SOUL IS DARK BUT MY HAIR IS COLORFUL — Brahian Pokémon Alchemist
Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#47748: Jan 10th 2013 at 9:12:35 PM

There are parts of it?

LOVE IS STORED IN THE AXOLOTL!
Rivux same old me from [a jump to the sky turns to a rider kick] Since: Aug, 2010
same old me
#47749: Jan 10th 2013 at 9:14:38 PM

The Temsik meteorite could somehow fall out of her possession and in some sort of struggle it ends up lodged inside her. . .

And then it turns out whoops she's not dead and gets carried away for dissection.

Ionno, something to think about later on I guess.

mario is red, i am green, i try my best, but everyone's mean
LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#47750: Jan 10th 2013 at 9:16:33 PM

@ Jam: Hmm, fair enough.

@ Riv: Hmmm, something to take note of....I could adapt that idea for later on...

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani

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