Name:Mai Taro
Age: 14
Gender: Female
Appearance: Short, light brown hair, and green eyes. She is of a slim build and of average height.
Magical Girl/Boy Costume and Staff Appearance: Mai wears an orange and red wrap style top with detached sleeves, and a simple orange skirt.
She carries a simple baton, which changes into various musical instruments that she uses to direct her magical attacks.
Personality: A Quiet yet friendly girl, who enjoys being with her family and friends. She carries an air of calm confidence, but despite this, she does sometimes have her doubts about herself and her abilities.She sometimes wishes she were like her more energetic classmates.
Brief History: Mai comes from a family of musicians. Her mother is a Famous Violinist, and her father is a composer. Mai's specialty is the flute, and she is part of the school band. Aside from her mother often traveling to perform, Mai's life has been fairly uneventful.
Transformation Trinket: A silver pin shaped like a musical note.
Abilities:
(This is What she starts with)
- Echoing Melody: Her baton turns into a trumpet and Mai plays it really loudly, causing shockwave damage.
- Pied Piper: Her weapon turns into a flute, and she plays a tune that turns the focus of an enemy towards her.
(and yes,she has the Required secondary Knowledge to be able to play these instruments, but only when transformed. )
edited 22nd Aug '11 2:41:12 PM by stargirl93
Gah, this took too long. Didn't help that I keep changing my idea for her during the creation process. >.< Anyways, I can't remember if we have any dark magical girl spots left, but if we don't I'll just leave her here for now anyways until another spot opens up.
- Name: Lily Glenn
- Age: 10
- Gender: Female
- Appearance: Lily is around average height for her age. She always has a bright smile on her face, and her long, wavy blonde hair accentuates this, making her look like a cheerful doll. Her eyes, however, are a cold blue, and lack the same spark that her smile does, betraying how she really feels inside. She regularly wears rather beautiful and intricately designed dresses, and wears a red silk ribbon in her hair.
- Dark Magical Girl/Boy Costume and Staff Appearance:
- Costume: A knee-length red dress, decorated with an intricate floral pattern in a darker red. She also wears a white hooded capelet with a lace trim, and a ruffled white dress blouse under her dress.
- Staff: Lily's staff is surprisingly plain and simple, and looks just like a conductor's baton with an (inverted) five-pointed star at the tip.
- Personality: Lily is generally rather cheerful, and loves meeting new people. She just wants to make friends with everyone, really. The problem is that she's a little... Forceful about it. She is very clingy to anyone she's marked out as her "friend", and is prone to taking somewhat drastic action when she believes they are paying more attention to others than they are to her. Her oddities don't stop there, as she acts like her dolls are real people, and constantly consults Alice for advice. She also has a habit of speaking predominantly in rhyme on occasion, although she does this far more when she's in her magical girl form.
- Brief History: Lily was born prematurely, and was very sickly and weak for the first few years of her life. Because of this, her overprotective parents shut her away and kept her from anything they felt was even remotely dangerous, even going as far as to hire private tutors so she didn't have to leave home for school. As such, she never really got to meet other kids and make friends. She was instead provided with a vast collection of dolls as some attempt to make up for this, but this just led her to become more and more disturbed as time went by. She started to treat her dolls just like they were real people, and soon began to carry about Alice, her favourite doll, everywhere she went. All Lily really wanted was to meet someone she could call a friend, but she's grown incredibly possessive and wants everyone to belong to her and her alone, just like her dolls.
- Transformation Trinket: Alice, her favourite doll. Alice is about ten inches tall and looks almost exactly like a miniature facsimile of Lily wearing a plain blue dress, and with a large blue bow in her hair. Her eyes seem to follow anyone who gets near her, in a rather creepy fashion.
- Abilities: Lily can bring dolls to life and make them follow her commands. The dolls aren't usually very smart, or strong, but her vast collection means that she usually has quantity to make up for lack of quality. Alice is notably different from the other dolls, showing the physical strength of an average adult male and a relatively advanced degree of autonomy compared to the others (she still can't talk and probably isn't sentient, but...). Lily is not limited to her own collection, and can bring to life any dolls, action figures or similar toys she comes across.
edited 22nd Aug '11 11:04:39 AM by Moerin
Dark Magical Girl
Name: Ash (no last name given he picked then name for herself)
Age: 18 and 2 months
Gender: female
Appearance: [[
Appearance]
Dark Magical girl Costume and Staff Appearance: staff
◊
Personality: sociopathic
, minor case of pyromania, charismatic as hell,
Brief History: sold to a brothel at the age of 10, the owner was highly protective of her and banned her from "contact" instead he was made to work tables as a waitress.when she was 13 she was attacked while the owner was away. This was when her powers activated, luckily most of the people got out with minor injurys and burns. A mage found her and trained her, but he was killed another Mage when she was 16. she also a talented singer and sings in a bar band. She is traumatized by the death of her "uncle".
made the character for easy gender change if it didnt work
Transformation Trinket: the red one
◊
Abilities: Pyrokinesis (the ability to create or to control fire with the mind), experet H 2 H combatent
edited 22nd Aug '11 2:12:43 PM by vanthebaron
Untitled Power Rangers StoryI point to nanoha for justification for Abuse As Backstory
without hte abuse i dont think shed be a DMG
edited 22nd Aug '11 1:52:14 PM by vanthebaron
Untitled Power Rangers Storyno but she was emotionally and physically abused and we don't even know if any sexually abuse took place in repressed memories
Untitled Power Rangers Story- Name: John "Jess" Bathory
- Age: 18
- Gender: Male
- Appearance: Jess is somewhat tall with red hair and green eyes. She has long hair which is usually worn in a ponytail. She generally dresses in jeans and a tee-shirt. She usually wears earrings and often paints her nails
- Dark Magical Girl/Boy Costume and Staff Appearance: A long flowing Elizabethan style dress. The dress is black with simple red patterns on it, and a white trim. The staff is a long gnarled wooden staff with red ribbons flowing from the top.
- Personality: Jess is filled with rage, and tends to lash out at people. She is a very loud person. Despite her rage, she is good-hearted, and filled with great sadness and loneliness. Her biggest dream is to be accepted, and loved, for who she is and to have friends. She also wants to meet back up with her sister eventually, and feels great regret about abandoning her.
- Brief History: John always knew that something wasn't right with his life, he just could never put his finger on what exactly it was. That is, until he hit puberty. With puberty came the realization that he wasn't happy, as a guy. In secret, he began to crossdress, stealing women's clothes from his sister and girl friends. However, that still didn't satisfy him, and, one day, he went to school in a skirt. Nothing was the same since.
He was quickly called to the principle's office and the principle admonished him for "unruly conduct" and sent him to the school counselor. The counselor, being the kind and respectful professional psychiatrist she was, attempted to cure him of the problem. When he refused to, and came to school in women's clothes, he got expelled, and the entire student body of his school applauded as he was escorted away. His family was little better. His father disowned him, and his mother stopped talking to him. Both of his brothers attempted to kidnap him and send him to a camp that would cleanse his soul and make him act like a "pure christian" again.
However, he got solace from his sister and his best friend (a girl) who helped him through his tough times. They helped him get the clothes he needed to dress as a women, and his friend (whose family was especially liberal for the area) let him stay in their house. Despite this, times were tough, and his friend's parents had to get extra jobs to support him, as they weren't making enough for two kids. He didn't find this out until his friends mom got fired and harassed for letting him stay, so he left. In anger and sadness, Jess fled her hometown seeking new horizons. After leaving his hometown, she left the area, even the country, and found her way to Japan (assuming that's where Sakurasaki city is) and there her rage grew inside her, and soon after her magical power came out. Seeking a place to take her anger out, she found her way to Sakurasaki.
- Transformation Trinket: A small statue of an Oni.
- Abilities:
- Endless Rage: Her rage wells up inside her, and she gains great physical strength and speed. This technique requires a lot of energy.
- Undying Rage: Wounds she get heal quickly. This technique requires a lot of energy.
Is this too dark? I know it shouldn't be too dark, but I carefully crafted this character to be the sort of character that starts as an antagonist, but, in true magical girl style, be eventually redeemed by the Power of Friendship, so I don't think it should be, but it feels darker than the rest.
edited 22nd Aug '11 1:55:17 PM by deathpigeon
Hmmm... that's a bit of a complicated character. If I'm reading this correctly, he/she is treated as a Dark Magical Girl, right? If so, accepted.
![]()
It's not just that, it's the whole backstory that's an issue. Mostly the setting.
Quite a good way to sum it up.
edited 22nd Aug '11 2:02:29 PM by AnnoR
"Oh, dear. The toad, the monkey, and the dog have all screwed up."-winces-
Okay Van, I'm going to pretend you didn't say that and just offer this bit of advice: What I think they're trying to tell you is that child prostitution (amongst others things in your sign-up, but none so jarringly) doesn't fit in the game's setting and tone. I'd advise looking over what you've got, and either trying to salvage what you have into something that works with the setting and tone, or just scrapping it and starting over from scratch.
![]()
Yes. Jess is a Dark Magical Girl. I made a Dark Magical Girl because I'm much better at writing dark, depressing, and tragic backstories. In fact, the current backstory is slightly toned down from my original, which involved her parents keeping her sister trapped in their house, and her being chased out by a lynch mod. That seemed a bit much, so I did away with it.
Hello there, I'll leave my (late) MG bio.
Note: Anno, there are changes from what you knew, make sure you read thoroughly before saying whether it passes or not.
Name: Sandra Salamanca Ikutsuki
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Appearance: slightly dark skinned, 5.5 feet in height, dark brown hair and eyes, hair is always tied up in a long ponytail
Magical Girl Appearance
-Costume: Boots and gauntlets of graphite-like material (black). Full body layer of “cloth” that looks and feels like aluminum. An overall that appears constructed from differently sized slabs of smooth concrete. Marble carved goggles. Ponytail is held together by a clay ring with quartz pieces
-Staff: handle appears made of brown clay, 2 lines of marble and 2 of quartz run from tip to tip. Each tip has the head of a sledgehammer (2, black) with grey triangles on each side.
Personality: Sandy tends to be rather shy and very perseverant, often focusing on any given task to the point of needing to be shaken out of whatever she is doing. In contrast, speak to her about art (sculpture), and she’ll change into a hyperactive Motor Mouth who’ll try to tell you her life story and aspirations as a future artist in as many as 5 minutes, if less. She is not a full tomboy, but will be the first one to jump into a fight, or better yet, a pool of mud; getting her hands (and body) dirty is bliss to this aspiring sculptor.
Brief History: Born in Japan but raised in Latin America (keeping this one ambiguous for now) Sandra was always that kid who played alone in the sandbox, or bunch of mud left by the rain the night before. It wasn’t that she didn’t want friends, but she already had the tendency to become obsessed with whatever she was doing, no matter how insignificant, even to the mind of any child like her. She has spent the last 7 years in Sakurasaki with her mother and harbors a great respect for the city, the monuments and ruins within it
Transformation Trinket: small pyrite stone covered in traces of cement and clay, worn as necklace
Abilities: Hammers are very resilient and heavy, especially to other people – to her they are light and easy to maneuver. They can graft any mineral onto themselves and grow in size quite a bit (cement, rock, clay, iron, etc). By smashing them onto a surface, Sandra can acquire limited manipulation of the material it is made of (low grade Dishing Out Dirt), so she can, for example, throw slabs of rock or create spikes.
She can produce a metal nail which, when impaled on any mineral mass big enough, can create an up to 5 feet tall golem construct as strong as she is, resilience is only dependent on the material it is made out of. This same nail is a magical conductor, this is: it can be charged by another magical source and give an according (elemental or other) boost to the golem construct it is impaled on. This must be done manually and with certain care, as hitting the nail with a magic blast is more likely to disrupt and destroy the golem itself.
That would be all for now <waiting mode engaged>
edited 22nd Aug '11 3:20:34 PM by Rareitor
OH GOD WHY AM I A CAR!? - Forzare

Name: Natsuki Tsukino
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Appearance: Natsuki is pretty, if a little bland. She has pale blue eyes, almost grey, and her dark hair is a dull black and reaches down past her shoulders. Her figure is slim, with long thin legs and a flat chest. However, she always smells very nice, using very expensive perfume.
Dark Magical Girl Costume and Staff Appearance: In clear contrast to her otherwise bland and monochrome appearance, her costume is a flurry of psychedelic colours that shift with every movement she makes. It consists of a long and haphazardly put-together dress made out of different pieces of clothing, and on her feet she wears only long stockings with a mandelbrot pattern. Her dark hair flutters in the air even when there is no wind, and countless of ribbons in all the colours of the rainbow are tied in it. Her complex and twisted staff seems to be made out of glass, and a rainbow gas fills it, swirling through bends, twists and strange loops.
Personality: Natsuki is a distant and absent-minded person, always in a world of her own. She wanders around all the time; sometimes she's in school, or most of the time she's wandering through the streets and alleys of the town. The teachers tend to ascribe her behaviour to what happened to her brother (see History), and as long as she gets average grades, they let it slide. But despite her absent-mindedness, she is not clumsy. Instead she walks with a strange kind of erratic, but graceful glide. She is always alone, but will gladly talk to people. However, they will usually give up as she leads the conversation all by herself and never listens to others. She seems obsessed with her vials of perfume and aromatic scents, and she wears a new scent every day.
Brief History: Natsuki is the third of four siblings, with two older sisters and a twin brother. Her parents had always wanted a son, and so Natsuki suffered in the shadow as her brother was adored and coddled with. Her two older sisters got the rest of the attention, as they were much better in school and other activities. But Natsuki managed to hold on, always working to improve herself in her parents' eyes.
But then...her brother died in an accident when he and Natsuki were ten. Her parents were devastated, and soon stopped caring. Her sisters were old enough to move out, and soon Natsuki was alone. All alone in a big house, while her parents started working later and later. Her allowance went to fuel her growing obsession with perfumes and scented oils, which let her forget the world around her. And then she lost herself in them.
Transformation Trinket: A crystal bottle of an indeterminable perfume.
Abilities: All of Natsuki's abilities depend on the vials of magical perfumes she carries under her dress, and she needs only open them to unleash them on her enemies. The bottles are refilled when she touches them with the staff.
Maze of Roses - This strong scent quickly spreads over a large area to create a blanket of gas that confuses the minds of her opponents. Their vision is scrambled and their thoughts muddled, and sometimes they think they hear things on the cusp of hearing.
Rapture - The liquid within these large crystal bottles fizz and sparkle with magical power, like bottled lightning. When the ornate atomizer nozzle is pressed, a sparkling dash of rainbow magic flies out to rain magical lasers wherever Natsuki points in short barrages.
Pour Moi - This strange green bottle is only meant for one recipent: Natsuki herself. When she dabs this fragrant oil on her neck, she is at once revitalized and finds new strength in its energizing smell. Her strength and speed is increased...but only for a while. Because once the scent fades, fatigue sets back in with a vengeance, and she is rendered powerless for a while until her magic staff can refill the bottle.
Mort Number Four - The black liquid within these tiny vials has a sweet scent, but conceals a dangerous threat. A poison laces the near-invisible droplets of vapour, and it enters the body through any way it can, be it through the skin or the air. Those that are affected will at first feel nothing, but then the poison will spread through the system and sap the victim's strength. After some time, they will faint and then after four days the person will die unless the poison is treated with the correct antidote, which Natsuki carries a vial of.
edited 20th Aug '11 2:12:57 PM by Lemurian
Join us in our quest to play all RPG video games! Moving on to disc 2 of Grandia!