Yet again is not a really good fic, just going from what i read on tvtropes Naruto has no reason to be weak, basically he gets the gamebreaking ability to gather nature chakra as he walks so he has a nigh infinite nature chakra on his system which in turn allows him to spam rasenshurikens like nobodys business.
but somehow every opponent now is 1000x stronger than in canin making naruto's skills pointless as the OC's/Gods have to jump in and save the day.
ironically his FSN fic is miles better, until he added Assassin!kiritsugu who is OP as hell, he has an skill related to surpise attacks and it's absolutley broken, for every time you spring a trap and it connects it the damage goes up a rank, kiritsugu is a monster with modern weapons, basically most of his mines are E ranked in the scale, but trip one and it goes D which will trip an other and goes to C which will trip an other that will go to B rank and then A rank and EX rank, 6 servants cant stand a chance against him, this includes Herakles that is utterly broken (nothing beyond an A ranked attack will scratch him, oh and if you do he has a skill that makes him inmune to the same attack and he has 9 lives thanks to god hand and those lives? he can regenerate them every day)
edited 2nd Apr '14 11:20:10 AM by Duncan0Idaho
I liked Yet Again up to Tournament in Land of Iron (and where I learned about FS/N for which I'll be forever grateful to TF) after which my sympathy to Oogakari started to wane and I lost it completely after Iwa incident.
I've reread one time some chapters lately and I liked them much less than before, some were borderline annoying to me, I guess my taste have changed.
I read new T 2 R 2 chapters when they are released but I don't anticipate them at all. So far it managed me to dislike Oogakari even more alongside Konoha 9.
Power ranking at the bottom made me cringe a few times too.
FFD is better but I stopped reading it after... after.... ugh something, propably after TF introduced some Nasuverse's elements I wasn't familiar with.
@IANCE fun fact, herakles pales compared to Gilgamesh, the king of heroes and the oldest hero of all time, the son of a bitch has every item in existence and that will exist inside his gate of babylon, has a weapon named Ekindu that can paralyze anything with a divinity rank, the higher the rank, the harder it becomes to escape from ekindu, to top it off he has Ea the sword of truth, it's so fucking broken that if gilgamesh wanted it he could use the sword to destroy the entire galaxy.
The only silver lining is that gilgamesh is so arrogant that rareley uses Ea and if he does it's already too late.
But even he pales against EMIYA the guy has the ability to impose his inner world over our reality along that any sword he sees he can replicate (with some exceptions, Ea being the prime example as it was made before the idea of swords even existed and it's so alien that no one understands it) and can make them explode, did i mention that as long as he has MP he can create countless weapons?
"I've reread one time some chapters lately and I liked them much less than before, some were borderline annoying to me, I guess my taste have changed."
I know that feeling, one of the first fics I read was Students of the Snake. Going back to it, it is just so terrible I can't even believe it.
Also Duncan, I think IANCE knows who Gilgamesh is. If I recall, he has a fic where Naruto gets the Key of Babylon.
It's not so much 'Naruto gets the Key to Gilgamesh's vault' as it is 'Naruto becomes so incredibly full of himself that the universe just sort of rolls over and lets him have his way with it'.
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimariThat and most of his treasures. He did try to hit Saber!Shukaku with Enki. Didn't go well (same as in canon when he tried to hit Arthur with it. He got Excaliblasted in the face both times).
edited 2nd Apr '14 1:50:51 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimariThat sounds amazing, I may have to read it later.
I had an idea about Naruto and Pain making contracts with the world, gaining the Gate of Babylon and Unlimited Blade Works, respectively. Including plans to seal Manda in the Vault, as well as random other crap Canon!Naruto couldn't be bothered to deal with (test papers, some unfinished ramen, etc).
In completely unrelated news, I'm super bummed this Via Osmosis fic is apparently dead. It had some good ideas, the mixing of materia in Narutoverse is pretty interesting.
Naruto is Gilgamesh of Uruk (closest to CCC Gilgamesh in terms of personality), Sasuke is Prince Thief of Elfland ("It's an Uchiha council, they're all viziers, and they're all assholes.") and Sakura is Saotome Ranma of Parts Unknown (Including Team Gai as her wrecking crew slash harem).
The fic is called Three Jerks and a Scarecrow for a reason.
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimariI HATE flashback chapters, i find them annoying and filler, wind monk banishment updated and instead of miving foward the story, nay we are going flashback time! for several chapters, i assume so because the chapter title 'A tale of 7 tails pt 1' so at least 3 of those before whoever is subscribed to the story has the chance to know what is going to happen to Fuu (jinchuriki not yamanaka Fu) given that instead of accepting her darkness she keeps rejecting it and is consuming her, nor to forget what Naruto plans to do against Konoha due to what the village did to him his loyalties towards Konoha have withered.
Inb4 new host! Tsunade refuses because it was her who in part is responsible for the whole mess, so she feels indebted to Naruto, and gives two fucks about the village to a degree thanks to the less than pleasant attitude of the population (they threw a party after naruto was branded with ninjutsu sealing fuinjutsu)
Wait, isn't that the one where Tsunade somehow approves a permanent ninjutsu seal on Naruto, and approves of his banishment so Jiraiya can take him away 'quietly', and decides not to tell Naruto of this plan at all?
'Cause I think I've heard that before.
Of course, I've seen about a gazillion of that kind of fic, where Naruto winds up banished and everyone and their mother in Konoha is bashed like crazy.
I wonder if one can be written with the characters, particularly Danzo, in character. Danzo is usually the one 'pushing' for Naruto to be banished (Which is just insane), so there's a snag right there...
Wait, I got an idea:
Danzo, through subterfuge, manages to make Tsunade accidentally sign a document to hand over Naruto to Root, because Tsunade was being dumb and getting drunk on the job. In order to stop this from happening, the only course of action Tsunade thinks of is using her Hokage authority, only for Danzo to reveal that the documents she signed also state that the decision cannot be revoked by her, but only by her successor. So he gives her the ultimatum of handing over the Hokage position or Naruto.
Seeing no other course of action, she strips Naruto of his rank and duty, making him a civilian, only for Danzo to reveal that the second made legislation that states that a Jinchuuriki can't be a civilian unless circumstances absolutely force the issue, so Tsunade is forced to make circumstances that force the issue, which requires charging Naruto with a crime he technically didn't commit and sentencing him to exile (she accuses him of attempted murder of an ally, specifically, Sasuke, because nothing else is strong enough to beat Tobirama's legislation regarding Jinchuuriki. Tsunade hadn't labelled Sasuke as a deserter and thus when Naruto beat the shit out of him it was considered attempted murder of an ally, which she would've just ignored otherwise).
However, after the fact, she gets drunk again, because Tsunade, and forgets to tell Naruto. Or Jiraiya. Or anyone.
And then, if you've ever played Minority Report on the X Box, then you know that everybody runs.
So Naruto drops off the map and winds up spending the rest of his life as a civilian.
edited 2nd Apr '14 5:56:50 PM by IAmNotCreativeEnough
himitsu keisatsu seifu chokuzoku kokka hoanbu na no da himitsu keisatsu yami ni magireru supai katsudou torishimariNo. this one is where Tsunade gets drunk to the point of stupidity and signs a series of requests made by civilians to the Hokage and has his gen and nin sealed and gets kicked out of fire country with the backing of the fire lord authority.
Several things happen then it comes the battle of old uzushio, basically tweam 7, 8 and 9, plus Tenzo/Yamato, Tsunade and Jiraiya in the corner of Konoha jump in to kidnap naruto to drag him back to Konoha, when clearly naruto does not wishes to return and has a jinchuriki girlfriend (who has been insulted by Sakura at least twice, because Sasuke never left the pink haired ninja is still a fangirl like Ino) and the new wind lord is also his girlfriend.
Then Orochimaru joins the fray in hopes of capturing naruto to offer him to akatsuki so he is left alone to take over Sasuke's body and then Itachi and Kisame join the fray and Uzushio is anihilated.
I'm starting to get a plot bunny where a young Naruto finds a stash of the Jojo's Bizarre Adventure manga and will be heavily infulenced by them.
edited 2nd Apr '14 6:24:27 PM by HeirophantsFool
Super Robot! SUPER ROBOT! ◥▶◀◤ Also, if some of my posts don't make sense, please take note that I might lack sleeI got an idea to make sarutobi less of a pussy, on either fic there will be a couple of ninjas that thought it would be a cool idea to murder naruto, when he is a baby, ANBU captures them and Sarutobi orders inoichi to turn them into brain dead idiots in public as a way to explain to the whole population what will happen if you defy the Hokage's will.
And after much deliberation for dreamwalker the one who will be teaching naruto the shiki fuin will be an uchiha who used the sharingan to copy the hand seals, sarutobi after listening to that will order the massacre of all adult and teenage uchiha only leaving kids of 8 or less alive.

Kakashi's a jounin, and he could easily replace it whenever it broke or used a multilayered one.
...And I really don't want to write that scene again. Kakashi has that Sharingan hax genjutsu anyway.
edited 2nd Apr '14 7:55:29 AM by ScorpioRat