josh6243
Betty "Blast Hornet" Blanctorche Doppler
from Digital Realm
Since: Apr, 2009
Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
#279428: Jun 25th 2014 at 9:53:46 PM
casual reminder that Aven is hilarious
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edited 25th Jun '14 9:59:05 PM by Rivux
mario is red, i am green, i try my best, but everyone's mean
LatverianBadger
Calamity is a housewife
from gacha hell
Since: Jan, 2012
Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
#279429: Jun 25th 2014 at 9:54:02 PM
Actually, here's where I heard about something similar.
oh hey art nice
edited 25th Jun '14 9:54:29 PM by LatverianBadger
"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
trip
Since: Mar, 2012
LatverianBadger
Calamity is a housewife
from gacha hell
Since: Jan, 2012
Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
trip
Since: Mar, 2012
MobileLeprechaun
(:
from Grayrock, TX
Since: Aug, 2009
Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
MobileLeprechaun
(:
from Grayrock, TX
Since: Aug, 2009
Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
trip
Since: Mar, 2012
MobileLeprechaun
(:
from Grayrock, TX
Since: Aug, 2009
Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Imca
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LatverianBadger
Calamity is a housewife
from gacha hell
Since: Jan, 2012
Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
MobileLeprechaun
(:
from Grayrock, TX
Since: Aug, 2009
Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
Imca
(Veteran)
trip
Since: Mar, 2012
LatverianBadger
Calamity is a housewife
from gacha hell
Since: Jan, 2012
Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Imca
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@Josh: It's good to start, but remember to show and not tell. It's easy enough to just have the narrative say something, after all.
MY SOUL IS DARK BUT MY HAIR IS COLORFUL — Brahian Pokémon Alchemist