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GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#326126: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:39:35 PM

HEY WHOA okay yeah just looked at the FG.

No offense but can we please tap the breaks on this?

And then park the car and not do it again maybe?

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Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#326127: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:40:38 PM

Rem, just do what I do when the post is not clear and imagine it as something else.

Maybe the best thing was some yoyo or some shiz.

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Trip Since: Mar, 2012
#326128: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:41:00 PM

it was perfectly clear, is the thing

GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#326129: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:41:05 PM

Daisy, I'm sorry, but if that's meant to be sarcastic now is not the time.

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Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#326130: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:41:46 PM

I'm not being sarcastic. That's what I'm literally doing.

Hoping Fen is not screwing Von and not doing creepy stuff.

edited 7th Oct '14 7:42:31 PM by Lilqueendaisy

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ramuf Electric Heart from the Shining Throne Since: Jan, 2013
Electric Heart
#326131: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:42:35 PM

I know there is some business going on, but I don't know what exactly it was.

The wording is vague, at least to me.

But whatever it means, it can't be good.

thestonedog78 Princess Warlock from from deep space Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Princess Warlock
#326132: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:45:37 PM

My I ask how old both of them are? and why? cause i kinda lol we can.. though i guess i have a small bridge to stand on here.

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Azure Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist from The World Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: We finish each other's sandwiches
Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist
#326133: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:50:51 PM

They're two grown people, who were attracted to each other and decided to have a good time together.

I did hint that they were attracted to one another.

I don't find consensual sex, between two people of legal age to be creepy. And its not. Its how you guys were born I hope. And its not like I do this every other page.

You know what's really creepy to me.

Obviously mentally unstable characters trying to be in a relationship.

Teenaged girls, attempting to seduce grown men.

And people forcing their sexuality on another person.

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GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#326134: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:51:50 PM

I find heavy petting seemingly out of nowhere creepy, not because of the content itself, but because it carries the unfortunate implication that one could be writing it for purposes other than just writing.

We do not type any of those other things to get ourselves off.

edited 7th Oct '14 7:52:10 PM by GameSpazzer

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eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#326135: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:52:28 PM

it's still inappropriate to go waving it around in people's faces

and doing here, in a public forum, with underage people present is not acceptable

ramuf Electric Heart from the Shining Throne Since: Jan, 2013
Electric Heart
#326136: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:54:08 PM

I don't think you're getting the point.

There was very little buildup to this. Very little whatsoever. It came out of nowhere and had little to no purpose.

I know consensual sex isn't against the rules, but really, this seems like you were flaunting them having sex.

I think what Spaz said is generally what I'm thinking, but more well said.

Trip Since: Mar, 2012
#326137: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:54:48 PM

i know what you were referring to the teenaged girls thing and well you see

stacy is meant to be written as creepy, and completely desperate for a boyfriend. plus she is a demon, and although they aren't as bad as some things paint them, they are still fucked in the brain

and to be honest, i didn't see much hints about them liking each other

in fact fen should have a good reason to hate him (vampirizing silver)

thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#326138: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:57:20 PM

von is

creepy as fuck

why would fen even go for him

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Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#326139: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:58:36 PM

May I say something too?

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ramuf Electric Heart from the Shining Throne Since: Jan, 2013
Electric Heart
#326140: Oct 7th 2014 at 7:58:47 PM

Go ahead, Daisy.

Lilqueendaisy A chill feller from Not Earth Since: Jun, 2011 Relationship Status: In love with love
A chill feller
#326141: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:06:01 PM

Okay! It's less about the sex stuff and more about Von.

I talked with Mobile once about whether Von was intended to be a good guy or a douchebag. At first I thought he was supposed to be a jerk because he said that when he bit silver it was an "Accident"( I don't see how Silver can be turned into a vampire by accident.) and how he attacked people up for stuff like talking to him in certain ways. What got me confused was the many of the such as the suddenly brought up vampire war and him forcing Del to explain how he kickstarted the whole Silver incident made me think that they were more like attempts to make Von sympathetic.

I can't tell whether I should hope he gets punched many times in the face or feel bad for him. But I have been leaning towards the first one.

edited 7th Oct '14 8:08:32 PM by Lilqueendaisy

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GameSpazzer The Beta Male from Against! The! Wall! Since: Jun, 2010
The Beta Male
#326142: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:07:51 PM

imma let you finish but

In all seriousness, though, while you're welcome to bring this up once we've resolved this, I really do want to focus on one issue at a time.

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MobileLeprechaun (: from Grayrock, TX Since: Aug, 2009 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
(:
#326143: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:12:13 PM

Oy vey. I'm about to have to go to bed, but I might as well unlurk to provide my take.

This thing could probably slide if all you had them do was frenching or something, but that's outright sexual stimulation there. Yes, they're consenting adults, and nobody has a problem with that bit of it, but y'all are writing a softcore sex act, dude, and I think we've made it pretty clear that this isn't okay.

I also second the concerns about it being out of left field. I know I've been kinda sporadic, but I've never seen Fen and Von talk before this point. Have they? If so, can I see it? If y'all want to have them be an item, that's totally cool, because they're your characters and all that, but this was an awfully short trip to second base.

If there's some event I missed and there actually has been buildup, then it would make a lot more sense to me, but if they're just doing this because you two thought it would be hot? I think that technically violates our fanservice rule.

edited 7th Oct '14 8:12:51 PM by MobileLeprechaun

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Azure Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist from The World Since: Nov, 2012 Relationship Status: We finish each other's sandwiches
Mahou Shoujo Lyrical Fist
#326144: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:12:55 PM

@Spaz:We didn't even go as far as petting.

And you're now assuming that I am?

No I'm not.

I'm trying to show that Fen's not a little kid. She's a grown woman who's comfortable in her own sexuality.

I also did plan to have more stuff come of this, other than Fen and Von are fucking now.

@Seer:The most I wrote was Fen sitting on Von's lap.

@Ram:There was build up, you just didn't notice, because Fen wasn't doing the usual "Omg Von's here! -BLUSH-" It wasn't overt.

@Trip:Its still you know. Really fucking creepy, whether its supposed to be like that or not. But I don't complain about it, because I know you're not behind the screen wanking to it.

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thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#326145: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:13:40 PM

there wasn't any buildup

unless you count fen making eyes at him just before it started to be buildup

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ramuf Electric Heart from the Shining Throne Since: Jan, 2013
Electric Heart
#326146: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:14:48 PM

I just didn't notice?

Uh.

That's a little harsh, dude. I know I don't have perfect perception, but that's a little far.

MobileLeprechaun (: from Grayrock, TX Since: Aug, 2009 Relationship Status: Yes, I'm alone, but I'm alone and free
(:
#326147: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:15:13 PM

Oop, I ninja'd you.

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eldritchseer all the loose ends from Cocytus Since: Mar, 2019
all the loose ends
#326148: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:15:35 PM

I am genuinely uncomfortable with this and wish that you would stop.

I can handle things that are meant to be disturbing, but this is unpleasant in a different way.

thespacephantom Jamais vu from the smallest church in Saint-Saëns Since: Oct, 2009
Jamais vu
#326149: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:15:56 PM

[up]this

this this this this this this this

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thestonedog78 Princess Warlock from from deep space Since: Oct, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm just a poor boy, nobody loves me
Princess Warlock
#326150: Oct 7th 2014 at 8:16:44 PM

[up][up] that

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