Chris, I'm not sure what your criticism is for the relationship beyond "written badly".
What if there’s no better word than just not saying anything?uh
hate to butt in on character critique fast hour
but i got kinda distacted by post graduatory familial gatherings and, uh, see that plot started without me
Where would be a good place to inject a Karkat and a Herr Forehead? I imagine the "one very loud subject" is Karkat, in case I missed something while reading through, and should just put him there, but where would Apollo go?
mario is red, i am green, i try my best, but everyone's meanSpace, I didn't bring it up. I said that just because it was meant to be somewhat bad doesn't mean it suddenly can't be bad.
Badge, I honestly could not believe a lot of the "romantic" conversations between the two. Even with Aven's "wanna makeout" comment, it still feels like it came out of nowhere and was more of just a response to the "LOL AVEN X RENNOR" jokes.
That's why I think it was written badly, end of story. Can we end it here please?
edited 18th Jun '14 9:45:05 PM by ChrissieMcNapkins
I live in a constant state of fear and misery.*Cheque
edited 18th Jun '14 9:59:30 PM by SR3NORMANDY
What if there’s no better word than just not saying anything?ragna and biker are like
Vitriolic Best Buds, only they actually hate each others guts
speak american
edited 18th Jun '14 9:59:45 PM by thespacephantom
UN JOUR JE SERAI DE RETOUR PRÈS DE TOIWait, you mean you actually call it a check?
Dumb.
What if there’s no better word than just not saying anything?

wow strig was all kinds of nasty