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Soble Since: Dec, 2013
#6901: Mar 18th 2014 at 8:08:21 PM

So, anti-Edo Tensei? Naruto becomes a Soul Eater, or at least, a jar for one.

Man, why do all of the otherworldly beings end up getting stuck up inside this kid?

But yeah, provided the Shinigami doesn't teach Naruto how to perform the Rasenshuriken or cobble together some wonky Anti-Jutsu jutsu, I don't see a problem. I think the second option, with the Shinigami being channeled/summoned by Naruto, would be more dramatic.

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Ironypus from Australia Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Drift compatible
#6902: Mar 18th 2014 at 8:08:50 PM

That's funny because the Sage of Six Paths created souls, the one good deed I'll credit him, when he gave people chakra; if all the evidence pointing to Yin chakra being the soul is right. But it seems that he didn't make an afterlife for them to go to, which I'll grant would probably have been out of his power to do: Kakashi talking to his dad at the campfire is weak evidence since it's the only thing of it's type shown and none of the Edo zombies recall beyond the moment of their death.

Soble Since: Dec, 2013
#6903: Mar 18th 2014 at 8:14:20 PM

But if Yin chakra is the soul, then did no living human being possess a soul prior to the Sage's birth? And that means Kurama's soul was ripped out of him when Minato split and shoved him inside Naruto and not just torn in half...

Souls must be worse than copy paper in this universe.

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Ironypus from Australia Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Drift compatible
#6904: Mar 18th 2014 at 8:18:47 PM

Kagura, his mother, would have had one since she gained the chakra from the fruit. Maybe, but if I'm remembering right, Tailed Beast chakra works different to human chakra since it works off light and dark properties(analogous to yin and yang?), like when Naruto was making bijuu bombs which could imply that tailed beasts have two souls since both Kurama halves work fine autonomously.

Duncan0Idaho Since: Aug, 2012
#6905: Mar 18th 2014 at 8:34:14 PM

So, anti-Edo Tensei? Naruto becomes a Soul Eater, or at least, a jar for one. Man, why do all of the otherworldly beings end up getting stuck up inside this kid? But yeah, provided the Shinigami doesn't teach Naruto how to perform the Rasenshuriken or cobble together some wonky Anti-Jutsu jutsu, I don't see a problem. I think the second option, with the Shinigami being channeled/summoned by Naruto, would be more

something like that, he is not a soul eater, the rosary simply has the ability to summon the shinigami once the presence of an edo tensei jutsu is detected, the A and B from before is what happens to the poor idiot who dares to use the summon.

Naruto will still develop variants of the Rasen Shuriken thanks to me making sure that Sarutobi lives and goes with Naruto for that three year trip.

And as a side note god eaters burst hmm, could work for a different fic.

edited 18th Mar '14 8:35:40 PM by Duncan0Idaho

Hyp3rB14d3 Since: Jan, 2001
#6906: Mar 18th 2014 at 8:44:49 PM

The Hokage is going to abandon his village for 3 years?

lycropath Since: Mar, 2010 Relationship Status: I like big bots and I can not lie
#6907: Mar 18th 2014 at 9:28:22 PM

I think he means after Tsunade has become the new Hokage?

And I'm working on my story, keep an eye out for it if yo wanna read it [lol] although my skill with prose is rather rusty.

Duncan0Idaho Since: Aug, 2012
#6908: Mar 18th 2014 at 9:31:34 PM

The Hokage is going to abandon his village for 3 years?

No, @lycropath got it in one, Tsunade is the Godaime as in canon and Sarutobi retires from the position, he goes with Jiraiya to train Naruto and journey before he retires permanently.

I posted a few pages back one of the trainings i would have Naruto go and @Ironypus did some good comments on that.

Ironypus from Australia Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Drift compatible
Duncan0Idaho Since: Aug, 2012
#6910: Mar 18th 2014 at 9:39:28 PM

@Ironypus your comments basically were pointing out that for the method to work Naruto would have to physically experience smoking for long periods of time as to clear distinguish nicotine and the other components from the smoke he inhales from the cigarette.

I did counter argue shadow clones but i dropped the idea as 'begginers' trainer, in fact i mentioned that the idea came from a different one shot of the author one where Naruto using only wind chakra can turn any enemy rib cage onto a blender.

Hyp3rB14d3 Since: Jan, 2001
#6911: Mar 19th 2014 at 8:49:20 AM

You know what would be different? A fic where Naruto got nerfed instead of a power up. The only one I can think of off-hand is IANCE's fic Raijin, and it's pretty clear that that's only going to be a nerf in the short term.

Duncan0Idaho Since: Aug, 2012
#6912: Mar 19th 2014 at 9:05:33 AM

@Hyp3r there are a few out there, there is one where Naruto is unable to use chakra, at all, there is an other where Naruto got his chakra system damaged so badly that trying to mold chakra causes him a lot of pain and instead goes for the path of the sword play only.

Soble Since: Dec, 2013
#6913: Mar 19th 2014 at 9:21:21 AM

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There's Atlas, where Naruto can't mold chakra like Lee, or something like that.

edited 19th Mar '14 9:21:37 AM by Soble

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ScorpioRat from Houston, Texas Since: Jan, 2013 Relationship Status: Forming Voltron
#6914: Mar 19th 2014 at 9:54:31 AM

You know, I can't find a good Kiba-centric fanfiction anywhere. They're either shipping oriented or depressing or both or just a one-shot.

Hyp3rB14d3 Since: Jan, 2001
#6915: Mar 19th 2014 at 11:08:58 AM

Chapter 38: Exposed

The moment Sakura awoke, she quickly made up an excuse to get away from the others. She then proceeded to run deep into the woods to get out of earshot and duck into some bushes. As soon as she was safely hidden from sight and out of earshot, Sakura whipped out her communicator. She had to tell Ino! First Rita pulls an evil Power Ranger from somewhere and now this. With panicked desperation and despair warring in her heart, Sakura pressed one of the buttons on her communicator.

0o0o0

Kiba was in the middle of class. For some reason, ever since he'd started class back up after failing his genin exam, he hadn't been able to get away with anything. If he snuck out of class, Iruka would notice. If he painted eyes on his eyelids and tried to catch some sleep, Iruka would catch on. If he said he needed to use the bathroom and left to do something else, Iruka would capture him seconds after he started to move away from the bathroom. Even when he did things in other rooms, Iruka would somehow know. It was like Iruka had somehow gained the ability to see through walls. As a result, Kiba was now on rather thin ice. So for once, Kiba was actually pretending to pay attention and take notes, even though he had already heard this lecture before.

Abruptly, a series of beeps emitted from his communicator, followed immediately by the sound of Sakura yelling something incomprehensible. “INONEGI'SANEVILSPACEWITCH!”

Kiba dropped his pencil and looked down at his communicator in horror. He then looked back up to find Iruka standing in front of him.

“Oh wow,” said Iruka with fake cheer. “Is that a wrist-mounted two-way communicator? I've always wondered what it would be like to have one of those. And now I'll know!” Iruka held out his hand.

Kiba groaned in frustration and pressed the response button on the side of his communicator.

0o0o0

A moment passed before Sakura got a response. “Thanks for that, Sakura,” said Kiba's voice, heavy with sarcasm. “Thank you very much.”

“You can have it back tomorrow after class,” said Iruka in the background, and the line went silent.

Oops, thought Sakura. Let me try that again. Taking a calming breath, Sakura pressed the correct button on her communicator this time, then waited for a response instead of just shouting into her communicator again. She didn't have to wait long.

0o0o0

Ino groaned in frustration. She was so bored! When that pair of ninja wannabes had tried to assassinate her team's client by ambushing them from a puddle, she'd been excited about the prospect of being on an actual mission that wasn't just cheap labor for citizens of Konoha. But ever since Kurenai had genjutsu'd Zabuza into drowning himself upon their arrival, the mission had been a total bore.

Supposedly, Gato, the local psychopath who had taken over the town, had an army of mercenaries at his beck and call. But if he did, he certainly wasn't using them to kill Tazuna. Unfortunately, because he supposedly had them, someone needed to be watching Tazuna and his workers at all times. And unfortunately, because she'd made the mistake of teleporting in front of Shikamaru, she was now covering his shifts for the sake of providing him incentive to keep his mouth shut. And to top it all off, she'd left her copy of Icha Icha Paradise back at Konoha. So when her communicator beeped, it came almost as a relief.

“I read you, forehead,” said Ino. “What's up?”

“Ino! Negi's an evil space witch!”

Ino giggled, which quickly spread into full out laughter. It was just so random.

“Ino, I'm serious! That staff he always carries! It's actually a magic wand!”

“Sure, sure,” said Ino, obviously unconvinced. “Negi's an evil space witch on par with Rita and clearly I must abandon all romantic interest in him.” Ino snickered again. “Thanks forehead, I needed that. This stupid bridge mission is so monotonous that I thought I was going to lose my mind.”

“Ino, I swear this isn't an attempt to convince you not to pursue Negi anymore for the sake of making it easier for me to seduce him.”

“That's what you said the time you told me he was allergic to blonds.”

“Well I'm not lying this time!” Sakura said, realizing how unconvincing she sounded just after she said it.

“That's what you said when you told me he was having an illicit affair with the ramen guy. Sorry, but you need to try harder than that.” Ino shivered. Is it just me, or is it suddenly getting a lot colder?

“You've got to believe me! I saw it with my own eyes! Negi ran forward way faster than could possibly be natural, raised his magic wand, spoke an incantation, blew apart a jounin-level ninjutsu like it was nothing, and stripped Naruto and Ryouga naked!”

“Okay, I think I need some context here, because that sounds amazing.”

“Dammit Ino, this is serious! Look, just think for a moment. Rita showed up a year ago, right?”

“About 10 months, give or take,” Ino corrected. Where the heck's this fog coming from?

“And Negi only showed up 6 months and 3 days ago,” said Sakura.

“Yeah,” Ino replied. Her eyes narrowed in suspicion as the visibility around her began rapidly dropping.

“So it's not beyond the realm of possibility that Rita had something to do with Negi's arrival.”

“I guess not,” acknowledged Ino.

“Meanwhile, Negi, the supposed son of the famous mercenary Nagi the Thousand Master, shows up out of nowhere one day. Nobody's heard of him before, he goes from not knowing how to mold chakra to graduating the academy in six months flat, he coincidentally ends up on the same team as one of the power rangers, and the last place he was recorded as living at was burned to the ground 6 years ago.”

“Uh-huh,” said Ino, not really listening anymore. Looks like Gato had someone else in reserve after all. Better get closer to dumbass before he gets killed. “Sakura, I need to go.”

“I'm serious, Ino! I think Negi's a plant from Rita!”

“Okay, we'll talk about it later. Bye.” Ino promptly ended the transmission by turning off her communicator. Kurenai, Chouji, and Shikamaru still aren't back yet. And the next shift is supposed to be Shikamaru's, so I'm probably not getting backup. Should I morph? Ino seriously considered it for a moment. The fog was thick enough that she could probably get away with it, but the Power Rangers showing up out of nowhere this far from where they normally operated to save the day would raise questions. One Power Ranger showing up during Ino's shift while Ino disappeared, only to reappear after said ranger left would be basically screaming her secret identity to the world. Or at the very least to Shikamaru. Assuming he hadn't already figured it out. Eh, I'll stick to just using the Power Axe. If it turns out Gato hired another missing nin like Zabuza I'll reconsider, but if it's just another incompetent like the puddle brothers, I should be more than capable of handling this as is.

0o0o0

“Ino, wait! Ino! Ino, are you listening? Ino!” With a growl of frustration, Sakura lowered her communicator, only to immediately raise it again. Reaching for the button, Sakura suddenly froze.

Sakura took a moment to scan her surroundings, ensuring that she was alone. Unfortunately, she missed a very alarmed ermine scampering off after hearing far too much of her conversation with Ino for her liking. Taking a deep breath, Sakura pressed another button on her communicator.

Karnality Since: Feb, 2014 Relationship Status: Maxing my social links
#6916: Mar 19th 2014 at 10:11:58 PM

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I never really liked Kiba, he just seems like such a background or side character. He's basically Naruto-lite, arrogant and boastful but nowhere near as lazy or dumb. He also has a dog, that's about it. Something about him just screams "I'm not important!", I can't really put it into words. Not to mention his canon team comp is about as exciting as a paper bag, and the fandom is divided on how to write them most of the time.

Hyp3rB14d3 Since: Jan, 2001
#6917: Mar 20th 2014 at 12:42:30 AM

Kiba is essentially Naruto if he came from a living clan and wasn't a jinchuriki (and, as mentioned before, had a dog). He even knows how to make shadow clones. And, ironically, he canonically has the super senses that the fandom likes to give Naruto in fanfics. On top of that, Kiba makes a lot more use of ninja tools than the other characters, has claws, and actually does use the transformation technique offensively. This should be enough to make him a total badass. Instead, he gets no screen time and isn't particularly notable. So yeah.

IFwanderer use political terms to describe, not insult from Earth Since: Aug, 2013 Relationship Status: Wishfully thinking
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#6918: Mar 20th 2014 at 5:01:36 AM

@ [up] & [up][up] Am I the only one who finds that funny?

edited 20th Mar '14 5:02:24 AM by IFwanderer

1 2 We are what we pretend to be, so we must be careful about what we pretend to be. -KV
ScorpioRat from Houston, Texas Since: Jan, 2013 Relationship Status: Forming Voltron
#6919: Mar 20th 2014 at 5:23:18 AM

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That's only true because the plot loves shoving them aside and not expanding them like they totally deserve. Cough Shino Cough.

[up][up] I know, right? I want to know exactly how the Inuzuka clan works. How big are they? Do they fight for the right for leadership? How smart is Akamaru compared to people and summons?

[up]Aren't Alternate Character Interpretations fascinating?

edited 20th Mar '14 5:25:22 AM by ScorpioRat

Nitramy Evil-Smiting Umbrella from Antipolo City, PH Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
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#6920: Mar 20th 2014 at 6:01:07 AM

I'd like to think of Kiba as the consummate bro. He's from a pack-oriented clan, with all the good and bad traits that entails.

Hmm, fanfic idea: Kiba gets a bit serious earlier in life, and now has a fan club rivaling Sasuke's. The kicker? Most of those girls in his fan club are of his lowerclassmen.

A working title: "I Will Get Kiba-senpai To Notice Me!"

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IFwanderer use political terms to describe, not insult from Earth Since: Aug, 2013 Relationship Status: Wishfully thinking
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#6921: Mar 20th 2014 at 6:24:24 AM

[up][up]I mean, it's kinda funny how much do some authors project themselves into Naruto, and then turn around and bash Kiba they are more or less similar in characterization.

Kiba really needs some love, for all the talk about Shino being ignored, the one no one cares about is Kiba. I'm going to see if I can put him in the spotlight in one of my fics.

[up]Now I wanna see that.

edited 20th Mar '14 6:26:06 AM by IFwanderer

1 2 We are what we pretend to be, so we must be careful about what we pretend to be. -KV
Ironypus from Australia Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Drift compatible
Jigaboo pink from atop a hill Since: Jun, 2011
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#6923: Mar 20th 2014 at 7:05:35 AM

Isn't Kiba usually that guy who gets bashed alongside Sasuke, Sakura, and Kakashi?tongue

I did naht.
Nitramy Evil-Smiting Umbrella from Antipolo City, PH Since: Jan, 2001 Relationship Status: YOU'RE TEARING ME APART LISA
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#6924: Mar 20th 2014 at 7:51:36 AM

[up] I don't.

Would be a perfectly good waste of Character Development if I did.

(Oh, and that whole Team Seven bashing cliche? Turned it on its head neatly in one of my fics.)

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Ironypus from Australia Since: Nov, 2010 Relationship Status: Drift compatible
#6925: Mar 20th 2014 at 8:08:27 AM

Team seven bashed everyone else?


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