Gotta run off to a quick intro lecture, back in an hour.
What if there’s no better word than just not saying anything?"Hey sis pay attention!" the shrill voice of a younger girl snapped Fen out of her reverie. It was the only other crew member of the Dantalion, her sister Anna. "Remoras on our six! Three of them!" screamed Anna. The Air Cutter Remora was the Empire's main fighter aircraft. They likely spotted the Dantalion on their way home. "Dammit! I got them!" Fen called out to her sister as she rushed to the turrets controls.
As she turned to get the Remora's in sight they opened fire, shells from their turrets rocking the Danatlion's hull and threatening to tear the ship apart."Keep it steady Anna!"Instead of words Fen simply got a grunt in response, Anna was focusing on her job and now it was Fen's turn. Taking a breath she lined up her shot and fired hitting the Remora's propulsion system, sending it plummeting, and then another. "Haha! Suck it dogs!" she celebrated her victory a bit too early as the third was charging its Remora strike. A powerful beam attack that would take them out for sure if it hit.
Fen's eyes went wide as she scrambled to line up her third shot, while calling out to her sister "Anna watch out!"
"I see it." Anna declared as Fen took the shot hitting the Remora square in the cockpit. But the beam was already barreling for the ship, though its trajectory was now off slightly. It was this that allowed Anna to move the Dantalion just slightly to the left, as a transparent white beam streaked off past the bridge and into the distance
"Phew..."
"Phew..."
Both girls sighed in unison as it became clear they were safe once again. Fen made a mental note not to get too distracted watching the clouds next time.
Gonna post this as my writing sample. What you guys think?
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