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4tell0life4 Since: Mar, 2018 Relationship Status: Giving love a bad name
#2201: Dec 28th 2018 at 3:19:36 PM

[up] No, Animated Armor can be manually remote controlled; I thought the description says so.

Rather, Remote Body is supposed to act as "extension" to the main body. It may involve an armor, but a lot of the time it can be a clone, a doll, etc.

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Malady (Not-So-Newbie)
#2202: Dec 28th 2018 at 3:27:55 PM

[up] - So you're saying that unless Remote-controlled Animated Armor is used for more than combat, it isn't Remote Body?

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lakingsif Since: Dec, 2012 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
#2203: Dec 29th 2018 at 9:39:23 AM

Or even just that Remote Body is an actual body, and armor is not. The most common usages seem to be, respectively, as a form of body projection and as a separate tool. They're also both open to so many exclusive possibilities they're not compatible.

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Malady (Not-So-Newbie)
#2204: Jan 1st 2019 at 6:39:02 AM

So, Palette Swap should talk about its relationship to Underground Monkey, and crosswick, right?

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lakingsif Since: Dec, 2012 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
#2205: Jan 1st 2019 at 11:36:49 AM

[up] yes, but can you draft the sentences here for discussion first

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Malady (Not-So-Newbie)
#2206: Jan 1st 2019 at 2:30:05 PM

^ - "Palette swaps are sometimes used to make Underground Monkeys, different colors to show different elemental affinities with Color-Coded Elements, or just a different variant."

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lakingsif Since: Dec, 2012 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
#2207: Jan 1st 2019 at 3:36:47 PM

[up]if you change "are sometimes used" to "can be used", that should be better. Otherwise it suggests that one integral use of the palette swap is for underground monkeys and that underground monkeys requires a palette swap, rather than it just being a technique that can achieve it.

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Malady (Not-So-Newbie)
#2208: Jan 1st 2019 at 4:40:28 PM

Other than that, it's good?

Just 'cause it's related, here's Underground Monkey's paragraph with the wick:

Underground Monkeys are often Palette Swaps, meaning only the colors change but models are recycled, but they don't have to be. As long as they're recycled versions of previous enemies, the changes between the different versions could be anything. You might have normal Goombas, winged Goombas, big Goombas... Even King Goomba is a type of Underground Monkey.

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lakingsif Since: Dec, 2012 Relationship Status: Wanna dance with somebody
#2209: Jan 1st 2019 at 7:26:34 PM

yeah, they're good

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QuantumMelody29 chaos catby with a flannel shirt addiction from somewhere Since: Feb, 2018 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
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#2210: Jan 18th 2019 at 4:48:39 AM

Accidental Kidnapping only has two lines of description. The meaning seems pretty clear with the title but the description needs expanding upon.

Catchphrase Spouting Duo is another trope with only two lines of description. This one, however, I have no idea what it means. Help would be appreciated.

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4tell0life4 Since: Mar, 2018 Relationship Status: Giving love a bad name
#2211: Jan 20th 2019 at 1:41:54 AM

Decisive Battle doesn't seem to have anything to do with Space Battle, yet the latter is overtly mentioned in that page.

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Malady (Not-So-Newbie)
#2212: Jan 23rd 2019 at 8:52:14 PM

Real-Time Weapon Change sounds like it would fit VideoGame.Baldurs Gate's "isn't paused in the item screen", from Inventory Management Puzzle...

Or is Real-Time Weapon Change, for changing weapons, only?


In any case, I want to change the beginning, so it doesn't sound so positive?

It's currently starting as:

"The ability to change your weapons in a video game without pausing or using a Power-Up to change them."

To:

"Changing your weapons in a video game without pausing or using a Power-Up to change them."

Because calling it an ability, makes it sounds positive, where it isn't always, if that's the only way to change weapons...

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4tell0life4 Since: Mar, 2018 Relationship Status: Giving love a bad name
#2213: Jan 24th 2019 at 4:08:13 PM

[up] Make that "where you can change your weapons in a video game without pausing or using a Power-Up to change them."

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NothingUnusualHere from Canadia Since: Apr, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm in love with my car
#2214: Jan 29th 2019 at 3:43:30 PM

[up][up][up] I wrote a longer description for Accidental Kidnapping:

When a character accidentally kidnaps someone else. This can have any number of causes behind it, ranging from honest mistakes and Contrived Coincidences to Alcohol-Induced Idiocy.

The accidental kidnapper need not be perfectly innocent either: they may have confused the kidnapped character with their intended target in a case of Mistaken Identity, they may have been trying to commit a different crime such as stealing a car without realizing someone was inside it, or the kidnapping may be the start of a Crime After Crime cycle where the kidnapper is forced to deal with their accidental victim one way or another.

Depending upon the personalities of the two characters, they might part quickly and relatively unscathed by the ordeal, but the situation can also end up as a nightmare for both of them.

One of the many possible answers to What Did I Do Last Night?, and one way for a character to become the perpetrator of an Unintentionally Notorious Crime. Often caused by Stupid Crooks.

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#2215: Feb 1st 2019 at 7:18:08 AM

I can't really figure out what Museum of the Strange and Unusual is supposed to be.

  • Per the self-demonstratingnote  description: A museum showcasing many weird, often paranormal things, with a distinct lack of cohesive theme otherwise, an off-limits Mad Scientist Laboratory existing on the premises, as well as an implicit hazard in the potentially dangerous nature of the exhibits, which naturally can be foreshadowed with a creepy atmosphere permeating the place.
  • Per the laconic: "Weird, creepy museum."
  • Per the examples: A museum showcasing many weird, often paranormal things. Mishmash Museum, dangerous exhibits and overall creepiness are all optional.
  • Per the Settings page: "An awesomely eclectic museum with a collection of impossibly cool and downright bizarre stuff."

Which one is it so that we can rewrite the description to better reflect it?

Edited by MarqFJA on Feb 1st 2019 at 6:49:07 PM

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4tell0life4 Since: Mar, 2018 Relationship Status: Giving love a bad name
#2216: Feb 2nd 2019 at 7:41:18 PM

[up] Some combination of 3 and 4

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Malady (Not-So-Newbie)
#2217: Feb 3rd 2019 at 9:41:24 AM

Should Just for Fun's description indicate what type of pages they are?

They're not Trivia, or YMMV or anything, right? So they shouldn't be wicked from any examples?

Just page descriptions?

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QuantumMelody29 chaos catby with a flannel shirt addiction from somewhere Since: Feb, 2018 Relationship Status: Who needs love when you have waffles?
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#2218: Feb 4th 2019 at 2:12:52 PM

[up][up][up] Thanks! Do I just shove that on the page?

Edited by QuantumMelody29 on Feb 4th 2019 at 10:13:24 AM

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NothingUnusualHere from Canadia Since: Apr, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm in love with my car
#2219: Feb 4th 2019 at 7:22:21 PM

Yeah, I think as long as no one objects it should be fine.

MarqFJA The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer from Deserts of the Middle East (Before Recorded History) Relationship Status: Anime is my true love
The Cosmopolitan Fictioneer
#2220: Feb 6th 2019 at 10:36:03 AM

[up][up][up][up] OK, so... Who wants to take a stab at writing a preliminary draft description for this, since it basically has to be done from scratch?


A little over a year ago from now, someone removed the following from Taxonomic Term Confusion:

     Common Examples In Media  
  • Most common is using the word "race" where "species" would be more appropriate. Science-fiction series with multiple sapient alien peoples are a big offender here. Technically speaking, the term "race" has no agreed upon scientific definition at all.
    • Fantasy settings do the same thing, but whether it's as bad in such a case is more debatable since there are often No Biochemical Barriers either. (If humans and elves can interbreed, producing fertile offspring, who's to say that they're not different races within a single species?)
      • It should be pointed out that the definition of species is not absolute. In rare cases seemingly very different creatures can interbreed and produce fertile offspring. A good example is the case of a false killer whale and bottle-nosed dolphin (both dolphins but very different in shape and structure) which produced a fertile calf in captivity. Animals in the same genus such as tigers and lions are even more likely to interbreed.
      • In a fantasy setting, it's sometimes stated explicitly that a given "race" was created from scratch by divine agents. In that case, it's not technically related to any other species at all in real-world terms. But since it's also likely to be very similar to them, the whole set-up just can't be understood in the same terms.
    • Usage of the word "race" to mean "species" in Speculative Fiction is probably an archaism, which stayed as a sort of genre convention.
      • Indeed, "race" was used to mean "species" in common and scientific speech until relatively recently. It was extremely common in the nineteenth century. It can be an easy way to create an old-timey mood in a fantasy story.
  • Referring to a group of related species (a genus) as a single species.
    • There are two known species of Velociraptor, four of Stegosaurus, and two of Triceratops.
    • There is only one species of orca now - there are several well-defined types which may need to be promoted to species though.
      • In many cases the number of species is debated by different scientists. It is also often debated about which species go into which genus, since genus itself is even less concretely defined than 'species' (i.e. to some extent species are a biological reality while all higher classifications exist only as a rather subjective human system of classification).
    • Referring to a species by the proper name of its family/order/etc. instead of the anglicized form. A human is not a Hominidae. A human is a hominid, a member of the family Hominidae. Doing this wrong is like referring to an animal as "an Animalia" or a plant as "a Plantae".
  • Messing up the format of genus and species is very common. For the record, the genus (e.g., Tyrannosaurus) is capitalized, the specific name (e.g., rex) is not, and you always underline/italicize it.
  • Use of family when phylum ("the worm family"), class ("the insect family"), order ("the bat family"), genus ("the weasel family") or species ("the chicken family") would be more accurate.
  • Describing a newly discovered and radically unusual life form as "a completely new order of life": Kingdom or phylum or even domain would probably be more accurate. New orders are created all the time, sometimes on the whims of the researchers. (It's not just Tropers who have to deal with Lumper vs. Splitter arguments!)
  • Using the word "phylum" interchangeably with "taxon" because it sounds all science-y and no one knows what "taxon" means. (And no, "giant wormlike alien with an insatiable hunger" is spelled with a Double X.) The reason for this odd usage may be historical: phylum was a synonym of "taxon" until Ernst Haeckel (who abolished polyphyletic groups from scientific classification) decided that a new rank was needed between kingdom and class (this use persisted well after Haeckel's death).
    • Biologists themselves sometimes disagree about "phylum", if only because those who aren't botanists tend to find botany's traditional use of "division" as a Plantae-only substitute to be unwieldy, and hard to justify under the contemporary three-Domain framework. Division is still technically correct for plants.
    • Note the definition above "any group of related organisms". In phylogenetics (the creation of 'family trees' to describe how organisms are related) "taxon" means "the smallest group I'm considering in this analysis." Most often taxon=species, but we can also have (e.g.) taxon=individual or taxon=order. This allows us to discuss phylogenetic algorithms abstractly without tying ourselves to analysis at a particular level.
  • Every instance where lifeforms evolved independent of Earth are referred to as ''mammals'', ''birds'', etc. Bonus points if the author just can't seem to understand that it's not a rule of the universe that lactation and fur go together (or feathers and eggs, etc.).
    • It's even proven here on earth that nature sometimes bends its own rules with the echidna and platypus, both species of mammal that fall into the monotreme order, meaning that they lay eggs.
    • It's debatable if alien lifeforms should even be referred to as "animals", "plants", or "fungus" given that it is literally impossible for them to be more closely related to animals from earth than animals from earth are related to plants or fungi from earth, barring some very (cosmically) recent panspermia.
  • Calling apes "monkeys". Ignoring that the order of primates includes humans.
    • This guy disagrees.
    • Don't do this one near The Librarian: It's his Berserk Button.
    • Far too many apes are too quick to forget that humans are one of the great apes — not merely related. Blame the early 20th century biologists who made damn sure that hominids get far more special treatment than the genetic variation warrants.
    • It depends on your definition of 'monkey'. Monkeys as a group are useless in taxonomy if humans (and other apes) are excluded. "Tailed simians" do not share a single common ancestor that apes don't.
    • In French, the word singe, translated in "monkey" en anglais, mean "more or less all primates that are not humans"... Singe (and probably "monkey") means something more cultural than biological.
    • Lampshaded in the Planet of the Apes remake. When one of the humans called the apes "talking monkeys", one of them pinned him down and reminded him that monkeys were lower on the evolutionary ladder.
    • On an episode of Sale of the Century someone got points for saying that a Baboon was an ape. They're actually Old World monkeys.
      • The use of "ape" as "simian", as in Dutch or German, may be rare in English, but it is not extinct.
    • All in all, one should remember that, in biology, something never stops being what it once was. Apes descend from monkeys (but not from living monkeys), and, therefore, ARE monkeys themselves. Just like humans are apes, monkeys are primates, and primates are mammals. The dichotomy between ape and monkey to the extreme seen here is mostly a case in English speaking circles.
  • Calling dolphins "fish."
    • Any reference to "the fish class" as if there were only one, probably refers to ray-finned fish, you'd hope. There are actually three: cartilaginous fish (sharks and rays), lobe-finned fish (very obscure, mostly coelacanths and lungfish) and ray-finned fish (everything else). Plus lampreys and hagfish, which are jawless chordates less closely related to all of the above than you are, hence probably shouldn't be considered "fish" at all.
      • It's not all that long since actual taxonomists put all fish in a single class, and school biology textbooks probably still do. Being a bit behind the cutting edge of classification is a very minor sin - there are piles and mounds and mountains of more substantial errors to complain about in Hollywood Biology.
    • There is a dolphin fish. There's also a dolphin mammal. For some reason, the dolphin mammal gets accused of being a fish frequently but the dolphin fish is rarely accused of being a mammal. The latter is often referred to by other names to avoid unfortunate misunderstandings; fishing magazines (and Animal Crossing) often refer to the Dolphin (fish) by its Spanish name, Dorado, while most restaurants call it mahi-mahi.
    • An example can be seen in this Comic book PSA
    • Under "strict cladism", dolphins are fish — along with birds and humans. Strict cladism holds that no species ever "loses" any of the categories it is descended from, so, eg, all birds are dinosaurs, because they arose from a group of theropods. Since all mammals are descended from synapsids, synapsids from amphibians, and amphibians from fish, well, there ya go.
    • One also notes that this can be a translation convention, since English lacks a word that other language have meaning "marine vertebrate."
  • A "lizard" and "reptile" are not interchangeable words; the latter includes snakes, crocodilians, turtles, and birds (since they are theropod dinosaurs themselves) as well as lizards.
    • You're going to get very odd looks calling birds "reptiles" around any but the most hardcore phylogeneticists and paleontologists.
    • Dinosaurs are not lizards, though they are both reptiles if one grants that "reptile" is actually a valid classification. Aside from the fact that they include birds, they are more closely related to crocodylians than to any other traditional "reptile" alive today. (Also, pterosaurs and ancient marine reptiles (e.g., plesiosaurs) aren't dinosaurs, although that's getting a bit nit-picky and shouldn't be considered a problem in a work unless a paleontologist character is making the error.)
    • On the other hand, -saurus is the latinized form of the Greek word for lizard, and thus calling it lizard is justified on linguistic, rather than taxonomic, grounds, and that would even go for Basilosaurus, which is, by the way, a primitive whale from the Eocene epoch, in other words a mammal, and not a lizard at all.
    • In fact, even the word "reptile" is replacable with the phylogenetic term "sauropsid", which is more precise than "reptile"; the phylogenetic definition of Sauropsida includes lizards and snakes (Lepidosauromorpha), sauropterygians (plesiosaurs and pilosaurs), archosaurs (crocodylomorphs, dinosaurs and pterosaurs) and testudines (turtles and tortoises), whilst Reptilia includes only snakes, lizards, plesiosaurs, pilosaurs, crocodiles, dinosaurs and pterosaurs. Avialae (birds) is rested in Dinosauria, and thus are sauropsids; however, by the definition of Reptilia, this cannot be. Thus, suggestions of replacing "Reptilia" with "Sauropsida", since cladistics are becoming the new standard over traditional Linnaean taxonomy.
  • While many turtles are amphibious, none of them are amphibians. Conversely, despite having a similar body shape to lizards, newts and other salamanders are not lizards or reptiles at all, but amphibians. Amphibians have softer skin and are basically dependent on a moist environment, whereas lizards' dry, hard skin enables them to avoid the danger of dehydration. More importantly, amphibians spawn jelly-like eggs that are externally fertilized, whereas reptiles internally fertilize their amniotic eggs.
  • Using "evergreen" and "conifer" as synonyms. A few conifers are deciduous trees; for instance, No. 1: the larch. The larch. The LARCH. In warmer climates, many broad-leaved trees are evergreen.
    • The term "conifer" itself is deceptive, as it means "cone-bearing", yet is generally used in a way that excludes the cone-bearing cycads.
  • Using "rodent" to refer to any small mammal. Forgivable when applied to rabbits, which are in order Lagomorpha, closely related to Rodentia (together they form the clade Glires), and have gnawing teeth of their own...less so when applied to say, weasels (Carnivora) or bats (Chiroptera), which are actually more evolutionarily distant from rodents than humans are. It doesn't help that, in many European languages, the word for bat is a compound of the word for mouse.
  • The word "bug" is commonly applied to any arthropod and in some cases to any invertebrate at all, but it's actually a specific term for a single group of insects, just like the word "beetle" or "moth". Bugs are only insects of the order Hemiptera. Having said that, good luck getting people to start calling them "arthropods." It just doesn't roll off the tongue the way "bug" does.
  • A very common "mistake" is calling everything in media that one can ride a horse. This gets especially glaring when people use it on creatures that look nothing like horses, for example Yoshi is often called one. Even further anything that flies is often called a bird and any bird is referred to as a chicken.
  • Referring to hybrid organisms, or products of genetic engineering, as "new" species with their own genus/species designation. Formal rules actually exist for naming hybrids, as "[Father's species name] x [Mother's species name]". (For example, a mule is properly classified as Equus asinus x Equus caballus.) Genetically-modified organisms retain their original taxonomic name, being distinguished from their unmodified relatives by "strain", not genus/species.
    • As well, most hybrids are sterile in at least one gender, like male ligers (Panthera leo x Panthera tigris). Some hybrids, such as the pumapard (Puma concolor x Panthera pardus) are also more likely to have genetic conditions like dwarfism than either parent, as well.
  • Many people mistakenly believe jellyfish are related to octopi, squids, and other cephalopods. In reality, they belong to two separate phyla: jellyfish are cnidarians while cephalopods are mollusks.
  • In older works Science Marches On combined with Language Drift can come into play - e.g. prior to the last third of the 18th century, use of the word fish for "any exclusively aquatic animal" was quite acceptable, and bug once had no more specific definition than "monstrous creature." This could also be applied deliberately for the works set in the past.
  • Referring to hyenas as dogs. Despite having a resemblance to canines, hyenas are actually more closely related to mongooses and felines.

I get Examples Are Not General, but I honestly do not agree with simply removing all those entries wholesale since they're actually correct. Would it be acceptable to transplant them to an Analysis subpage?

Edited by MarqFJA on Feb 6th 2019 at 9:36:29 PM

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4tell0life4 Since: Mar, 2018 Relationship Status: Giving love a bad name
#2221: Feb 6th 2019 at 1:22:35 PM

[up] I don't mind

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Malady (Not-So-Newbie)
#2222: Feb 6th 2019 at 7:05:24 PM

The Magnificent's first paragraph sounds like the trope is defined by Titles from Achievements, when, I think, the trope is basically just "Titles"?

It's a staple of Medieval Fantasy that whenever a hero does something noteworthy, they get a "surname" (more properly termed an epithet or byname) out of it, like say Sir Tropesalot, Dragon Slayer. Occasionally, it even sticks as a surname and informs the history of an entire heroic legacy. Eventually, the mere act of saying their full name constitutes a Badass Boast in and of itself — or Famed In-Story when others recite it. Obviously, prone to Meaningful Name.

Edited by Malady on Feb 6th 2019 at 7:05:38 AM

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NothingUnusualHere from Canadia Since: Apr, 2012 Relationship Status: I'm in love with my car
#2223: Feb 6th 2019 at 9:06:30 PM

[up][up][up][up][up] I added it to the page.

Edited by NothingUnusualHere on Feb 6th 2019 at 12:06:42 PM

XFllo There is no Planet B from Planet A Since: Aug, 2012
There is no Planet B
#2224: Feb 7th 2019 at 7:35:10 AM

Impeded Messenger is very, very brief. Any ideas how to expand it?

HighCrate Since: Mar, 2015
#2225: Feb 15th 2019 at 8:20:59 AM

I'm about to start a long-term projects cleanup thread for Big Bad, which is suffering from epidemic levels of Zero Context Examples, as discussed in the ZCE Cleanup Thread.

However, I'm also noticing that the first paragraph of the trope description is a bit misleading, and I'd like to get that sorted out before cleanup begins.

The description says that "A Big Bad could be a character with Evil Plans or it could be an omnipresent situation, such as a comet heading towards the Earth."

I submit that this does not accurately reflect the way the trope is used. In practice, the term always refers to a character, a villain, and in fact the entire rest of the description proceeds as if this is the case.

The description goes on to say that "In a serial story, the Big Bad often exerts an effect across a number of episodes, and even an entire season. In a standalone cinematic story, their presence drives the plot."

I submit that expressing this as "often" the case is an understatement. In serial stories, it is in fact a requirement for a character to exert an effect across multiple episodes to count as a Big Bad. A villain who is introduced and defeated in a single episode of a serial story is a Villain of the Week.

I propose that the first paragraph be changed to the following:

The character who is the ultimate cause for all of the bad happenings in a story. The Big Bad may either be personally responsible for the events, or the biggest force in opposition of the hero's goals. In a serial story, the Big Bad exerts an effect across a Story Arc consisting of a number of episodes, up to and including one or more seasons or even an entire series. In a standalone cinematic story, their presence drives the plot.

Edited by HighCrate on Feb 15th 2019 at 8:25:26 AM


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