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Trip Since: Mar, 2012
#326151: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:19:12 PM

and also i would like t osee one of those buildup posts

i'm not trying to put you on the "oh prove it dweeb" seat, i just want to see said post/s

Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#326152: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:21:07 PM

I'm guess the post was just poorly worded and a bit to vague.

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#326153: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:21:33 PM

I realize I ninja'd you, and I don't want to clog shit up while you post, but:

-and then she showed him the best thing ever-

How else are we supposed to interpret this line? What were they doing, if not heavy petting?

edited 7th Oct '14 8:21:47 PM by MobileLeprechaun

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Trip Since: Mar, 2012
#326154: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:21:58 PM

i personally assumed it was "tits" but

Azure Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist from The World Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: We finish each other's sandwiches
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#326155: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:33:44 PM

Okay.

@Mobile:I didn't even write anything more explict than them making out, and then implying that they took it further.

@Ram and Space:You're wrong that there was no build up. But I guess I'll have to point this out.

From very early when I was writing Fen I've established that she gets jealous easily.

Okay, two things came out of that. Her meeting Claire and not having a very high opinion of her at first. Then while she's emotionless, she helps out Claire and they become friends sort of.

She gets her emotions back, and starts talking to Del the for the first time, and thinks he's a pretty great guy. At this point she's still sort of mad at Sai, and is comparing him to Del.

I also repeatedly showed that she perfered Del's company over Luis'. And Luis has been Fen's bitch for a while. But Del's in love with Claire so there's no way.

Von comes along, and actually subtlely hits on her a few times. She notices but let's it happen, because she kinda wants to give him a chance.

So then Fen finds out he's Del from a timeline where he never met Claire. So she's like, "Oh I can have my own Del now awesome."

But what really struck home in Fen's mind that she wanted to do this, was Luis getting a girlfriend. The guy she could have at any moment, she can't now. And he's cuddling with his girl right in front of her. So Fen's like screw it, I got other options. And guess who shows up. Von.

@Moblie Again:That was a fade to black in a joking way.

If I were to write petting, I'd write about how they started to fondle each other and all of that.

edited 7th Oct '14 8:34:25 PM by Azure

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thestonedog78 Princess Warlock from from deep space Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
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#326156: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:35:41 PM

Ha! That what i thought! Sorry but that last bit i guessed >.>

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Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#326157: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:37:33 PM

Holy crap I didn't. :o

edited 7th Oct '14 8:41:01 PM by Lilqueendaisy

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ramuf Electric Heart from the Shining Throne Since: Jan, 2013
Electric Heart
#326158: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:39:19 PM

I don't think that's a good enough justification for it, myself. I also think you were a little condescending, but that's neither here nor there.

Could you refrain from doing this again? It's made a bunch of us uncomfortable, and I think we're not being unreasonable.

Trip Since: Mar, 2012
#326159: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:39:19 PM

@luis bitch: that's a concern with daisy i've been meaning to bring up, but that's gonna be solved in pms isn't that right daisy

anyway

okay, now i see your point. perhaps i overreacted.

eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#326160: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:39:28 PM

You just.

You didn't even have to start writing the thing.

You could have just implied it.

This could have all been avoided if you had just refrained from showing it off in people's faces.

You could have conveyed what you wanted to convey without showing it.

thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#326161: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:39:42 PM

it

still

makes me uncomfortable

[up]this

edited 7th Oct '14 8:39:54 PM by thespacephantom

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MobileLeprechaun (: from Grayrock, TX Since: Aug, 2009 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
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#326162: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:41:24 PM

The thing is, enough people took your implication a certain way to where it sort of did go beyond that. I know things can be left up to interpretation, but she was explicitly staring at his dick for three posts before. Almost everyone managed to draw the same conclusion from that series of posts, and like it or not, it skeeved them out.

Your explanation makes slightly more sense, but I'm sorry, it still feels very gratuitous. Yeah, Von is an alternate version of Del, but they're still basically strangers, suddenly going and making out after the aforementioned dick-staring. If people don't follow the lightly-hinted train of thought you laid out, it's gonna t-bone them pretty good.

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Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#326163: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:41:35 PM

Luis is and always will be the bottom bitch Trip.

But yes it will I think.

edited 7th Oct '14 8:42:05 PM by Lilqueendaisy

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GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#326164: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:42:02 PM

That's fair enough, but again, at some points it did get to be a bit much, and we'd just appreciate it if you didn't go into quite that much detail, as it makes many of us uncomfortable.

Mobile is a psychic ninja. That.

edited 7th Oct '14 8:42:10 PM by GameSpazzer

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Trip Since: Mar, 2012
#326165: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:42:11 PM

@mobi: don't wanna be That Guy, but i feel "dick staring" isn't the best way to put this

[up][up] but he's basically become a fen sattelite

edited 7th Oct '14 8:42:33 PM by Trip

thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#326166: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:42:28 PM

@trip: no it was explicit

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#326167: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:43:38 PM

Sorry, wasn't trying to be mean, I'm just very used to saying "dick". If "penis" or "crotch" works better, I'll edit that in instead.

edited 7th Oct '14 8:45:16 PM by MobileLeprechaun

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Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#326168: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:45:07 PM

I have him interact with other characters Trip.

I just find it easy and fun to have him interact with Fen. And there are IC reasons he would hang around her.

edited 7th Oct '14 8:45:30 PM by Lilqueendaisy

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Trip Since: Mar, 2012
#326169: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:45:45 PM

ehhh

it's not the "dick" part i'm uncomfortable with, it just sounds like we're downright accusing people at this point

which i'll be brutally honest

is another thing on the list of things we keep saying we'll fix but don't even make an effort

GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#326170: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:46:51 PM

Male genetalia.

Dingly dangly.

Schlong.

Spam porpoise.

[up]That, and also the "but YOU did" stuff. It doesn't help.

Also the sidetracking things into personal vendettas. Which is related to the BUT YOU DID stuff, I guess.

edited 7th Oct '14 8:47:31 PM by GameSpazzer

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eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#326171: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:47:02 PM

let's not change the topic please

MobileLeprechaun (: from Grayrock, TX Since: Aug, 2009 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
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#326172: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:47:11 PM

I wasn't trying to be accusatory, either, she was for real looking at his crotch. Sorry for wording that badly, though, and I can see why you would come to that conclusion. I have been at school all day and have tired head.

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ramuf Electric Heart from the Shining Throne Since: Jan, 2013
Electric Heart
#326173: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:47:25 PM

Sometimes you have to be blunt.

Sugarcoating things isn't particularly helpful.

Wow I got ninja'd and now it's kinda irrelevant.

edited 7th Oct '14 8:47:56 PM by ramuf

Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#326174: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:47:40 PM

Sausage, hot dog, woody.

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GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#326175: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:47:47 PM

fugging ninjas

see above

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