I realize I ninja'd you, and I don't want to clog shit up while you post, but:
How else are we supposed to interpret this line? What were they doing, if not heavy petting?
edited 7th Oct '14 8:21:47 PM by MobileLeprechaun
make it through this year if it kills you yet | 2001-2019Okay.
@Mobile:I didn't even write anything more explict than them making out, and then implying that they took it further.
@Ram and Space:You're wrong that there was no build up. But I guess I'll have to point this out.
From very early when I was writing Fen I've established that she gets jealous easily.
Okay, two things came out of that. Her meeting Claire and not having a very high opinion of her at first. Then while she's emotionless, she helps out Claire and they become friends sort of.
She gets her emotions back, and starts talking to Del the for the first time, and thinks he's a pretty great guy. At this point she's still sort of mad at Sai, and is comparing him to Del.
I also repeatedly showed that she perfered Del's company over Luis'. And Luis has been Fen's bitch for a while. But Del's in love with Claire so there's no way.
Von comes along, and actually subtlely hits on her a few times. She notices but let's it happen, because she kinda wants to give him a chance.
So then Fen finds out he's Del from a timeline where he never met Claire. So she's like, "Oh I can have my own Del now awesome."
But what really struck home in Fen's mind that she wanted to do this, was Luis getting a girlfriend. The guy she could have at any moment, she can't now. And he's cuddling with his girl right in front of her. So Fen's like screw it, I got other options. And guess who shows up. Von.
@Moblie Again:That was a fade to black in a joking way.
If I were to write petting, I'd write about how they started to fondle each other and all of that.
edited 7th Oct '14 8:34:25 PM by Azure
PM box is Closed, Indefinitely Friend Code: 3368-4181-6850The thing is, enough people took your implication a certain way to where it sort of did go beyond that. I know things can be left up to interpretation, but she was explicitly staring at his dick for three posts before. Almost everyone managed to draw the same conclusion from that series of posts, and like it or not, it skeeved them out.
Your explanation makes slightly more sense, but I'm sorry, it still feels very gratuitous. Yeah, Von is an alternate version of Del, but they're still basically strangers, suddenly going and making out after the aforementioned dick-staring. If people don't follow the lightly-hinted train of thought you laid out, it's gonna t-bone them pretty good.
make it through this year if it kills you yet | 2001-2019That's fair enough, but again, at some points it did get to be a bit much, and we'd just appreciate it if you didn't go into quite that much detail, as it makes many of us uncomfortable.
Mobile is a psychic ninja. That.
edited 7th Oct '14 8:42:10 PM by GameSpazzer
MY SOUL IS DARK BUT MY HAIR IS COLORFUL — Brahian Pokémon AlchemistMale genetalia.
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That, and also the "but YOU did" stuff. It doesn't help.
Also the sidetracking things into personal vendettas. Which is related to the BUT YOU DID stuff, I guess.
edited 7th Oct '14 8:47:31 PM by GameSpazzer
MY SOUL IS DARK BUT MY HAIR IS COLORFUL — Brahian Pokémon Alchemist

and also i would like t osee one of those buildup posts
i'm not trying to put you on the "oh prove it dweeb" seat, i just want to see said post/s