So I'm almost done with the first draft of my story. Would any of my fellow writers like to read through it for me and give a little feedback? Writers only, obviously. And not disclosing what my story is is necessary.
"Proto-Indo-European makes the damnedest words related. It's great. It's the Kevin Bacon of etymology." ~Madrugada![]()
Sure I still ow you reading your past story (didn't forget, I will read it). I think you are a cool person so I would like to help
edited 9th Sep '11 5:35:10 PM by FallenLegend
Make your hearth shine through the darkest night; let it transform hate into kindness, evil into justice, and loneliness into love.Yay, thanks! (And I will feedback you too, Death, promise.) Still not done yet, but I'll PM y'alls when it is.
"Proto-Indo-European makes the damnedest words related. It's great. It's the Kevin Bacon of etymology." ~MadrugadaI can't figure out how to start my story, and the writer's block is killing me...
I am now known as Flyboy.Oh man, I hope I can finish my entry in time. My computer has just gone kaput. Luckily I foresaw this and backed up everything shortly before the kaputing, but getting typing time on the family computer (no, not that family computer) will be tough.
"Proto-Indo-European makes the damnedest words related. It's great. It's the Kevin Bacon of etymology." ~MadrugadaRewriting what I've got in order to deal with some problems. I'm currently trying something that I've never seen done before, and there's a decent chance it will be a disaster, but I'll give it my best shot.
That's Feo . . . He's a disgusting, mysoginistic, paedophilic asshat who moonlights as a shitty writer—Something AwfulAnd first draft done!
Now for feedback and tweaking.
"Proto-Indo-European makes the damnedest words related. It's great. It's the Kevin Bacon of etymology." ~MadrugadaSo much I want to tell and so little words we can use
. I have 2 thousand so far!.
I have read frezair's story and it's very cool I am sure it will be very well received!
edited 14th Sep '11 6:12:58 PM by FallenLegend
Make your hearth shine through the darkest night; let it transform hate into kindness, evil into justice, and loneliness into love.Just remember, lips sealed! Don't want to compromise judging and all.
"Proto-Indo-European makes the damnedest words related. It's great. It's the Kevin Bacon of etymology." ~MadrugadaIt doesn't matter which sentence, just write it.
I'm going for a certain style, and it's very difficult to emulate (what I think is) it...
I am now known as Flyboy.Just ask if a fellow contestant is willing to read. I did, and it's worked great for me so far.
"Proto-Indo-European makes the damnedest words related. It's great. It's the Kevin Bacon of etymology." ~Madrugada

Say, have an alternate history where magic is widely used. Halfway or two-thirds through, use "The House on Maple Street" from the Harris Burdick collection to turn it into sci-fi. Three themes right there. (You can use that, by the way; it's not my story).