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#273022: Jun 9th 2014 at 8:21:29 PM
The thing about the Homucifer stuff is that it, as well as Sayaka's and Homura's conversations, have gotten a bit isolated — they're all wrapped up in their own thing, which is a bit of a problem considering all three characters are being played by the same person. It might be prudent to branch out a little. What you're writing isn't bad, per se, but it's essentially become fanfiction, given how closed off and controlled it is.
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