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Trip Since: Mar, 2012
#276626: Jun 18th 2014 at 9:32:11 PM

wow strig was all kinds of nasty

SR3NORMANDY Problem Child from N/A - In constant flux Since: Jul, 2012
Problem Child
#276627: Jun 18th 2014 at 9:33:26 PM

Chris, I'm not sure what your criticism is for the relationship beyond "written badly".

What if there’s no better word than just not saying anything?
ChrissieMcNapkins bruhonetta from the traphouse Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: Hoping Senpai notices me
bruhonetta
#276628: Jun 18th 2014 at 9:34:45 PM

That's kinda about it, I feel it was written badly.

End of story.

but it's over now so lets not worry about it

I live in a constant state of fear and misery.
thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#276629: Jun 18th 2014 at 9:35:22 PM

why even bring it up then

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LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#276630: Jun 18th 2014 at 9:36:01 PM

Is it possible to specify the criticisms you have? Like, how is it written badly?

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
Rivux same old me from [a jump to the sky turns to a rider kick] Since: Aug, 2010
same old me
#276631: Jun 18th 2014 at 9:39:54 PM

uh

hate to butt in on character critique fast hour

but i got kinda distacted by post graduatory familial gatherings and, uh, see that plot started without me

Where would be a good place to inject a Karkat and a Herr Forehead? I imagine the "one very loud subject" is Karkat, in case I missed something while reading through, and should just put him there, but where would Apollo go?

mario is red, i am green, i try my best, but everyone's mean
eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
ChrissieMcNapkins bruhonetta from the traphouse Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: Hoping Senpai notices me
bruhonetta
#276634: Jun 18th 2014 at 9:44:15 PM

Space, I didn't bring it up. I said that just because it was meant to be somewhat bad doesn't mean it suddenly can't be bad.

Badge, I honestly could not believe a lot of the "romantic" conversations between the two. Even with Aven's "wanna makeout" comment, it still feels like it came out of nowhere and was more of just a response to the "LOL AVEN X RENNOR" jokes.

That's why I think it was written badly, end of story. Can we end it here please?

edited 18th Jun '14 9:45:05 PM by ChrissieMcNapkins

I live in a constant state of fear and misery.
LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#276635: Jun 18th 2014 at 9:44:47 PM

Karkat's good to be inserted into the lab. He can be Loud Subject #2 next to Fen.

As for Apollo, I forgot to account for him. Perhaps he stowed away on the TARDIS somehow?

[up] Ah, I see.

edited 18th Jun '14 9:45:20 PM by LatverianBadger

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
Trip Since: Mar, 2012
#276636: Jun 18th 2014 at 9:57:01 PM

that was oddly spiteful of check-sender

thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#276637: Jun 18th 2014 at 9:57:46 PM

you probably shouldn't have said anything if you didn't want to discuss it

@trip: do you want to know who sent the check

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eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#276638: Jun 18th 2014 at 9:58:58 PM

trip one of my favorite things you'v e done was fen's boss

and how four people strved to feath already.

also i really like ragna

SR3NORMANDY Problem Child from N/A - In constant flux Since: Jul, 2012
thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#276640: Jun 18th 2014 at 9:59:36 PM

ragna and biker are like

Vitriolic Best Buds, only they actually hate each others guts

[up]speak american

edited 18th Jun '14 9:59:45 PM by thespacephantom

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LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#276641: Jun 18th 2014 at 10:00:16 PM

Also, how am I doing for my kinda first but technically not first time GM'ing?

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
Trip Since: Mar, 2012
#276642: Jun 18th 2014 at 10:00:34 PM

yayyyy

those four people had a roaring appetite

also was it gethgrinch who sent the check

edited 18th Jun '14 10:00:51 PM by Trip

thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#276643: Jun 18th 2014 at 10:00:44 PM

i'm liking the scientists

they have personality

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SR3NORMANDY Problem Child from N/A - In constant flux Since: Jul, 2012
thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#276645: Jun 18th 2014 at 10:01:02 PM

bobba your face

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Imca (Veteran)
#276646: Jun 18th 2014 at 10:01:39 PM

I think your doing well Badger. :)

edited 18th Jun '14 10:01:48 PM by Imca

LatverianBadger Calamity is a housewife from gacha hell Since: Jan, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Calamity is a housewife
#276647: Jun 18th 2014 at 10:01:58 PM

That was my intention yes. It'd be boring to do a by-the-book, no-nonsense scientist guy.

"Shake the dust." - Anis Mojgani
eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#276648: Jun 18th 2014 at 10:02:30 PM

i'm liking this

Trip Since: Mar, 2012
thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#276650: Jun 18th 2014 at 10:02:53 PM

n

it was

the pirate

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