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trip Since: Mar, 2012
#279451: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:13:08 PM

i dont pay attention

@badge: but i can't write fight scenes anymore

i lost the ability due to arena withdrawal

MobileLeprechaun (: from Grayrock, TX Since: Aug, 2009 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
(:
#279452: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:13:15 PM

Aw yiss, the Large Red Fruit.

It ain't mediocracy, Trip, it's fatigue. You'll be back on it tomorrow.

make it through this year if it kills you yet | 2001-2019
LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#279453: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:13:50 PM

I'm sure you'll do fine Trip.

Anyways, what exactly about my plot is it that you guys enjoy? And what shortcomings are there? I'd like to know.

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
Imca (Veteran)
#279454: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:14:14 PM

The only problem is, I was not joking about American food earlier...

It is greasy, and salty, and full of oil, and.....

It tastes like giving oral sex to Poseidon.

[up] Need a few minutes.

edited 25th Jun '14 10:14:36 PM by Imca

trip Since: Mar, 2012
#279455: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:15:19 PM

i like the dual perspectives

and also the tone

and sol

though one gripe is a minor one

jam, it looks like fen's personality completely changed

@imca: and poseidon head is a bad thing

nonsense

edited 25th Jun '14 10:16:00 PM by trip

thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#279456: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:16:06 PM

i would actually say jam's doing a good job with fen

since fen doesn't remember anything except being experimented on by less-than-ethical scientists

UN JOUR JE SERAI DE RETOUR PRÈS DE TOI
gameboy3 The Faker from Michigan Since: Dec, 2011
The Faker
#279457: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:16:30 PM

(@Imca) It's probably because my mom generally prepares Mexican food or other foods not considered "American" (outside of steak), but I never seem to notice that outside of fast food.

And it's so easy when you're evil... This is the life for me, the Devil tips his hat to me...
LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#279458: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:16:59 PM

I would say that's more of some of Fen's more    EVIL    qualities being drawn out more often due to circumstance.

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
josh6243 Betty "Blast Hornet" Blanctorche Doppler from Digital Realm Since: Apr, 2009 Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
Betty "Blast Hornet" Blanctorche Doppler
#279459: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:17:04 PM

@Imca: You have a point. I just buy groceries and let Lianetta cook for me. Also, I prefer to eat foreign take-out.

edited 25th Jun '14 10:17:43 PM by josh6243

MobileLeprechaun (: from Grayrock, TX Since: Aug, 2009 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
(:
#279461: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:20:08 PM

What Badge said. She's part demon, after all.

GOOD POINTS:

  • Amazing worldbuilding with minimal series lockout; very accessible to people who don't know anything about GG
  • The characters all feel great so far
  • Pretty much something for everyone to do at any given point
  • Having some of the PCs be evil is a hella rad idea

SHIT WHAT NEEDS IMPROVEMENT:

  • I'll have to think a little about what could use improvement

edited 25th Jun '14 10:20:26 PM by MobileLeprechaun

make it through this year if it kills you yet | 2001-2019
eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#279462: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:21:09 PM

not evil

just turned the wrong way

Imca (Veteran)
#279463: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:21:23 PM

I personally like that you managed to work with every one without neutering there gear or powers.

Or hell even changing the players characters on them.

For some story stuff.

....

I bloody love that it feels like every one has an impact, you are not ignoring any one no mater how new, no one has priority, and if you do miss some one you fix it rather rapidly, I feel like this is very much worth the slower rate of posts compared to other GM's it helps A LOT and makes me feel great.

Related to the above it feels like we actually have an impact so far, that were not just along for the ride but rather stuff is being accomplished and plans are being laid... it is a great feeling of freedom.

All this adds up to probably my favorite plot I have been in in this game, a spot previously held by deluge, and while I liked deluge's tone more the feeling of having an impact is what gives you this spot.

My only complaint I could possibly make is that the plot is only for a couple hours a day at night, but I think the reason is time zones, so I cant hold this against you.

gameboy3 The Faker from Michigan Since: Dec, 2011
The Faker
#279464: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:22:45 PM

...Yeah, this really makes me sad that I can't be in the Room RP.

And it's so easy when you're evil... This is the life for me, the Devil tips his hat to me...
eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#279465: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:23:38 PM

you can always make an opening

-hands gameboy a pistol and winks-

MobileLeprechaun (: from Grayrock, TX Since: Aug, 2009 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
(:
#279466: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:23:51 PM

Evil, misguided, whatevs. They're making Shinji cry, therefore evil.

Ooh lord, I am hooked.

make it through this year if it kills you yet | 2001-2019
gameboy3 The Faker from Michigan Since: Dec, 2011
The Faker
#279467: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:24:44 PM

I'd rather wait.

Just curious though, how many players do you all allow in the first place for the Room RP?

And it's so easy when you're evil... This is the life for me, the Devil tips his hat to me...
Bcom Since: Jun, 2014
#279468: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:25:57 PM

gameboy, our sentiments are the same. I am kind of sad I joined this site too late to get in on the RP

eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#279469: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:26:25 PM

we're at the maximum now

inculding people who haven't played in a long while

MobileLeprechaun (: from Grayrock, TX Since: Aug, 2009 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
(:
#279470: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:26:36 PM

...Ooh, dang, do we have a set number? I forget.

make it through this year if it kills you yet | 2001-2019
LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#279471: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:28:02 PM

I've saved this page for critiquing reasons. Thanks guys, glad I was able to deliver so far.

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#279472: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:29:20 PM

Doublepost, but just to close out, have a listen to the song I named the plot after.

Because this song represents what's about to happen next time.

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
gameboy3 The Faker from Michigan Since: Dec, 2011
The Faker
#279473: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:30:05 PM

(@Eldritch) I'm more curious of getting a specific number, sorry. I'm just curious as to what that is.

And it's so easy when you're evil... This is the life for me, the Devil tips his hat to me...
thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#279474: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:30:17 PM

get hype

UN JOUR JE SERAI DE RETOUR PRÈS DE TOI
Azure Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist from The World Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: We finish each other's sandwiches
Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist
#279475: Jun 25th 2014 at 10:30:38 PM

Fen's characrter hasn't actually changed at all. She is always like this, its just it only shows on rare moments like right after they escaped the SCP facility or when she was fighting Guts.

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