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TheSpacePhantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#302651: Aug 13th 2014 at 6:44:11 PM

@mobile: aww, alright

i hope school goes well!

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eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#302652: Aug 13th 2014 at 6:49:10 PM

i go for a walk and everyone has left me

Boxen whatever he can Since: Jan, 2013
whatever he can
#302654: Aug 13th 2014 at 6:49:44 PM

SEER YOU'RE ALIVE

dead devotion
Trip Since: Mar, 2012
Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#302656: Aug 13th 2014 at 6:58:53 PM

Well I had the most boring wednesday ever.

LOVE IS STORED IN THE AXOLOTL!
Prometheus136 What's eatin' you, chief? from Yoknapatawpha County Since: Sep, 2011 Relationship Status: It's so nice to be turned on again
What's eatin' you, chief?
#302657: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:01:23 PM

More boring than being forced to watch a golf tournament?

War is God.
Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#302658: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:07:20 PM

Not even close to that.

LOVE IS STORED IN THE AXOLOTL!
eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#302659: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:11:23 PM

i live, i breath again

i shall rise to BLEACH the skies and STILL the water!

edited 13th Aug '14 7:11:44 PM by eldritchseer

thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#302660: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:13:56 PM

when will pyro return

i need to tell him about persona 3

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GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#302661: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:14:28 PM

After winter, probably, when he's finished graduating. Hopefully.

MY SOUL IS DARK BUT MY HAIR IS COLORFUL — Brahian Pokémon Alchemist
eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#302662: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:14:42 PM

duff was in the world building chat

before i got back

he left now

thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#302663: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:15:22 PM

aaa i can't wait that loooong

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SR3NORMANDY Problem Child from N/A - In constant flux Since: Jul, 2012
Prometheus136 What's eatin' you, chief? from Yoknapatawpha County Since: Sep, 2011 Relationship Status: It's so nice to be turned on again
What's eatin' you, chief?
#302665: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:19:41 PM

winter is coming

War is God.
eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
Rivux same old me from [a jump to the sky turns to a rider kick] Since: Aug, 2010
same old me
#302667: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:35:27 PM

winter is coming

mario is red, i am green, i try my best, but everyone's mean
Azure Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist from The World Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: We finish each other's sandwiches
Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist
#302668: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:43:29 PM

The whirring of the Dantalion's engines rang softly in Fen's ear as she looked out of the bridge's veiw port. Fluffy whites and deep blues rushed by. The sky didn't care where you're from or who you are, everyone was on equal level, the only real advantage was what came from your own skills. The thought was slightly comforting.

"Hey sis pay attention!" the shrill voice of a younger girl snapped Fen out of her reverie. It was the only other crew member of the Dantalion, her sister Anna. "Remoras on our six! Three of them!" screamed Anna. The Air Cutter Remora was the Empire's main fighter aircraft. They likely spotted the Dantalion on their way home. "Dammit! I got them!" Fen called out to her sister as she rushed to the turrets controls.

As she turned to get the Remora's in sight they opened fire, shells from their turrets rocking the Danatlion's hull and threatening to tear the ship apart."Keep it steady Anna!"Instead of words Fen simply got a grunt in response, Anna was focusing on her job and now it was Fen's turn. Taking a breath she lined up her shot and fired hitting the Remora's propulsion system, sending it plummeting, and then another. "Haha! Suck it dogs!" she celebrated her victory a bit too early as the third was charging its Remora strike. A powerful beam attack that would take them out for sure if it hit.

Fen's eyes went wide as she scrambled to line up her third shot, while calling out to her sister "Anna watch out!"

"I see it." Anna declared as Fen took the shot hitting the Remora square in the cockpit. But the beam was already barreling for the ship, though its trajectory was now off slightly. It was this that allowed Anna to move the Dantalion just slightly to the left, as a transparent white beam streaked off past the bridge and into the distance

"Phew..."

"Phew..."

Both girls sighed in unison as it became clear they were safe once again. Fen made a mental note not to get too distracted watching the clouds next time.

Gonna post this as my writing sample. What you guys think?

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GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#302669: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:47:06 PM

Looks okay to me.

MY SOUL IS DARK BUT MY HAIR IS COLORFUL — Brahian Pokémon Alchemist
thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#302670: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:47:41 PM

works for me

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Rivux same old me from [a jump to the sky turns to a rider kick] Since: Aug, 2010
same old me
#302671: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:50:36 PM

lookin' alroight

mario is red, i am green, i try my best, but everyone's mean
Azure Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist from The World Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: We finish each other's sandwiches
Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist
#302672: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:54:25 PM

Aaand posted.

I will be taking my leave now. Night folks.

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Boxen whatever he can Since: Jan, 2013
whatever he can
#302673: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:54:38 PM

bye

dead devotion
megarockman from The Sixth Borough (Experienced Trainee)
#302674: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:55:26 PM

Night Jam.

...I just came up with another possible outcome for the impending Homura-Homucifer fight. Because now I'm not so sure I want to send Homura away yet.

edited 13th Aug '14 7:55:48 PM by megarockman

The damned queen and the relentless knight.
thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#302675: Aug 13th 2014 at 7:56:59 PM

fare well

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